Static poetry of primary school students

Su Xinshi xugong branch

Author: Yang Wanli

Hedges are sparse and deep, and the trees are green and not shady.

The child ran quickly to catch the yellow butterfly, but the butterfly suddenly flew into the vegetable garden and could not be found again.

This is a poem describing the pastoral scenery in late spring, depicting a scene full of spring.

The first sentence is a static description of pure scenery. Fences and paths point out that this is a rural area, and the "hedge waterfall" has a width. Using "sparse" to point out its state, it is obvious that there is a gap between the two, so that you can see the mountain road outside the fence. "One path deep" means that there is only one mountain road, and it is very long and extends into the distance. The wide hedge waterfalls and narrow paths set each other off, and the long hedges set each other off, highlighting the freshness and tranquility of the countryside.

The second sentence is also a static description of pure scenery. On the roadside, the peach blossoms and plum blossoms on the branches have fallen, but the leaves have not grown very thick, showing the natural and simple style of the countryside.

The third sentence is the dynamic description of characters. The combination of "catching up" and "chasing" makes the excitement and joy of children clapping their hands and stumbling after butterflies vivid, which reflects their innocence and liveliness.

The fourth sentence, cauliflower is yellow and lush. A small butterfly flies into this yellow ocean, and naturally it is nowhere to be found. Readers can imagine that children are looking around at this time, anxious about finding everywhere, disappointed about not finding it, and so on. It shows the innocence and childishness of children.