(Old rhyme, new sound) Wandering in the Stone Forest in the Poetry Garden in autumn, looking at the breeze and the residual lotus, Yang Liuan asked for the fourth sentence.

(1) the breeze residual load, especially the word "residual", the pleasure created by the first two sentences was completely denied.

(2) The breeze is lingering in Yang Liuan, and the sunset glow is a boat in the distant mountains.

This connection is good and in line with the artistic conception. Shun Yun is also very elegant, awesome!

But it can't be linked with the first two sentences.

My humble opinion. Don't.