Dream Childhood has no less than five lines of feelings about this modern poem. Poetry: How long is the road to dreams? I once asked the affectionate earth,

I feel this poem is very strange, as if it were a propositional poem: it suppressed the topic. You see, the first four sentences are about dreams, and the last four sentences are about childhood, which corresponds to dreamy childhood, but how can they be combined? This is a ... Secondly, how long is the road to dreams? This sentence is very poetic. You can ask "Earth" and "Sun". Their intentions are too ordinary, they do not express the author's unique feelings and experiences, nor do they reflect the vicissitudes of life portrayed in How Long is the Road to Dreams. These two sentences suddenly reduced the sense of vicissitudes to the superficial level. Thirdly, the three childhood metaphors are also vulgar, and poetry is taboo, especially this custom without any unique personality. The childhood in the last sentence is full of beautiful dreams, but it has no practical significance. It seems to be a summary for the sake of summary. In short, this is an immature poem with no real accumulation and feeling.