Light and shadow dislocation
Please give me a piece of white cloth, let me be its god, and use the power of light and shadow to stage a tragicomedy about deviation and dislocation for eyes that have been troubled by the world for a long time. -inscription
Lament Tian Zhuangzhuang's Dram, presenting the most primitive life in the simplest film language. I remember the young minority who married his brother, telling his love for his sister-in-law and brother with clear eyes. Facing the blue sky in the camera, we were lost for a moment. Is it their moral dislocation or our own ideological deviation? Always criticizing the backward and paranoid frontier tradition, have we ever questioned the soul that has been destroyed by the dislocation of human nature under the reinforced concrete? And whether tradition and modernity have long been out of human control and should be given new meaning?
In 50 years, the seven samurai of Kurosawa were vigorous and desolate for 50 years. This is a history of human dislocation, which records the era of war and the deviation between soldiers and farmers. Soldiers become soldiers, farmers become schemers. Regardless of the low salary, the warriors exchanged their lives for the stability of the peasants. Even if they are down and out, they are still warriors, and chivalry will always be an indispensable part of their humanity. Farmers, on the other hand, ignore kindness and doubt that they will crowd out those warriors, because once they panic, simplicity will disappear and the instinct to make a living will become the most conspicuous part of human nature and be naked. However, we have no intention of blaming it. Because of the war, the serious lack and dislocation of humanistic spirit has become one of the many forgivable mistakes. What mankind should do more seems to be to save some humanistic care that has long been lost in the flames of war.
Spielberg once again promised his shooting purpose, which is no longer the personal heroism that Hollywood has always used, nor the vulgar chivalrous means used in traditional American movies. "War of the World" made the best return for misplaced family responsibilities. Under the seemingly dazzling technological shell, there are actually four most sincere feelings of affection, perhaps the serenity of a girl who longs for a little care and waits for her father to save her, or the persistence of her father who doesn't care about her family after her sudden repentance, all of which are expressions of long-misplaced affection and long-awaited ending.
The power of images is not only to entertain the public, but perhaps human beings should slow down, enjoy quietly and reflect on whether they have gone astray and taken the wrong seat in this complex world.
(Original score: 54 points, which is a high score)
Review opinion
Simple content reviews of three films, plus a punctuation mark, constitute such a high-scoring composition. Perhaps the marking teacher just marveled at the examinee's cultural vision (I'm sorry that I only heard the names of these three films, but didn't appreciate them), and was surprised by some awe-inspiring words in the composition, such as "moral dislocation", "humanistic dislocation", "serious lack of humanistic spirit" and "misplaced family", and scored the highest score. However, if these cultural auras are excluded, there is not much to read about this composition. Judging from the structure of the article, the three materials basically stay at one level, lacking the progress and expansion of the theme. Assuming that the composition is 1600 words, probably candidates will add three or four movies, and there is no need to further analyze and excavate the materials.
Another obvious defect of this composition is language. Except for a few clerical errors, most of the words and sentences I underlined can reflect the true language level of the candidates. Some of them make up words, while others tamper with idioms at will. There are two places where you can guess what the candidate wants to express, but obviously the words are not satisfactory. For example, "because once you panic, simplicity disappears, and the instinct to make a living becomes the most conspicuous part of human nature, which is naked", the word "panic" may mean that the survival of these farmers is threatened, while "instinct to make a living" should be "instinct to survive" and "the most conspicuous part of human nature" is "outstanding in human nature". The most incomprehensible thing is "a girl who longs for little care", which means that this girl is eager for such care because she can't get the care of her relatives at ordinary times? This expression is not satisfactory. I don't think this composition should only get a high score of more than 50 points from the language level.
Grade composition 2
Sacrificing Qu Yuan's Prose
2500 years ago, the Miluo River should still be so clear. The only god-like poet in China chose water to end all these troubles, and drew an amazing exclamation point in history with water.
Sir, after two exiles, the traitor was pushed out, but you went to exile instead of coachable. Even though that chest of resentment has spread all over the body, it still can't extinguish his ideal of worrying about the country and the people. Why does the world always reject the feelings of speaking out and worrying about the country and the people? Why is this world always cold and persistent, and life and death are tough? Why not despise the quality of being honest and clean?
However, why is Mr. Wang so inflexible and will not be misplaced? Abandoning the image of Dr. San Lv, he was described as haggard and full of songs. You can make mistakes again and again, stop protesting, but please the face of the dragon with humility, and you can climb to the top. Or, you can let go, sit and ignore it, and you can get high.
Horse, sit back and relax; Even, you can quit your job, go back to your hometown, get a boat, love mountains and rivers, and all shall be well. You can still. ...
But you didn't. You stood your ground and refused to move a step. As a minister, you must be loyal to your duties with the heart of the world; As a person, you should dare to speak and remonstrate and face the whole world! In that era when everyone was drunk, you were the only one standing awake, clinging to the whole world you loved most, and the land of Chu that you loved deeply but had already been devastated!
"If you take a long breath to hide your tears, you will mourn the hardships of people's lives." For the sake of good governance in your heart, you are "bright and unchanging" and "are you afraid of the fall of the palace", and you forget that you are only sticking to your beliefs.
Sir, you have made me understand that not everything can be misplaced. There is a belief that deserves your life and death to stick to and guard; There is a responsibility that deserves your attention. In the face of faith and responsibility, we should not easily shake our position, but face it bravely and face it. ...
Shoulder a lifetime, but look back is bleak everywhere. Your persistence makes you sublimate with tragic death to dilute your sadness and your love. Death, that kind of persistent interpretation to the extreme dislocation. Sir, do you know that thousands of years later, people fed fish with zongzi and filled the north and south of the river with fireworks just to wait for your spirit to return?
(Original score: 52 points, which is a high score)
Review opinion
It is always far-fetched to say that Qu Yuan is unwilling to be flexible and insists on the political position of "not being in a good position". If it is not this composition question, such a statement should be deducted. Candidates' sense of language is really unsatisfactory. Not to mention clerical errors such as "servility", an author with a good sense of language would never write like this just by reading expressions such as "carefree and full", "persistent", "all this is worrying" and "the whole world". After all, this composition got a high score of 52 points. I don't think I should say that I am picky about the composition language, but high marks should be harsh.
The outstanding advantage of this composition is structure. Taking Qu Yuan's life as the theme, the comments on Qu Yuan's life contain the topic of "dislocation". The article has both positive and negative statements, and it is promoted at different levels in one go. This article is written with great momentum. If it is not a language defect, I would rather give it 54 points.
Grade composition 3
The dislocation of the times
The long river of history is rolling forward, and everyone is a wave. If the waves happen to rise with the wind, they will be remembered by history. If you sink into the bottom of the river, you will be forgotten by history.
Limited by the times, it is sad that we cannot make our thoughts, feelings and discoveries public. However, there are some people who, even because of the dislocation of the times, still brave the unimaginable pressure of ordinary people and move on.
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