In singing, grandma sometimes advances, sometimes retreats, sometimes flies, and youth instantly returns to her, making her present a kind of flower-like beauty. Everyone was attracted by her.
My feelings:
The author writes well about the dirty environment in which the hero lived at that time, and makes great efforts in language description. Make the article vivid and immersive, and have a deeper understanding of beauty and ugliness and people's complex feelings.
2. Excerpt:
Before my grandmother came, I seemed to fall asleep in the dark. Since she appeared in front of me, my sleeping heart has been awakened by her; She let me see the light, she let me connect everything around and weave a colorful wreath. Before long, she became my lifelong friend and the most considerate person. She knows me well and I respect her. She is full of selfless love for the world and life. This kind of love makes me feel full, makes me full of confidence in life, makes me work hard in troubled times, and makes me strong forever in difficult days.
Feeling:
Alesha Jr.' s past life was not interesting. His grandmother was simply a beam of sunshine in his life, which lit up his life. In that dark and cold society, I gave Alesha infinite care and warmth, and gave him useful instruction.
3. Excerpt:
It's sunny and sunny. It's rare to have such good weather. My grandmother and I stayed on the deck from morning till night. Under the clear sky, the banks of the Volga River are covered with a layer of golden red by the autumn wind, which looks like two beautiful silks and satins. The orange boat drifted lazily upstream. The leaves beat the gray-blue river rhythmically, making a rumbling sound. There is a gray barge at the stern, led by a long towing rope, serene and leisurely, as lifelike as a water turtle. Over the Volga River, the sun is spinning unconsciously, and everything in the world, mountains and rivers, is changing all the time. The winding green hills, like the folds of gorgeous clothes on the earth, have very beautiful lines. Villages stand on both sides of the river, which is convenient for urban transportation. It looks like pieces of biscuits. Golden autumn leaves float on the water.
Feeling:
The author used many figurative sentences and presented a beautiful picture when describing the scene he saw on the ship.