Thousands of teachers and students gathered in the school that afternoon. With the loud voice of the chairman on the rostrum, "the game officially begins!" It kicked off the "Thousand People Writing Competition".
Soothing music flowed in every corner of the auditorium, and every classmate tried his best, biting his lips and writing in a row. . The judges on the side are not idle. They stepped down from the rostrum and carefully watched the students use pens, use pens and collect pens, nodding and smiling frequently.
At this time, the wonderful notes gradually calmed my inner anxiety, and I also held the pen tightly and wrote it carefully on the competition paper, and a lot of sweat had seeped from my palm unconsciously. I just keep reminding myself in my mind that "write slowly, don't worry, you must be the best". Finally, I shook my sore arm, gave a long sigh, studied for a while, and handed the contest paper to the teacher with confidence.
Although I handed in my competition paper, I was not relaxed at all, but even more nervous. As I sat uneasily, I imagined that the guest judges on the stage were looking at our handwriting page by page. What will they say about my calligraphy?
It seems that after a long time, finally, the host, Professor Zhao, took the award-winning list to the podium. I couldn't help sitting up straight and pricked up my ears. "The list of students who won the second prize is announced as follows." Zhao's joyful voice sounded. ".................................................................................................................................................." may be on the list of the first prize! "I can't help but think so. The voice of xu teacher, the host of "The students who won the first prize are announced below", rang again. " ... "the list of the first prize has also been written, but I have never heard my familiar name again." I was so disappointed that I couldn't help thinking: Have my usual diligent practice been in vain? I bowed my head sadly.
At this moment, I suddenly heard Zhao say happily: "Let's invite the students who won the special prize to take the stage to receive the prize ... Wang, grade 63." .. "I was suddenly surprised, subconsciously stood up, at a loss. The classmates around me looked at me with envy. I don't care about anything, and I ran to the podium happily, but my heart was like knocking over a five-flavored bottle, which was bittersweet.
I can't be calm for a long time with a certificate of merit. Looking at the dark classmates in the audience, I suddenly felt like crying: "No pains, no gains, as long as you work hard, there will be sweet fruits!" "
The competition has passed, and the awards are treasured in my bookcase, but I know that whether it is success or failure, everything belongs to the past. Let me start over and create a new future!
2. Description of the scene of the award ceremony, 300 words. Today is May 3 1, and tomorrow is June1-International Children's Day, which is also my holiday. In order to welcome this festival, the school held an award ceremony for the scholarly family.
This day is a memorable day for me. Because I was named the representative of scholarly family, the school invited the city leaders to hold a grand award ceremony. Half an hour before the award ceremony, my mother and I came to the venue.
Originally, the award ceremony was the first program, but it came to the end for other reasons. At 9 o'clock in the morning, the award ceremony began with passionate music and drums. First, the outstanding young pioneers put bright red scarves on the city leaders, and then the principal gave a welcome speech. Finally, the exciting moment has arrived, and it is our turn to go on stage. My heart is pounding like a rabbit. My mother took my little hand and walked to the podium with a smile. The city leaders shook hands with her very kindly, and I greeted her politely. Then my mother took the prize presented by the city leaders-My Gym Trilis's reading manual. I also saw the above two sentences: "You may have unlimited wealth, boxes of jewels and cabinets of gold. But you will never be richer than me-I have a mother who reads to me. " Naturally, we turned to the teachers, parents and classmates in the audience and looked at the envious eyes of the classmates. I was particularly excited and walked off the stage with joy.
Holding a thick book, I ran to the classroom quickly.
I am a famous bookworm, of course I like books, and I can't bear to open them when I hold them. I am happy to dance. As the saying goes, "Plum blossoms come from bitter cold." "Without freezing, plum blossoms will smell delicious." This is all thanks to my mother, who told me stories from the time I started learning English and cultivated my good habit of reading. Of course, I want to thank my teacher, who pushed me onto this podium and gave me a stage to show myself; Thanks to the leadership of the school, it is the school that gave me this opportunity to board the podium. I will work harder in the future and will not live up to my mother's expectations, teachers' hopes and school's encouragement.
The award ceremony of the school reading festival will be held this Friday afternoon. This activity is mainly held for scholarly teachers, scholarly classrooms and scholarly teenagers. Other programs are set for them. Although I am a supporting role in the program, I am busier than the protagonist.
In this program, the teacher recited poems, and two other students and I played guzheng to accompany them. I was both excited and nervous when I learned the news.
I am studying the music of Grade 7 of the Central Conservatory of Music, but this time the accompaniment music is Fishing Boat Singing Late, which is the music of Grade 4 of the Central Conservatory of Music I learned two years ago. Although I have learned it, I have forgotten it for a long time. The teacher asked us to practice at home first, recite the music, and then rehearse at the guzheng teacher's house. After rehearsing twice, I went to the multi-function hall of the school for a rehearsal last Sunday morning. My mother moved the piano to school and carried it to the multi-function hall on the fifth floor with me. Then we rehearsed for the second time. Before class, we were called by the teacher to rehearse. The third rehearsal was held in Lucheng Cultural Center. Due to many programs, it starts at 1 pm and ends at 5 pm.
The official performance will begin this Friday afternoon. We put on beautiful cheongsam, and we were not nervous at all, because we were fully prepared. When the previous program was still playing, we put our piano on the lifting platform and sat down. When we heard the announcer reporting to our program, the staff slowly lifted the lifting platform. I've only seen it on TV before, but now I've finally experienced it myself. How wonderful and thrilling it was. Colorful bubbles floated with our elegant and beautiful music, the teacher's book fell with our rhythm, and the applause of classmates and teachers sounded. . We are so excited.
After the performance, although I missed a few classes, I realized the joy of studying after class.
3. Write 200 words on the podium of the Great Forest Games. The morning sunshine illuminates the beautiful forest, and a new day begins again.
On this day, three forest athletes came from a beautiful river, a meadow and a big tree. They are the white rabbits in the swimming class, the yellow ducks in the track and field team, and Pippi, the little fur monkey in the light class. Yesterday, they received a letter from the lion king of the forest, saying that the sports forest will hold the annual "forest sports meeting" with the strength forest. The main events are swimming, track and field and the newly launched event-light jump, so please ask them to prepare for the competition. Although long-distance running is white people's specialty and swimming is Huang Huang's strong point, the Lion King demands creativity, so they have a great role exchange. No, Huang Huang got ready for exercise and began to run on the vast grass. Pippi was lucky enough to fly into the air with his feet. One moment hovering on the river, the other hanging on the tree, so happy! Be prepared in vain, take a deep breath and plunge into the cool water. Although long legs run fast on the grass in vain, she is useless in the water. I saw her paddle as hard as she could, but she couldn't paddle a few steps for a long time. Just as she swam across the dangerous water grass area, she accidentally tripped over a long water grass, and no matter how hard she struggled, it was of no help. She had to shout, "Help! Help! " This shout doesn't matter, alas! As soon as she spoke, several bitter rivers poured into her mouth. It tastes delicious! Pippi and Huang Huang heard the cry for help and immediately looked inside. Something bad happened! Look! The river has already flooded the white head, leaving only her two long ears. At that critical moment, time seemed to freeze. At this time, Pippi was quick of eye and load, and immediately dived to the river, dragging Bai Bai out of the river. By the time Huang Huang waddled to the river, Pippi had saved the white space from danger. This time, Pippi and Huang Huang came to a division of labor. Pippi went to the animal supermarket to eat and drink for nothing, so Huang Huang had to stay on the edge of the grass and drain in vain. At dusk, I finally opened my eyes in vain: "Thank you … thank you! Thank you for saving me! " Pippi and Huang Huang said in unison, "What are you thankful for? We are already good friends. Come on, have something to eat. When you are ready, we will treat you to' Kende Grass'. "
The sun was about to set, and three good friends parted reluctantly.
4. Who will I award the primary school composition "I give awards to my mother"?
Before the Spring Festival, when I was sorting out the bookcase, I accidentally turned to a certificate of "learning activist". Looking at this award, I can't help thinking of my mother, who helps me with my homework after taking care of this family every day. It's really hard! I'll give my mother a certificate, too!
Thinking of this, I couldn't wait to find many watercolor pens and a piece of paper at once. I first wrote the four characters "excellent mother" seriously on the paper, and then carefully painted them with watercolor pens of different colors. Unexpectedly, those four words suddenly became much more beautiful. It's time to write the acceptance speech next. What should I write? This is, in front of my eyes, there are many pictures of mothers who usually care about me, so I immediately picked up a pen and wrote: "Mom, during this year, your care and performance for me were very good, and you were rated as an excellent mother." Issue this certificate as an encouragement. "Then, I drew some love beside the words with a red marker to show that I love my mother very much. Right below the certificate, I specially drew a carnation in bud and painted it pink to show my concern and strong growth in my mother. Finally, I drew an S-shaped border, that's all.
In the evening, I solemnly gave this certificate to my mother, and my mother cried happily. In a flash, my mother hugged me tightly in her arms.
5. Write an article about this award. As the saying goes, "A clever woman can't cook without rice." It is impossible to write an excellent composition in the college entrance examination room, so that the marking teacher can shine at the moment and build a car behind closed doors. Thick accumulation and thin hair can only make thin hair, and extensive absorption can make practice perfect. But for senior three students, time is the biggest stumbling block. Only by using the short extracurricular reading time on the cutting edge can we get twice the result with half the effort. The author found that in recent years, many students have directly or indirectly quoted the winning words of Touching China, vivid examples, beautiful and concise language, and close to the connotation of the times, which makes the article more brilliant. For example, there is such a passage in a perfect composition of Hubei college entrance examination in 2005:
"A famous person is a strong person, so he can't be selfish. He died of national disaster and sudden death. " -Ren Changxia, another heroine in the Central Plains, is conscientious and hard-working. To her surprise, she is fair and honest, helps the poor, and cares about the interests of the people. She is "different", sweeps away evil, makes selfless dedication, and wholeheartedly joins others for the people. She cares for everyone who is in trouble wholeheartedly and makes the flowers of great dedication bloom in everyone's heart. Beyond yourself, be strict with yourself, be lenient with others, and not seek personal gain for your family. Ren Changxia knows what she knows, and she will never forget: she is gone, ten miles long, and a hundred flowers are better than snow. She is like a cloud, where people's hearts are in love and wearing. Yes! It is because she has the most sincere respect for the people that the people sing elegies and praise them.
Obviously, many contents in this beautiful passage are directly quoted or applied from Ren Changxia's acceptance speech.
Ren Changxia's acceptance speech: "She is another heroine in the Central Plains. Eliminate evil. Apart from violence and peace, she is selfless; Be caring and attentive, help the poor, her heart is full of changes. Ten-mile long street, glistening is better than snow, holding clouds, which is a monument flowing in people's hearts! The reason why a weak woman can win the love of the people is because she has the most sincere respect for the people! "
6. How to write a composition about the class award ceremony (due to time, I can't give you the whole article, please forgive me. I'm making it up now, not online) at the beginning: you can write about the scenery, get to the point, or come straight to the point. Today, our class held an award ceremony.
Chinese: Write about the award ceremony first. What's everyone's state? You can insert some action descriptions and rhetorical devices to make the writing vivid and easy to get high marks. Rewrite procedure 1. If you are on the podium, you should make a speech, which is also the key to the number of words. You can write about my feelings. Of course, in the end, I still want to thank the teachers and the people who helped you (with great emotion). 2. If you are not on the podium, just say that you need to work harder or something, and then make a sharp contrast with the students who took the stage to receive the award.
The ending can take care of the beginning, that is to say, write something similar to the beginning. Or you can write down your feelings.
All right, that's it for the outline. If you are satisfied, please adopt (complete self-control).
Don't ask me why I know so clearly. . . Me. . . Listen to others!
7. Write some short sentences about the behavior of the characters on the podium. When I stepped onto the platform, my face turned red and white.
My hands are shaking with nervousness. Walking to the center of the podium, I dare not look directly at the audience and stare at my toes. My clothes are all wet and there are many small drops of water on my head.
The silence in the audience made me nervous for a few minutes. The upper lip bites the lower lip and the cheeks turn red.
Sweat ran down my neck, my hands unconsciously intertwined and groped for my clothes. I feel my blood boiling, and it instantly stimulates every nerve. Gradually, I felt nervous and lost consciousness.
I was informed today that Sun Heyuan won the first prize in the national composition contest and will present the prize tomorrow. At this time, I am having a Chinese class, my arm is leaning on the table, and I am thinking about what beautiful clothes to wear tomorrow.
You can't wear Cinderella clothes, at least wear a princess dress! You can't have long hair tomorrow, it's not solemn, that's all. More elegant. You can't wear sneakers, you should wear high heels! Tomorrow, I will be a little celebrity and the most beautiful student in China.
Haha, I am in the city hall, sitting in the first row, and I am the first to arrive. I was so excited that I almost cried when I was called, but I pretended to be calm and walked onto the platform with my head held high.
I stood on the stage, holding the trophy, and the audience under the stage cast envious eyes. I stood on one side of the stage and the audience looked at the stage. I almost fell into the honey pot.
"Sun Heyuan!" The Chinese teacher shouted. I was awakened. "Although you won the first prize of the national composition, you still can't help taking classes!" I didn't listen to a word the teacher said. After class, the students said to me, "You are so proud." Instructor: Kong Fanqi = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = =. Profound psychological description can fully express the complex inner feelings of characters and make them more full and true. To write a good character, we should first observe all kinds of people in daily life, pay attention to their manners, appearance psychology, living habits and habits.
For example, there are forty or fifty students in your class, and everyone's face, temper, personality and hobbies are different. Some are simple and honest, some are clever and naughty, some talk like machine guns, and some talk methodically. , become a real person in life-"rational+perceptual" person.
There are many methods of psychological description, which can be roughly divided into two categories: direct description and indirect description. Direct description mainly includes inner monologue, expression description, dream and illusion description; Indirect description mainly includes environmental contrast and action language description.
The author will try to take students' homework as an example. The general rule is: 1. The topic is a sentence, and the verbs in the sentence are often "striking". Such as: "My favorite person", the title is "Like".
2. The title is a phrase, and the word that plays a descriptive and decorative role in the phrase is the "title eye". For example, "One Day in Summer Vacation" is titled "In Summer Vacation", which limits the large time range of events written.
3. The title is a word, and the word itself is a "title eye". , a brief analysis of the above description skills.
1, inner monologue is the silent words you say to yourself in your heart. People will say different things to themselves in different psychological States, and these different words reflect the different psychological States of the characters.
By expressing in detail what you said to yourself in a specific state, you can clearly highlight the inner activities hidden under the calm appearance of the characters at that moment. Its symbolic words such as "thoughts, psychological chanting, I said to myself" and so on.
Example: Ding ... went to read a book this morning. I sat in my seat in fear and trembling. There are two common situations that require transition: one is when the content changes, and the other is when the expression changes.
Reference is a structural means of responding before calling. There are three kinds of common citation situations: beginning and end citation (which can be divided into two types: point citation and problem-solving citation), and mutual citation in citation (which can be divided into two types: far citation and recent photo citation).
Citation is an important means to make the structure rigorous and vivid, which can make the composition flexible and dense, connect the context and strengthen the key content. I thought to myself: The teacher will check the homework soon. If you want to impress readers with a lyrical article.
Love is true and literature is beautiful. Only when love is true can readers enjoy beauty. But I didn't do my homework at all because I was naughty on Sunday. In case the teacher checks me ... Alas, it's over this time. If the teacher asks me, I will say, forget, no, no, with so much homework, how can I forget Chinese for no reason? But, alas, if I had known this, I might as well play less at home and finish my homework.
God, you must change it next time, teacher. Please give me a break this time and don't check my homework. The description of this paragraph is to express the tension, worry and luck at that time in a monologue way. Although the appearance is calm, the internal struggle is fierce.
Through the author's inner self-talk, let readers understand more deeply! 2. Expression description is to highlight the facial expressions and facial expressions of characters and their changes. Effective preparation before writing can help students overcome psychological barriers and improve their writing enthusiasm. As mentioned above, many students become afraid and hate writing because of poor writing, which leads to a vicious circle.
In this link, through "speaking", every student is technically and psychologically prepared before writing. At this time of writing, students' self-confidence will be enhanced accordingly, and their enthusiasm will naturally be improved accordingly. Reveal the inner activities of the characters, reflect the mental state, personality characteristics and the fluctuating development process of their thoughts and feelings, so as to achieve the three-dimensional effect of the characters.
There are beads of sweat on my nose. Structure includes three aspects: hierarchy and paragraph, transition and reference, beginning and end. Hierarchy is a structural unit that expresses meaning by arranging the order of the ideological content of the article as a whole and expanding the structure and steps of the article. The paragraph is set by the author in the article and begins with the paragraph.
8. How to write a good composition for the award ceremony On Saturday, I attended an award ceremony.
As soon as I got there, I saw several children in the backcourt dressed in gorgeous clothes, ready to perform. It turns out that these children were invited to perform live! Walking in, several glittering Chinese characters "Award Ceremony of Instrumental Network Competition" came into view. When I came to the audience, it was really packed and crowded!
"Knock-knock-knock-knock!" The bell rang and the award ceremony began! The host aunt stepped onto the stage and said loudly, "I declare that the award ceremony begins now!" " "Suddenly, thunderous applause rang out from the audience. Then, she added: "Let's invite the gold medal winner to take the stage to receive the prize! "So with the music, they took to the stage, and the mothers under the stage were busy taking pictures! Then, the Silver Star Award, my heart is pounding, because I am the winner of the Silver Star Award! " Let's welcome the little player who won the Silver Star Award to the stage to receive the award! "I excitedly ran up and watched the leader who received the award slowly come to me, handed me the fiery red certificate, shook hands with me and smiled and said to me," Congratulations! " "At this time, I found a gratified smile on my mother's face. "Let's welcome the bronze star winners to the stage to receive the award!" They strode over when the music started. I looked at it carefully, huh? Isn't that Jose? It turned out that he won the bronze medal!
Next, I enjoy it. I found a seat and began to enjoy it. Look! Some of them play the piano, some play the flute and some play the electronic organ. What a wonderful program!
This award ceremony is really grand! I will try my best and come again next time!
9. Stand on the podium and exercise this holiday, my mother will take me to the swimming pool. At night, I am too excited to sleep. I opened the window and a breeze blew. I feel at a loss. Suddenly, I found myself standing in front of a big swimming pool. Wow, I used to be an athlete! I looked around. Wow, Luo Xuejuan, the famous Olympic swimming champion, Schwartz, the swimming champion known as the "water monster", and the swimmer Persall stood next to Luo Xuejuan. There are many other swimmers whose names I don't know. Can I beat so many people? There was a loud bang, and the game began! I see Persol is far ahead. In a short time, Luo Xuejuan passed him, and Schwartz was still in the third place for the time being. At this moment, I heard someone calling my name, and I remembered that I also came to participate in the competition. Other players also turned to laugh at me. I quickly jumped into the swimming pool and swam hard. Hey, how can I swim so fast? I don't care about this. One minute I breaststroke, the other minute I backstroke, and soon I overtook other swimmers. They all looked at me in surprise. I made persistent efforts and surpassed Schwartz and Persol. Haha, I just need to surpass one more swimmer, and I will be the first! I rushed to Luo Xuejuan with all my strength, but when I caught up with her, I choked on a mouthful of water, and the water almost drowned me! Or Luo Xuejuan gave me a hand, and I smiled gratefully at her.
At this moment, Schwartz passed me, and I thought: Sister Luo Xuejuan saved me, so I should strive for the first place! So, I swim hard, I want to be higher! Hurry up! Stronger! I finally won the first prize. I stood on the platform. Sister Luo Xuejuan congratulated me and I said, "Thank you! You let me win the first prize! " At this moment, I woke up, ah, it was a dream! I swear, learn to swim well from now on and become a real athlete when I grow up.