How to evaluate this poem by Hu Shi?

Butterfly was written in August of 19 16 and published as a friend. The whole poem is as follows:

Two yellow butterflies, both flying into the sky. For some reason, one flew back.

The other, lonely and pathetic. I have no intention of going to heaven. It's so lonely.

Teacher Hu used line drawing to describe a yellow butterfly's helplessness and confusion about its own situation, and compared things with people, which was nothing new.

This poem doesn't conform to the traditional aesthetic habit of China's poetry, which is naive and plain, and can't give people aesthetic pleasure, nor can it arouse readers' deep sense of * * * through the shaping of specific images.

If we want to explore the practical significance of this poem, as an attempt, it will open a road for China's vernacular poetry to get rid of the shackles of China's traditional poetry. This is the unique historical significance of this poem.

Secondly, the background of this poem. Butterfly is actually a modern "butterfly wish" which combines Chinese and western cultures. In memory of the love tragedy of Hu Shi and Wei Liansi. This is Hu Shi's exclamation about his love life. Hu Shi was engaged to Jiang Dongxiu when he was a teenager. But when he arrived in America, he met the brilliant Wei Liansi and fell in love with him. It's no secret that their half-life relationship began. This poem was written in 19 16 on the eve of Hu Shi's return to China. This poem "Butterfly" is actually a modern "butterfly wish" that combines Chinese and western. There were two butterflies flying in the sky, but they had to fly back suddenly because Hu Shi's mother urged him to go home and get married. Wei Liansi is left alone, looking through the autumn waters, which is really "poor"-Wei Liansi has never married. Express his lonely and depressed mood at that time.