Second, skillfully borrow famous sentences to propose topics
? Titles are like the eyes of an article. Novel and unique titles are beautiful business cards dedicated to the marking teacher, which can attract the attention of the marking teacher. Using famous sentences skillfully is one of the ways to make the topic dazzling and stand out from the crowd. There are two ways to write a title with poetry: one is to write a title directly with poetry. For example, the perfect composition of the college entrance examination in 2000, "Looking at the Peak from the Ridge", directly takes Su Shi's poem "Topic Xilin Wall" as the title, which vividly explains the connotation of the title "The answer is colorful"; The perfect composition of the college entrance examination in 2004, A misty rain for a lifetime, directly focuses on the words and expressions in Su Shi's Dingfengbo.
China is a country of poetry. From 300 original songs and songs of Chu in the pre-Qin period, to Yuefu and ancient poems in the Han, Wei and Six Dynasties, and then to the poems of Sui, Tang and Five Dynasties, Song, Yuan, Ming and Qing Dynasties, poetry is like a brilliant galaxy, traversing the vast starry sky of China literature. From primary school to now, students must have learned a lot of ancient poems, such as parting, spring, summer, autumn and winter, romantic scenery, landscapes and places of interest. In fact, ancient poetry contains a broad social life and profound cultural heritage, which explains the ancient people's thinking about society and understanding of life. If we can properly use ancient poetry in our composition, I believe our article will be dazzling and beautiful! Then, how to use ancient poetry in composition to make our article full of "poetry" charm, according to my composition teaching practice in recent years, talk about my views.
First, skillfully use famous sentences as topics.
As we all know, the title is the eye of the article and the "signboard" of the article. A unique and novel article title can not only prompt the content and reveal the main idea of the article, but more importantly, it can also attract readers to the maximum extent and improve reading interest. When students conceive a composition topic, if they pay attention to "replacing" the topic with famous poems and sentences they have learned, I think your article will be favored because of its special topic. For example, in a recent test, the composition requirements are as follows:
Everyone has someone in his heart who he is most grateful for. These people may be parents, teachers and classmates; It may also be a great man, an expert or a scholar. So, who are you most grateful to? What is his position in your mind?
Requirements: write a composition of not less than 500 words, with a self-designed topic, a self-selected angle and a self-selected style.
After reading the materials and requirements of this composition, students may draw up their own article title without thinking, such as: mom, I love you; Dear dad; Teacher, you have worked hard! ; The person I am most grateful to-and so on. In fact, these topics are all good, and the lyrical topics accurately capture the emotional tone of the article. However, a classmate's self-designed topic in his composition is unforgettable "San Chunhui". Seeing this topic, readers will sincerely admire this classmate, and admire his accurate grasp and flexible application of ancient China culture. After reading this composition, in fact, it describes my mother's meticulous care and care in life, and expresses my heartfelt thanks to my mother! The title of the article adds another layer of poetic meaning to the article itself. As we all know, this student borrowed the last sentence of a poem "Ode to a Wanderer" by Meng Jiao in the Tang Dynasty: "Three Chunhui" in "Three Chunhui". This is a kind and sincere ode to maternal love. The last two sentences of the poem, "How much affection there is for an inch of grass, I get three rays of spring scenery", are the author's heartfelt eulogies to maternal love: these two sentences adopt the traditional contrast method: a daughter is like dirt, and a maternal love is like the sunshine in spring. How can a daughter repay a million motherly love? The metaphor of hanging places the son's heartfelt love for his loving mother. This poem artistically reproduces the ordinary and great beauty of human nature that people feel, so it has won strong praise from countless readers for thousands of years. Until the Qing Dynasty, two poets in Liyang sang such a poem: "My father's books are full of laundry, and the bus is full of me" (Shi Qisheng's "Writing about my bosom"), and "How many tears I always shed, dyed my hands and sewed clothes" (Peng Gui's "My brother came to save me a good time"), which shows the influence of this poem on future generations. And this classmate just used the seemingly ordinary three words "Three Chunhui" as the topic, but it evoked gratitude ripples in the hearts of countless readers. At the end of the article, he ended with the words "how much love there is only an inch of grass, and enjoy three spring rays", which not only took care of the theme of the article, but also deepened the theme of the article, making the article profound and complete in structure!
Second, clever use of famous poems at the beginning.
In my more than ten years of composition teaching practice, many students always frown and say to me, "Teacher, please help me get started!" " "Looking at the anxious students, I understand that it's not that they have nothing to say in their hearts, but that they don't know how to express their hearts properly. This is the crux of the problem. Of course, we often use direct, point-to-point, narrative, recall, rendering and other methods to open articles. For example, Du De's "The Last Lesson" and Chekhov's "The Chameleon" which we have studied are direct, simple and clear at the beginning, which brings readers into the story situation from the beginning and makes readers' thoughts fluctuate with the development of the plot. Another example is the prose "Pearl Bird" that we have studied, which begins with a point-to-point style and reads: "How wonderful! My friend gave me a pair of pearl birds. "At the beginning, the author expressed his feelings in a pleasant tone, which laid a relaxed tone for the whole article. There is also a narrative, such as the first paragraph of Mo Huaiqi's prose "Walking": "We are walking in the fields: me, my mother, my wife and son. "Memories are natural at the beginning, and it is easy to recall past scenes when writing, which also helps to introduce readers into the story. Bing Xin's Little Orange Lantern, Zhu Ziqing's Back and Wei Wei's My Teacher all start with this. " "Little Orange Lantern" begins with a short sentence: "This was more than ten years ago", which is concise and practical. There is also a way of rendering, which is often a description of the natural environment and social environment, which sets off the atmosphere for the following story and can also promote the story. For example, we have studied Wang Yuanjian's Seven Matches, which tells the story of two soldiers surrounding the Seven Matches when the Red Army crossed the grassland on the Long March. The description of the harsh natural environment on the grassland at the beginning of the article plays an important role in the development of the story and the expression of the theme; "Post Road Pear Flower" is also very similar. The opening statement shows that the mountain is high, steep, continuous and gloomy, which naturally reminds readers that it is too dangerous to walk the mountain road at night, so hurry to find a place to stay; Such a mountain road, where will there be a foothold? This kind of paragraph not only attracts readers' attention, but also lays a good foundation for the emergence of "small hut", which is extremely beneficial to the theme. The above methods are often encountered by students in the process of learning Chinese, and they are also the most commonly used and simplest. However, China is a country of poetry, and thousands of years of Chinese culture is like a bright pearl, shining on the land of China. Then, why don't we start with quoting ancient poems and draw lessons from the lofty aspirations, parting feelings and romantic scenery of the ancients to describe our hearts, which will make our works more attractive. I might as well call this method quotation for the time being.
For example, in a recent test, the writing question was like this:
Title: Here is-
Requirements: (1) Complete the topics first, such as affection, trust, hope, joy, sunshine, competition, etc. And then write a composition.
(2) It is in line with the meaning of the question, the center is clear, the emotion is true, and the content is substantial.
(3) Optional style, no less than 600 words.
One of the topics of students' composition is "There is sunshine here". This classmate compared his teacher to "sunshine" and praised the teacher for his meticulous care and help in the most difficult time of his life. And this classmate's article begins like this:
"Spring silkworms will weave until they die, and candles will drain the wick every night." My first grade study is coming to an end. I can't forget my head teacher, Miss Wang, who gave me warm sunshine in the darkest days of my life and let me see the light and hope! -
As we all know, the poem "Spring silkworm dies, night candle tears" comes from Untitled by Li Shangyin, a great poet in Tang Dynasty. In this poem, he showed the silkworm's perseverance, firmness and dedication to the extreme and became a beautiful sentence sung through the ages. People vividly compare teachers to "spring silkworms", which is a high evaluation of teachers' selfless dedication and noble quality. People praise teachers like spring silkworms, "Spit out all the threads in your heart, offer infinite love in your heart, weave a beautiful and warm world in obscurity without plans." "Spring Silkworm" is a title that teachers feel extremely honored. Zhu Guangqian, a famous educator, said: "As long as I live, I will spin silk for a day. I hope that the silk I spit out can add a little warmth to the world and make spring stronger. " It is not difficult to see that this student skillfully "borrowed" the artistic conception of ancient poetry, which triggered his praise and gratitude to the teacher and received a unique artistic effect!
Third, skillfully use famous sentences to collect the full text
A good article should have both a fascinating beginning and a fascinating ending. As the saying goes, "Knitting clothes and trousers is at the beginning, and knitting baskets is at the end." So be sure to pay attention to the end of the article, so that the article "shines" at the end of the article, icing on the cake!
In the articles we often contact, the end of the article is generally a lyrical summary, revealing the main idea of the article. For example, we have studied Lu Xun's novel Social Drama, and at the end of the article, we wrote: "Really, until now, I really have never eaten good beans like that night-I will never see a play like that night again." Here is the lyric ending, which shows my fond memories of naive, free and interesting childhood, full of a romantic ideal color, and shows my desire and pursuit for the realm of life. There are many endings of this type, such as great tragedy, reaching the top of the earth.
Of course, in the articles we have studied, there are also "borrowing" poems at the end. For example, Bing Xin's article "Watching Dance" ends like this: "In Beijing in early spring, we can't find flowers as full and fragrant as their hometown of South India. We can only learn from their great poet Tagore's poem: Let us dress up our admiration and gratitude like red flowers. Here, Bing Xin uses Tagore's poems to express China people's love and affection for them. Therefore, if you can "borrow" poems in your own articles, it will definitely add a lot of color to your own articles. Not long ago, I asked my students to quote ancient poems at the end of a composition training entitled "I am facing setbacks". One of them wrote at the end: "Once you climb to the top of the mountain, you will see that other mountains are dwarfed under the sky ... Students, let's join hands and face tomorrow with a smile! Some students quoted Li Bai's poem Difficult to Walk: One day, I will ride the wind and waves to save the sea in Yun Fan. Others quoted a famous sentence from Qu Yuan's Lisao: "The road is long, Xiu Yuan is Xi, Xiu Yuan is Xi, and I will go up and down to seek" to express my perseverance in the face of setbacks.
How can the canal be so clear? Because there is inexhaustible living water for it. Our life is rich and wonderful, and our ancient poems contain endless and profound life culture that we have never been exposed to. Let's walk hand in hand in the ocean of poetry, make our articles more beautiful and life more exciting!