1, Degang Guo's birthday limerick
A person is not old for half a century, but still insists on eating, drinking and smoking.
The 50 th birthday opens the North Sea, and 3,000 Zhu Nanshan.
This poem was written by Degang Guo and presented to Yu Qian, who celebrated his 50th birthday that day. There are many birthday poems in the Millennium literary world. In fact, the most important thing to write these poems well is to vary from person to person and to write them into people's hearts. If not, don't write a poem, just say "I wish you happiness as the East China Sea".
In this poem by Degang Guo, the first sentence points out that the other person's age is exactly half a century old, and the second sentence is followed by "people are not old", pointing out Yu Qian's three hobbies in his life: smoking, drinking and perming. The last two sentences from "one is not old" to "one will never fail" are quite neat to describe the lively scene of the birthday party, and the most elegant one is the word "laws". This sentence is based on the allusions of more than 3,000 spring guests in Historical Records. Historical records used the word "all stepping on beads" to describe these guests, meaning that they were all wearing red beaded shoes. Later, there was a saying about Zhu, generally referring to valuable public guests. Degang Guo used the word "Zhu Lv" skillfully here, which not only praised Yu Qian's respect and love, but also praised the birthday guests, saying that they were all decent people.
2. Let's look at Yu Qian's poems.
I was lucky enough to inherit my ancestral art since I was a child, but I have not thanked it yet.
What a wrong love I have received. My destiny is to repay you with kindness.
This is a poem written by Yu Qian after receiving Degang Guo's birthday poem at that time. Personally, although it is not as good as Guo's poems, it is also quite good. These 28 words are actually written as "modesty". Yu Qian Yong
These four sentences describe several periods of life: childhood, growth, present and future. The whole poem is concise and catchy to read. The so-called poem is to sing and chant ambition. In this sense, these 28 words Yu Qian wrote his own myriad feelings, and it is successful.
3. Yun-peng Yue's modern poems.
This poem by Yun-peng Yue is a modern poem, which was written when he remembered his poverty after he became famous. Creatively speaking, he has a lot of ideas. The theme of "I want to give myself 20 years ago 10 yuan" can not only describe my difficulties in those years, but also express my gratitude for my present life. From the linguistic point of view, this poem is practical, intercepting many scenes of childhood life and full of appeal. Many modern poems often fall into an embarrassing situation with nothing to say, but Yun-peng Yue's poems have no such problem at all, which is very rare.
Who is better?
These three poems are good enough in every capital. Yun-peng Yue's modern poems are my favorite, followed by Degang Guo's birthday poems. Sometimes we have to think about why many students in liberal arts colleges can't write excellent poems, but many ordinary people can. The reason may be simple. Everything depends on whether the author has a profound life experience.
A good poet must know the world and have a strong experience of life. Du Fu was able to write Three Officials and Three Farewells because he experienced the rebellion against officials. Su Shi can write so many famous works through the ages because he has traveled through dozens of cities in his life and tasted the ups and downs of life. I hope more students studying literature can understand this truth.