The original poem about winter 1. Poems describing winter should be original.
"Master of Furong Mountain in the Snow" Liu Tang Changqing
The setting sun is far away, the weather is cold and the house is poor. Chai Men hears dogs barking and returns on a snowy night.
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This poem, with an extremely concise pen, depicts a picture of a cold mountain staying, a tourist staying at dusk and a snowman as the material. Poetry is written in chronological order. The first sentence is about the feeling of tourists traveling on the mountain road at dusk, the second sentence is about what they saw at the boarding house, and the last two sentences are about what they heard at the boarding house after nightfall. Each poem constitutes an independent picture and is interrelated. There are pictures in the poem, but the feelings are seen outside.
At the beginning of the poem, the words "the setting sun is far away" are used to outline a picture of the twilight and the long mountain road. There is no clear description of the characters in the poem, but it makes readers feel that their people are ready to go, and their feelings are vividly on the paper. Here, it is a word "far" that points to a vivid picture and reveals a poetic scene. It gives people hints and imagination. From this word, the reader will naturally want to see someone marching on the mountain road at dusk, and infer his lonely and tired travel situation and his desire to stay. Next, the second sentence of the poem asks the reader to follow the pedestrian's line of sight, along this mountain road, and invest in the home for the night. The cold weather and poor house are the portrayal of this family. And the word "poor" should be the impression formed after seeing the hut from a distance to knocking at the door. Writing "sunset" before the previous sentence "Cangshan is far away" and writing "cold weather" before this sentence "Baijia is poor" are all ways to increase the level and weight of the poem. The long mountain road has made people feel that the road is far away, and it is even farther to see the sunset; The humble hut has made people feel poor, and it is even poorer in winter. Looking at the context, the word "cold weather" in this sentence also has its connecting link. Inheritance is to further render the color of sunset road; Revelation is the foreshadowing of a snowstorm at night.
These first two poems, which add up to only ten words, have already written the scenes of hiking and house. The last two poems, "Chai Men smells dogs barking, and returns to people in the snowy night", were written after he stayed in Shanjia. In terms of words, "Chai Men" is connected with "White House", "snow" is connected with "cold" and "night" is connected with "sunset". In this way, from the perspective of the whole poem, although the second half of the poem opens up another poetic realm, it is closely connected with the first half, so as not to make readers feel out of touch. But here, the cause has made a leap. It seems that since the "dog barks" at night, most travelers who are tired of hiking have already gone to bed; There should be something to describe from dusk to night, from cold invasion to snowstorm, from entering the hut to going to bed, but the pen skips this paragraph and omits some plots, making the poem particularly refined and more compact. The poet thought carefully between his choices. If this effort is not made, perhaps the second half of the poem should further describe the depression of people living in houses, write about the desolation of mountain houses and the silence of the environment, or write about the coming of snow at night. Otherwise, you can also write about your own travel and your thoughts after staying overnight. But the poet put these things aside and didn't write. Unexpectedly, he saw a noisy dog barking in the silence. This shows the change of scale, giving people the feeling that a strange peak suddenly appeared on the flat ground.
As far as writing is concerned, the first half of a poem is written according to what you see and hear, and the second half is written according to what you hear and hear. Because, since the night has come and people have gone to bed, it is impossible to write what they have seen and heard, but only what they have heard and heard. The sentence "Chai Men" should be written in the dark and heard on the couch in the hospital; The word "snowstorm" should not be seen, but heard, because I heard all kinds of voices and knew that someone had come back in the snowstorm. I only wrote "Smell the dog barking" here, probably because it was the first sound to break the still night, and it was also the first sound I heard, but what I actually heard was not only the dog barking, but also the sound of Melissa Zhou, knocking at the door, the sound of Chai Men's switch, the sound of family members' response, and so on. These sounds are intertwined. Although the person who spent the night was not in the hospital and had never seen it, it was enough to conceive the picture of returning from the snowstorm from this noisy sound.
When the poem was written here, its meaning was not extended and it came to an abrupt end. It didn't take long to explain the feelings of people who listened to these voices and conceived this picture. However, the feeling of desolation in the mountains revealed from it is self-evident that it triggers the feelings of travelers in the quiet night.
2. Describe the original snow poem
The snow in Mei Xu Xun is three points white, but the snow has lost a kind of plum fragrance. (Lu Meipo)
Snow is like plum blossom, and plum blossom is like snow, which is both strange and beautiful. (Lv Benzhong)
There are some plums in the corner, and cold ling opens them alone; I knew from a distance that it wasn't snow, because there was a smell coming. (Wang Anshi)
These three poems skillfully use snow and plum blossoms to describe each other from the aspects of color, season and the hope that they give people that spring has come. We can also learn from the author's method, and write many related things in nature concretely and realistically through our own reasonable imagination and the method of reflecting the village.
2, just look at the ridge head like a cover, and it has been shocked that the rocks are like snow;
Thousands of bamboo shoots, thousands of jade, thousands of trees and thousands of clouds. (Yuan Zhen)
The first half of these two poems describes the typical snow scene in the north, and "it is a typical bad weather of staying indoors with no birds in a hundred mountains and no footprints in a thousand paths". But in the second half of the poem, the feelings expressed by the author through natural scenery are positive. Through' thousands of jade, ten thousand clouds and lovely branches', the author makes the winter in the north warm and affectionate, instead of being brutally killed by snow. The author expressed his passion for nature and life concretely and appropriately. From this, we can draw a conclusion that the description of natural scenery must be combined with our rich psychological world in order to be truly touching.
Six flying flowers came into the room and sat watching the bamboo turn into lovely branches. (Gao qi)
I haven't seen you in the winding mountain road, leaving only a row of horseshoe prints. (Cen Can)
Suddenly, like a night wind blowing, like a pear tree in bloom. (Cen Can)
Where is the hometown of Qinling Mountains? Snow blocked the blue horse. (Han Yu)
It's snowing outside, Qian Shan is green, and the riverside in February is in full bloom. (Ouyang Xiu)
Snow and spring, which we are most familiar with in many poems about snow. These poems express the author's full enthusiasm and optimistic outlook on life. The author provides us with a colorful picture of spring with poetry, reminding us of the beauty of spring, which is the enlightenment of literary works to people's thoughts.
4. The snowflakes on the swallows were as big as seats and blew off the Xuanyuan terrace.
It is cold and snowy in Whitestorm. (Li Bai)
This is a poem written by Li Bai that directly describes the big snowflake, and we can directly quote it to describe the snow. We should learn the poet's creative quality through careful observation and image portrayal.
5, the war retreated Yulong 3 million, black and blue all over the sky. (Made in Bird)
This is the author's bold imagination, writing snow as a dragon forest floating down from a fierce battle in the sky, giving snow a chivalrous character. When the environmental atmosphere and psychological feelings suit it, you can quote this unique poem.
3. I am anxious for an ancient poem describing winter.
Du Fu's quatrain describing winter-two orioles singing green willows and a line of dew rising to heaven.
My window framed the snow-covered western hills. My door often says "goodbye" to the eastbound ships. Jiang Xue-Liu Zongyuan has no birds in the mountains and no footprints in the thousands of roads.
A boat on the river, a fisherman wearing his webworm moth; Fishing alone is not afraid of snow and ice. Plum blossoms-Wang Anshi counted the plum blossoms in the corner, and hanling opened them alone.
From a distance, it is not snow that has a faint fragrance to describe winter poems. Every time it snows, Liu Zongyuan, the owner of Furong Mountain, is far away from the mountain, and all the birds on the mountain fly away. The weather is cold and the White Family is poor. A thousand roads without footprints.
Chai Men heard the dog barking, and the lonely boat withered, and people returned on a snowy night. An old man was fishing in the cold river snow.
It's raining and snowing, so I can see it is disappearing: the appearance of snow; Speaking of which, it is still "gone with the wind". Hey; The heat of the sun.
Yue: Auxiliary words have no substantive meaning. "The Book of Songs Xiaoya Jiaogong" The cold wind destroyed trees and caused severe frost. Lan Han Yuefu's ancient poem "Ancient Poems for Jiao Zhongqing's Wife" was sad at the end of the year, and it was snowing in the sun.
There is no hope in my ears, but clean sadness in my eyes: cold and cold. Mimi: Dark.
H: a little less. Objective: what that eye can see.
Hao: White. Tao Jin Yuanming's "Written in mid-December of Guimao Year, Respecting from My Brother" can be simulated, but if catkins rise with the wind, Xie Daowen's "Poetry on Snow": "What is snow like? The air difference of salting can be simulated, but if the catkins rise with the wind. "
The moon shines on the snow, and the north wind is strong: the north wind. Strengths: violence.
Sadness: biting. Xie Lingyun in the Southern Song Dynasty, "When the wind blows, it snows everywhere: the window.
Wind scares bamboo: Snow in the wind hits bamboo, making a rustling sound. Wang Tangwei's Winter Night's Story of Hu Jushi's Home is unknown. It is suspected that the court opened last night: the snow fell in the courtyard.
Tang Song Wenzhi's Snow in the Garden Should Be Made was swallowed up by the sound of water and ice, but the sand road was covered with snow. Liu Tang Changqing's "Appreciating Zhang Xia's Bitterness and Cold Work on the Way Back to the State on a Snowy Night" has a clear path and snow peaks. Tang Li Bai's Winter Returning to the Old Mountain is white and cold, and snowflakes are as big as hands. Tang Li Bai's satirizing Wang Liyang's refusal to drink Yanshan snowflakes were as big as seats and blew down Xuanyuantai. Tang Li Bai's "Popular North" is full of clouds at dusk, and the snow dance is empty: the wind is swaying.
First frost in Dufu's "Making Snow" in Tang Dynasty is in rags, so he can't point it directly: his fingers are stiff. Tang Du Fu's "Singing 500 Words from Beijing to Fengxian": Clouds and gulls dance more, geese fly against the wind, and there is no line: there is no line.
Tang Du Fu's "Sending Grandson Home in Winter" is short in cold weather, calm in wind and waves, and light in clouds. Tang Du Fu's "Nostalgia in Gongan County" scattered on the bamboo, and the snow scattered in the mountains. Tang Han's "Chu's main office meeting is over, and the money is spent." (One in Zhang Jishi) Who will carve the snow on the ground? Who will cut the snow on the flat ground into this smallpox? "
There are no birds flying over those mountains, and there are no traces of people in those paths. A boat on the river, a fisherman wearing his webworm moth; Fishing alone is not afraid of snow and ice.
Don Liu Zongyuan's Jiang Xue won't be killed in winter, so why kill it in spring? It's harsh and bleak. Tang Luwen's "Germinating Pujinguan River Zuo Ting" is cold and blue, and the north wind is called withered mulberry.
Thick ice without crack, short day cold light: the wind is like a roar. Meng Jiao's "Song of Bitterness and Cold" only saw the dark clouds on the ridge and the rocks falling like snow, which was shocking.
Thousands of peaks have thousands of Yushu trees and thousands of pines. When Tang Yuanzhen's "South Qin Xue" entered the room, I sat and watched the bamboo turn into six branches: the snowflake was hexagonal, so it was called "six out". Qiongzhi: Bamboo branches are covered with snow like white jade.
Tang Gao's "Welcome to Snow" knows that the night snow is heavy and the bamboo is broken. Tang Bai Juyi's "Night Snow" says: "I am shocked by the cold and see the window bright. I know it snows heavily at night, and I hear the sound of bamboo folding. "
Spinning the bead curtain over the powder wall is lighter than catkin and heavier than frost. Tang Li Shangyin's "Two Songs on Snow" all the springs are frozen, and I sing it more bitter when I am cold: the springs are blocked because of freezing, because they are described as sobs.
Yin: Singing. Liu Tang Jia's Ode to Bitterness and Cold: "I sing cold more seriously when the spring is frozen and swallowed.
Leaning against Qiao Song in the middle of the night, I felt covered with snow. "Three million jade dragon, broken bones flying. Yulong: Describe flying snow.
Broken scales: describe snowflakes flying, such as scales falling one after another. Song Huzai's last episode, Tiaoxi Fishing in Conghua, quoted Bird's poem "Snow" from Xiqing Poetry Talk, which is not thousands of miles away and selfless in the world: Yu.
Huang Yuan Geng's "Snow" stream is not suitable for snow, and the mountains are not frozen clearly. Hong Sheng's Looking at the Snow.