Composition: Take "Out of My Little World" as the topic (800 words).

Born in the world, we need to pay attention to ourselves, but we must not only "ourselves", because everyone can't be an independent individual. Only by stepping out of the narrow world of self, paying full attention to others, society and nature and creating a healthy and harmonious living environment can people live and grow better. Please write an article of about 600 words on the topic of "Walking out of my little world". Full score composition 1: Dong Shi, the darling of God, introduced me, and Dong Shi also went down in history with an ugly name. But for thousands of years, I have been depressed and unhappy! It is said that from that day on, I was laughed at by the people at that time after learning from the sad face of the beautiful girl next door, Shi, who was ill with a heart, and created an idiom for me, so I stayed at home all day. (However, although I don't think about tea and rice, I haven't lost weight. I don't understand that when Shi is sick like that, smelly men are my heroic feelings of pity, sympathy and masculinity. As for me, I just studied and imitated it. Why does it cause so much dissatisfaction and irony? I know, because I have a Zhang Chou face, so depressed! I can't help blaming my parents' carelessness and God's injustice. God must have been distracted when he created me, otherwise my five senses would be so rough and dislocated! I must settle accounts with God! Strong thoughts occupied my mind, and I decided to go to God at all costs to find out what I had lost! After waiting for thousands of years, I finally got on the Shenzhou-10 manned spaceship and flew to God's "Happy Palace". God's home is not ordinary beauty, it is difficult to describe it in words! Although I was jealous, I didn't want to stay long, so I went directly to the Blissful Hall. Hey, who is that old man sitting in the garden with his eyes closed? , is god! So, I got dressed, stepped forward, coughed and said, "Lord, you are at ease!" " Why not go to the folk to observe the sufferings? I, Dong Shi, grew up like this because of your negligence, and suffered people's eyes and ridicule. You must make a decision for me! "When I said this, I couldn't help feeling sad, and my skirt was wet with tears. God opened his eyes, smiled at me and listened to me. After I got my chest out, he said slowly, "My poor child, you have been living in everyone's eyes for so many years. You lost yourself and woven a cage of self-restraint. You have never found your own strengths and highlights in yourself! "Then, God said slowly," Everything is born in the world and has its own value. You see, in this garden, grass is not as beautiful as flowers, but without grass, the beauty of flowers is not outstanding. What about you, don't imitate others, don't envy others, hurry out of this small world of self, find your own strengths and advantages, help others and serve the world, and you will reap the love and respect that people deserve! " Say that finish, god waved his sleeves and closed his eyes. After listening to God's words, I froze there ... After I came back from God, I reflected on myself and examined myself. I have a strong body and enough strength, so I have finished my work in my field and can help my neighbor Li Nainai's family. My voice is very tactful. When I sing, I not only make myself happy, but also give the working people a happy enjoyment. Ah, I also stepped onto the stage of the Avenue of Stars. I, with bright eyes, do needlework, and the embroidered flowers can attract butterflies to fly and be shortlisted for international awards ... Haha, I always smile. I walked out of my little world and accepted various media interviews. I am no longer synonymous with ugliness. I am the embodiment of personality and the representative of women in the new era. On this day, I received a greeting card from heaven: "You are my darling-a gift from an angel, congratulations!" " "Teacher's comment: After reading this masterpiece in the examination room, people can't help laughing, but also hide their own ideas, which is worth tasting. This composition adopts a new story writing method to express the theme, which is a bold innovation and a success for young authors. Based on the well-known story of "Dong Shi's effect", this paper weaves the story of Dong Shi's distress and anger because of his ugly appearance, which makes him want to ask God questions, and then be inspired by God to reflect on himself, get out of the small world of self-restraint, realize the value of life, and vividly expound the theme connotation to be expressed. The little author travels through time and space, imagining strangely, and the story application is not limited to the old model (the image of God is not sacred but full of human feelings); The little author is good at spreading stories, trying to render Dong Shi's distress and grievances, and preparing for the following plot changes. Articles such as "Original", "Beautiful Girl" and "Shenzhou 10" are humorous and vivid, with the characteristics of the times. 2009 perfect score composition topic in Linyi, Shandong Province: "Out of my little world" perfect score composition topic 2: Highlights: confession of true feelings, brave growth, mom, I'm leaving-confession of a seed, dear mom, I'm leaving, I'm going out of my little world and seeing a different world. Mom. Don't blame Uncle Feng for taking me away. I left and chose my own way to wander. People say, "Parents are here, don't travel far", but I left your warm arms and no longer enjoyed my knees! Mom, I grew up under your cultivation; Flying wings are getting stronger and stronger, and wandering thoughts occupy my whole heart. Mom, I want to realize it! In spring, in your warm heart, I have a desire to go to the outside world. So, in the call of spring breeze, in the baptism of spring rain, in the touch of spring, I poked my head out of your branch. Ah! Weedy meadows, fragrant flowers, thawed lakes, flying butterflies, singing birds ... all these are so beautiful and full of vitality! Seeing these scenes, I feel full of energy, so I stretch my waist, let myself grow up a little, and even produce tiny but delicate flowers to add color to spring. In the hot summer, the sun lost the charm and tenderness of spring, like a vicious witch, frying and roasting us severely, and I became listless, shrugged my shoulders and hung my ears. In order to resist the power of the sun and the attack of the storm, I have to constantly absorb nutrients and water from you and try to make myself strong. Finally, I shook off the scattered petals, and the remaining calyx was full of nectar of life, and I became a small fruit standing on the branch! Autumn is the season of parting. Uncle Feng brought wonderful things from afar, and my heart became restless. Mom, I want to go out of my little world and wander far away under your protection. In that distant place, I will settle down and stop wandering, mom, please don't be sad! Next spring, maybe I will take root in the desolate desert and build another home, where there will be infinite vitality because of my arrival; Maybe I will take root on the steep cliff and build another home, where I will add infinite scenery because of my arrival; Maybe I will take root on the busy roadside and build another home, where the infinite dust will be reduced because of my arrival; Maybe ... mom, please don't think about me, please don't care about me. Under your care, I am strong enough, I can adapt to the harsh environment, I can resist the wind, frost, rain and snow, and I believe that I will be able to break out of my own small world and break into a new world. Mom, I left with love and hope to realize my dream. Dear mother, please don't get up early to kiss your child when the first sunshine shines again in the morning. He's gone, and you'll never find him again! Maybe he will appear in the poet's hymns, maybe he will appear in the photographer's works, maybe he will appear in people's words-then, please be proud of him! Teacher's comment: This is a masterpiece of examination room with different styles, which is eye-catching and touching. First, the skill of holding things to express your wishes. This paper symbolizes teenagers with a seed, vividly shows the growth process of teenagers with the growth of a seed, and expresses the ideal that teenagers should bravely go out of their own small world, break into a new world and create a new life. Be unique and superior. Second, express your mind directly in the way of first person and true confession. The article is touching, which not only makes them reluctant to leave their mother, but also has a strong desire to see the outside world, strive to dedicate themselves and create a new life. There are many calls to the mother in the text, which are affectionate and righteous, but high-spirited, making people feel that "ruthlessness is not necessarily a hero"! Third, the theme is profound and grand. The article not only shows the courage and determination of young friends, but also praises the spirit of selfless dedication. The last paragraph is actually a tribute to this professional image, which deepens the theme and adds bright colors to the article. Fourth, the language is beautiful and fluent, sincere and touching. The article uses metaphors and personification, especially a large number of parallelism sentences, which makes the article look good and literary. 2009 Linyi, Shandong Full Score Composition Title: "Out of My Little World" Full Score Composition 3: Highlights: Create a situation to break through the shackles and let the dream fly, shine on the mirror, and the mirror accumulates it and refracts it on me. I am weaving an uncertain dream of youth in this small world woven by light beams. On a dark night without the moon, I was walking in the shadow of a lamp and suddenly smelled a strange and sad smell. Depression followed. I really want to grow up and walk through this boring and boring cardamom years. I looked in the mirror at the window, and an ordinary figure appeared in front of me, with acne all over my face and out of shape. Hey, what an ugly duckling! Suddenly I seemed to hear a voice calling in the distance, and I hurried back. Stunned by the beautiful scenery in front of us, meteor, ah, meteor! I want to make a good wish, but the time for making a wish has quietly passed away in surprise. Meteors cut through the boundless night sky and disappeared at the end of the day. I can't feel tears. I'm afraid this self-pity fragile heart will break into this tear. I regret this fleeting and short-lived beauty. Should my life be so brilliant? Have I ever been so brilliant? I was imprisoned in a cage of inferiority and couldn't find a way out. Heartache numb, at a loss, pain at a loss. I just sat in front of the window for a long time, for a long time ... I don't know how long it took, but dawn opened my sleepy eyes. I took a deep breath of fresh air outside the window, walked to the mirror, stretched out my arms and stretched for a long time. I'm still ordinary, and suddenly, I have a strange smile. I seem to be suddenly enlightened in the mirror, like a butterfly flapping its wings, full of growing passion and vitality. I suddenly saw the moment when the bright light of the meteor lit up the night sky ... self-evident. I open my palm, holding the golden sunshine carefully, bending my hands into a heart shape, facing the mirror and myself! Let dreams fly. I live in my own little world. Sadness and inferiority are my clothes. One day, the dawn shone on me and shattered my sadness. So I spread my wings and rushed out of the cell to let the sun weave new dreams. I spread my wings and fly with my dreams! -Postscript: The author of this excellent examination room is good at creating situations and describing them in detail. First of all, we can think of the article as two pictures fixed by the focal plane. One picture is gloomy in tone and dull in atmosphere, showing a depressed, hesitant and inferior "self", while the other picture is bright in tone and passionate, showing a dynamic and passionate "self", vividly showing the topic of "get out of my little world". Second, we can regard the young author as a master of stream of consciousness writing. The exquisite brushwork of the article describes my every move, and also describes my psychological activities in large sections. The description object is single, but the brushwork is flexible and there is no sense of repetition. Third, we lament the ingenious conception of the little author. The inscription and postscript of the article echo each other from a distance, making the article natural. The feelings in the inscription are lonely and depressed, while the poems in the postscript are a summary of the full text, which makes the finishing point and expresses the spirit of realizing the value of life and being positive.