Classical poetry pays attention to composition and poetic inheritance, and the most common composition is "combination" Turning point refers to a structural turning point, which is often reflected in the change of ideas from things to people, from scenery to emotion, from things to reason. The foreshadowing was ready, and suddenly a turn and a new face made poetry make waves.
This is a gradual description.
Liuyueye
The moonlight is deeper than half a house, and the big dipper is withered south.
Tonight, through the green screen window, I know that spring is warm and the sound of insects is fresh.
The poet takes the silent cold night as the background, showing the warmth of spring from the cold night, the germination of life from the silence, and the beautiful association of spring returning to the earth from several insects. The first sentence and the second sentence of the poem are written on a moonlit night from the front, without a trace of spring scenery, but they are secretly related to spring. The third sentence goes to the climate of spring and touches the sadness of spring. The poem says that "spring warmth" begins from "tonight", which shows that it is very sensitive to the changes of seasons and climate, embodies the poet's observation of subtle changes in nature, and naturally leads to the spring of "insects penetrating the green screen window". This transfer method is called "one-step transfer method".
Is to take a step back from the original intention of the topic. Mainly from the time and space changes, expressed by time difference, or put forward a hypothesis to turn around, sometimes you can use "flashback" and so on, thus forming a certain change.
Sikong Shu's "Jiangcun is a matter"
When you come back from fishing, don't tie the boat, Jiangcun is sleeping at sunset.
Even if the wind blows at night and the boat is blown away by the wind, it just stops on the shallow shore of the reed catkin beach.
Through one aspect of Jiangcun life, this poem shows the carefree life interest of fishermen and creates a true and beautiful artistic conception. The first sentence said that the fisherman came back from fishing at night, too lazy to tie the boat and let the fishing boat drift at will. The second period shows the place and time of "returning from fishing", as well as the movements and moods of the characters. The word "even if" in the third sentence means "maybe so" and "only so". Not only echoed the above "don't tie the boat, just sleep", but also took care of the following sentence "only rely on Lu Hua shallow water". The fishermen's carefree life interest and the quiet and beautiful scenery of Jiangcun are vividly on the paper, expressing the poet's casual attitude towards life. This "turn" is called "taking a step back".
It is a change from positive description to negative description, as opposed to emotional description.
Jia Zhi's Spring Thought
The grass is green, the willows are yellow, and the peach blossoms are messy.
Don't worry about the east wind, but spring can make you hate it longer.
Based on the idea of spring, this poem expresses the growing sadness and hatred that cannot be banished in the beautiful spring. The first sentence highlights the vibrant picture of this spring grass willow fluttering with light green and goose yellow; In the second sentence, purple and white colors are added to the painting with a hidden pen, and the thick spring scenery of flowers hanging and blooming is conveyed with a pen describing the gas appearance, which makes the spring scenery on the picture more colorful and noisy. Turn to the sentence "The east wind doesn't blow you" and suddenly write "Worry". I don't mean that you are too worried to send, but complain that the east wind is cold and heartless, not to send you worry. This is in stark contrast to the fourth sentence "Spring can be blamed for a long time" and the beautiful scenery of the previous two sentences. This negative contrast makes the anxiety to be expressed doubly strong.
Is to expand the scope of description from the beginning of sentence transformation.
Du Fu's Remembering Brothers on a Moonlit Night
A vagrant heard the drums heralding the battle, which was the first call of a wild goose on the border in autumn.
The dew turns to frost tonight, and the moonlight at home is bright!
Brothers are scattered, and no one can ask about life and death.
Letters sent to Luoyang city are often not delivered, and wars often do not stop.
The poem's first couplet and couplet are scenes, which set off the atmosphere of war. Necklace changed from "White Dew and Bright Moon" to recall brothers scattered in all directions, and the scope was expanded. "Oh, my brothers, lost and scattered, what is my life without you?" The last sentence said that the two brothers are separated and live far apart; The next sentence says that home is gone, life and death are unpredictable, heartbreaking and touching. Tail couplet further expresses the anxiety of suffering and confusion. The whole poem is well organized, coordinated from beginning to end, with distinct levels and rigorous structure. The language is exquisite, the style is gloomy and sad, and it is sincere and touching.
Thoughts on visiting Zeng Guofan's former residence with Hai Lao and Ji Qiang.
The reputation of the British is often * * *, and Mu Rufeng has been in the village for a long time.
Half moon pool listens to Dutch, and the secluded path knocks at Houmen.
Merit is easy to gain, but black and white is hard to talk about.
Because of Chen Han's diligence in state affairs, he didn't let ghosts and gods mess around.
Let's sing a few residual poems, and wait for Changhe to learn the best poems of bamboo poets. ...
Four wonders accompany friends to climb Jingting Mountain.
Not inferior to famous mountains, humanistic heritage leads coquettish.
At that time, the starting point of poetry was as high as Jun.
Note: Li Xie refers to Li Bai and Xie Tiao. Chen Yi said: "Is the soul of Li Xie's poetry still alive today? Lake light has broken through the Millennium. "
Changhe Poetry Review:
1, "Not inferior to the famous mountain Wan Ren Hao": Jingting Mountain is only over 300 meters above sea level, which is definitely not inferior to "Wan Ren Famous Mountain". Change the word "Xun" to "Bi", or change "Xun" to "Dare to laugh".
2. This sentence is an interpretation of the first sentence: winning by human nature. Closely connected with the first sentence.
3. Natural transformation and fuzzification. The "starting point" is the time or place to start, which often means the "academic foundation". If the poetry foundation of senior brother is as high as that of Li Xie, I doubt it; To be fair, my brother is in the same place as Xieli at the moment. Poetry is bound between "cut and uncut", which is understandable.
Generally speaking, this work is good.
Seven Wonders Smell Songs
Huai Salt Sea on the riverbank, Liangzhou singing * * *.
Don't be surprised if the guests are kind to you, but the host should be more harmonious.
Changhe Poetry Review:
1, "Jiang 'an, Huaiyan, Haichengbo": A familiar phrase commonly used by Chitose people means that the world is at peace.
2. "* * * Singing Liangzhou Xerox Song": Liangzhou Song was a popular qupai in the prosperous Tang Dynasty. Many poets like to fill in new words with this piece of music. "Xerox" is another name of Liu Yaoling, which means to enjoy living in today's world. Bai Juyi has a poem called Xerox: "Sincerely understanding Xerox's vocal music will make old patients feel sad."
It means that everyone in the world is singing the same tune, which is peace and prosperity.
4. "Don't be surprised that the guests are good to you": Everyone here is good at praising and touting, so there is no need to be surprised.
5. "The host wants more harmony": The host wants to hear such voices, and the more the better. ...
6. 1954, Chen Yinque wrote this poem. I am deeply worried that we can only praise but not criticize, and there is only one voice in the world. Although he lamented "don't talk about being a dumb sheep", he still praised Liu's "advocating the spirit of national independence and free thought". Mr. Wang's patriotic feelings and character are unique in the world. ...
Thoughts on seeing the leaves falling from the five wonders.
The leaves in the atrium are scattered all over the floor, not as cold as autumn chrysanthemums in Ao Shuang.
Is Gao Zhi carefree? Don't ask what the west wind is.
Changhe Poetry Review:
1, the first sentence "scattered" and "residual" is intentionally heavy.
2. Comparing Wu Ye with Qiu Ju is a bit far-fetched, but it is also acceptable. Autumn chrysanthemum can be Ao Shuang, and winter plum can be proud of snow! Isn't chrysanthemum as good as plum? Try to choose something comparable.
3, the sentence is good.
4, the sentence is too weak! Obscure and rhyming, wasting sentence transfer.
5、
? Leaves and leaves are everywhere in autumn.
Not as cold as hedgehog chrysanthemums in Ao Shuang.
Is intellectual and carefree?
Sighing in vain in the scattered wind.
Seven stops in Guang Zhouta
At first glance, the Milky Way has become a long shadow, with boundless independence.
Clean up the clouds and rush the morning, and the sky is full of stars and moonshine.
Changhe Poetry Review:
1 Guang Zhouta? The "small waist" on the 66 th floor.
2. What does "the Milky Way suddenly turns" mean? This sentence is obscure. "The shadow begins to get bigger" is also unknown. Change it to: "neon is full of illusions and waist is long".
3. The estimation is to imagine Guang Zhouta as an upright galaxy. Metaphor must conform to the nature of the vehicle and explore the similarities between the two gods and form. Since we call it a river, we think of the horizontal as a vertical "partition" ...
4. Boundless Independence: Although this image is heroic, it is too old-fashioned. The "Eight Famines" are still called the world. I remember a remark in a letter from Ye Lao to Yu Shihan: "The beauty is facing me across the autumn water, oh, go to Dongting Lake to wash my feet and look at its eight corners."
5. "Clear clouds urge the dawn horn": the dawn horn is the sound of the horn. It not only expresses the stirring mood, but also vaguely expresses the reluctance to the beautiful scenery in front of me, and intends to embrace it until dawn. This sentence is good.
6. "The sky is full of stars and the moon is hidden": The sentence is interesting and memorable.
7、
? The neon is full of illusions and the waist is long.
Half into the clouds, overlooking the Eight Wastes.
Clear the haze and remind the dawn,
The sky is full of stars, and the moon disappears.
8. The title of the poem is Guang Zhouta, but none of the four sentences has anything to do with Guang Zhouta, so it can be changed to My Feeling in Guang Zhouta.
9. Many poets ignore the importance of the theme of poetry! A good poem title and work complement each other. A good poem title can not only make people understand the background and original intention of the author's creation, but also make people understand and dig out the connotation of the poem more deeply, even the unfinished meaning!
For example, Du Fu's "Wang Chun" revolves around the word "Wang". "Although a country is divided, mountains and rivers still exist, and trees and grass turn green again in spring. Petals fall like tears, and lonely birds sing their sadness. " The first two couplets of the poem are unified on the word "Wang". The line of sight is from near to far, from far to near, from mountains and rivers to cities, and from cities to flowers and birds. Finally, from looking up at the scenery, I gradually turned to thinking down; "After three months of war, a letter from home is worth a ton of gold." This is another kind of hope, "hope"! Looking forward to hearing from relatives; "I stroked my white hair. It has become so thin that it can no longer hold hairpins. "Aged at the age of 45, this is not caused by" disappointment "!
Dragon Boat Festival (new rhyme)
Cao Jiang is a long river, and Miluo is a national mourning for thousands of years.
How many people curse the king of Chu in the annual dragon boat race.
Changhe Poetry Review:
1, "Cao Jiang is a long river": reminds me of Wei Zhuang's sentence, "The rain is raining, the grass is growing, and the Six Dynasties are like a dream."
2. "Miluo's Millennium National Mourning": This sentence doesn't make sense. The word "left" was obscure and then polished. ...
3. Sentence transfer is too weak, too white and too vulgar.
4. The sentence has no lasting appeal and no aftertaste.
Brother, it is definitely difficult for anyone to write something new on such a subject, so don't waste your time with your current brushwork. Observe more, dig out the theme from life, and then temper the text repeatedly.
At the end of the Selected Poems of Dongshan received by Qi Jueqian, there is a unique title of a poem by Shen Jia Yuanri, "Reject the disabled, dare to disappoint the people and take care of the old string of Dongshan"
Jiang Zuo's rise and fall hurt himself, and his ambition eventually humiliated the grass.
Who passed a word for Xie Gong, Dongshan prostitute is a lifetime.
Changhe Poetry Review:
1, I was deeply impressed by Qian's poem "Dongshan Laoxian is taken care of by the disabled", which was inscribed by Chen Yinque.
2. "Jiang Zuo": The ancients were geographically left to the east and right to the west. The left side of the river is the east of the river, which can refer to Nanjing or the south bank of the lower reaches of the Yangtze River below Wuhu, Anhui. We should guide the Ming Dynasty here.
3. "The Rise and Fall Pain of Jiang Zuozi": The rise and fall of the old country always hurts.
4. "The name of the grass will eventually be forgotten": the name "Polygala" is warm and bitter. There is no doubt that this sentence refers to Liu: she was originally a dusty woman, but a grass, but she was more noble than "Yuan Zhi" because she participated in the anti-Qing struggle and saw the light again.
5. Who is Xie Gong? Xie Gong refers to Xie An in the Eastern Jin Dynasty, living in seclusion in Dongshan, Shangyu, and interacting with prostitutes. ...
6. The last sentence directly quoted Gong Zizhen's "Ji Hai Za Shi" as "Dongshan prostitute is a lifetime". It means that you lament that you have a negative view of your whole life, but prostitutes are also your whole life! You didn't fail Liu, you didn't fail your life. ...
7. This poem was written in 1954, that is, from this time on, Master Chen began to write Liu Zhuan, which lasted for ten years, with a total of 850,000 words. The view that "Dongshan prostitutes are ordinary people" is shocking, and so is Buddhism's compassion for the equality of all beings. ...
I couldn't understand this poem when I was young. Later, I saw that many literati attached this poem to political events far-fetched, which naturally did not agree.
9. Master Chen just doesn't want to be involved in the political whirlpool. Take Lin Yutang as an example, "I miss the ancient beauty and can't be wrong", and it took ten years to explain a red bean. Liu told the unspeakable story of Chen Yinque. A generation of great scholars are not flattering, but have good intentions. ...
10, the old lady suddenly remembered the prologue of A Dream of Red Mansions: "Today, the dust has settled, and nothing has been done. Suddenly I thought of all the women that day. After a detailed examination, I felt that their actions and knowledge were above me. Why don't I have eyebrows? I really don't want them? "
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