How to rewrite "Oh Xiang Xue" into a modern poem?

As follows:

Xiangxi River flows from far away,

It flows far away.

The sound of mallets increases year by year,

Year after year.

I don't know how many I beat,

A woman's youth.

The fragrant snow under the fragrant willow tree,

With the sound of the mallet falling,

Born to cry.

In this constant hammering,

Grow up laughing.

Bows and arrows are flying everywhere,

Cornus officinalis is yellow and yellow.

As a child like dandelion,

Slowly descending,

Xiang Xue has more and more dreams.

The little round mirror left by mom,

Often blush.

introduce

Modern poetry, also known as "vernacular poetry", can be traced back to the late Qing Dynasty, which is a kind of poetry. Compared with ancient poems, although they are all written for understanding things, they are generally informal in format and rhythm.

Modern poetry is free in form and rich in connotation. Image management is more important than rhetoric application, which completely breaks through the characteristics of ancient poetry "gentle and sincere, mourning without complaining", and puts more emphasis on free and open, straightforward statement and communication between "feeling and invisibility"