Modern poetry does not need punctuation. If this poem is original, it is better to change the content and express it in sections. Two dashes are enough. According to my experience in reading poems for many years, this poem should be titled and revised, and every punctuation mark in the middle is redundant.
My answer seems irrelevant, hehe, but it comes from the heart. Of course, if you must make a fuss about punctuation, you don't need to modify it.