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Do you expect clouds that day?
That's why the steps are light.
So as not to disturb our time.
Because there are only a few.
The wind is blowing white clouds.
Where have you been?
When I think of you
oh
Look up and smile
Do you know that?/You know what?
The above sentences lack the plot artistic conception between paragraphs and are completely incomprehensible. In addition, the lyricist is a complete layman, who doesn't understand cadence, and one of them is uncomfortable to hear where you have been! The original words are good, windy and fluent, and at the same time, they write a poetic picture of a girl rocking a boat on the water, with mountains and green waters facing the wind. Note that the word wind used a floating word, which is really amazing. It not only describes the girl's desire to find a lover, but also describes the dynamic movement of the boat swaying forward. Such a good classic was completely destroyed by an idiot lyricist, and it is also popular all over the world! That's ridiculous! What is poetry? There is a song in the poem, and there is a poem in the song! The lyricist doesn't understand the rules of poetry creation at all, but only piles up some subtle feelings, such as light footsteps, disturbing time, and even doesn't understand words and sentences! Anyone with a little knowledge of Chinese studies will be disgusted with this kind of writing rubbish. Why can literary and artistic works before the Cultural Revolution become classics? Because artists at that time were not as impetuous as these artists now, and they didn't just create for money. Now, who of these people is not for the money? What good things can you write?
This good song is full of ugly words, and at the same time, the originally cheerful tune is half a beat slow, where it groans and makes a disgusting moan. Rene Liu defiled this classic among many fans in China, just like turning the sad and beautiful song "Mary in memory of her old friend" into a pig's howl, which makes people sick.
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Do you expect clouds that day?
That's why the steps are light.
So as not to disturb our time.
Because there are only a few.
The wind is blowing white clouds.
Where have you been?
When I think of you
oh
Look up and smile
Do you know that?/You know what?
The above reply doesn't seem to discuss the contents of the Rene Liu version too much. I would like to add a few words here. Let's analyze the lyrics of this song word for word. Fortunately, this song is only a few words, and it was written soon:
Do you expect clouds that day?
What does this sentence mean? Clouds are predictable? The word "unexpected" is used strangely, because it brings out a static cloud instead of a dynamic image in the lyrics. The object of the word unexpected should have some dynamic nature. For example, we can say: Did you expect the flood that day? Please note that although flood and cloud are nouns, there is nothing in the action involved. In this case, this is a logical and grammatical error. This kind of ill sentence can be avoided by high school Chinese students.
That's why the steps are light.
You think there will be a sentence behind the cloud. Although you usually refer to the object of being confided in modern poetry, you can't use it casually. It is true that the speed of speech is very light, but prepositions are used improperly and there is no causal relationship between contexts. If analyzed from the artistic conception, this kind of light footsteps is overused and obviously unintelligible, giving people the feeling that there is no background, no reference and no purpose. This sentence is obviously meaningless, and even the abstract word is not enough to cover up the poor thinking of the lyricist.
So as not to disturb our time.
Did you return to the hotel corridor after the spacewalk? Didn't you see it hanging outside the room? Do not disturb? Of course, hurried footsteps may disturb some secret behaviors, but it is meaningless to disturb time lightly. Excuse me, there is another word to follow! The use of this word makes the lyricist retrogress to the level of junior high school education. The last two sentences misuse two prepositions, one is so and the other is to. Isn't this an obvious mockery of our language ability? I mean, that's what I said. Why?
Because there are only a few.
Destined to be so few. What? I used it wrong in front, so I ruined it this time because? What does this mean? Destined to be less because? I don't know what to say and play abstract. Abstraction is a description of the state after the figuration is removed, and its ontology is an existing thing or image after all. Abstraction for the sake of abstraction? Do you know that?/You know what? I really don't know what is destined to be so few!
The wind is blowing white clouds.
There is nothing wrong with this sentence, but it is very common, just like drinking boiled water. Since it is a song, it can't be written in vernacular. This sentence, the level of primary school education.
Where have you been?
This sentence has regressed to the level of illiteracy without going to school. You can say, have you eaten? Where have you been? Didn't you see the wind blow the clouds away? Where have you been? Time is scared away by you, and you disappear? This sentence is rated as illiterate because it is the most rubbish sentence in the whole song. No rhyme, the original song is set for the latter verb, that is, gone with the wind, which can be sung for a long time. Here is a word, which is too weak to speak loudly. How can people sing? Finally, there can only be a faint moan.
When I think of you
Plain water. Not worth commenting on.
Look up and smile
This joke is coming again, just like the reply of a netizen in front. The mouth grows on the head instead of the face. Of course, the mouth grows on the head. Oh, why so funny? That's because a smile is part of an expression, and it's a close-up. Idiot lyricist just moves his mouth awkwardly, from under his face and nose to his head, surrounded by a hair and smiling at you. Don't you think it's funny!
I laughed my ass off, you know!