I give you a lot, let you choose:
1. Pour out your heart
Life is like a cold spring night, when the dark clouds are blown away by the wind As they galloped through the sky in strange shapes, suddenly bright stars flashed on a soft and deep blue sky in the middle of their gaps, indicating that tomorrow would be a bright and sunny day.
——Golky's "The Life of Makar"
The lives of our students should also be colorful, and there must be many people, things, objects and scenes that have touched them. Your heartstrings; your emotional experiences are also diverse, and there must be a lot of joy, anger, sadness, and joy among them that you will never forget.
Please capture a few waves in your life, write an article, and express your feelings.
Instructions for ideas
This type of essay question should be broad-minded in conception, open-minded in material selection, and beautiful in language expression.
The content of the material prompts is very broad, so there is a wide range of options to choose from. You can give full play to your own strengths and write a masterpiece of both literary quality and beauty. As long as we find inspiration for writing from the prompts in the materials, we can let our thoughts fly and write unique and beautiful articles.
Wonderful sample essay
Dancing butterfly
Highlights: Rational perception of poetic language
The highlights of this article are mainly reflected in two aspects: 1. The first is the use of poetic language, and the second is the rational perception of the scenery.
The author's focus in describing the scenery is to refine the inner spiritual outlook of dead leaves and butterflies, unearth their strong will and quality, and use poetic language to highly summarize their connotations, full of rational colors, and fully display It shows the author's skill in describing scenes and expressing emotion.
The wings are weak and the body of withered leaves contains infinite power. She has a childish face and an indifferent expression, but she dares to spread her wings and fly.
——Inscription
The dead leaves are ruthless and seem intentional
Autumn is approaching.
Countless huge fruits were born on the trees, the birds gradually flew into the distance, the grass withered and the leaves turned yellow. The dead leaves are flying in the wind, hiding under the trees with the butterfly eggs, waiting for the arrival of spring. (Anthropomorphic techniques, beautiful sentences)
Winter is coming.
The butterfly eggs were tightly wrapped in the dead leaves and slowly began to grow. The dead leaves never forget Mother Butterfly's request and carefully care for this life that has nothing to do with them, but they look forward to the day when they will turn into spring mud. (Using the poem "Turn into spring mud to protect flowers") Time passes day by day.
Spring has arrived.
After a winter of suffering, the butterfly finally breaks out of the egg sac and turns into a dancing butterfly. It wants to see the dead leaves that are caring for it carefully, but it only sees moist soil. The butterfly cried, crying very sadly, but it never saw it. The dead leaves also cried, crying so happily!
Since then, there has been a kind of butterfly called "Withered Leaf Butterfly". It has been flying non-stop since it was born, because it has the dream of withered leaves - to fly. (Highlight the theme)
Withered leaves are not heartless things, they turn into butterflies and want to fly. (Quotes, transformations, neat sentences)
Fold your wings and fly
When the feathers gently brush against your eyes, when the silhouette of the wings turns into your forehead, when flying becomes so brave , everyone will pay attention to the world. (Describe scenes and express feelings)
They used tears, thoughts, thoughts, and paintings to spread their wings, but they only forgot the method of flying. All speechless.
Missing the heroic ambition of "There will be long winds and waves, hanging sails directly across the sea", missing the majestic momentum of "Steaming clouds and dreams, shaking Yueyang City", dreams are in the distance, Although you don't have wings to fly, you can grow beautiful wings. When one day you dare to fold your wings, you can fly with confidence.
Please fold your wings and fly! (Imperative sentence, simple and powerful)
The weak wings can still make the withered leaf butterfly dance gracefully and fly beautifully.
Although we have no wings, we can still fold our wings and dance like a butterfly, because we have a pair of ethereal "wings" in our hearts. (Use scenery to attract people and expand the meaning)
Variation and innovation:
The title of this article is full of poetry and painting. Two subtitles are used in the structure, and there is an inscription at the beginning. The article has a beautiful form , the language is refined, the insights are profound, and the text is coherent. As for the structural form of prose that describes scenes, expresses emotions, and expresses feelings, it is worthy of reference by students.
(Recommended by Zeng Weihui and Xu Yun)
Stars in the Dark
Jiao Xiaohong, Lishi Middle School, Jiangjin District, Chongqing
Highlights Introduction : Philosophical Enlightenment from Fairy Tales
This article is a typical fairy tale. The highlight of the article is the successful portrayal of the story of a skinny firefly who finally became the brightest star.
The author is good at using contrast to show the image of the little firefly and express its inner feelings. It focused on the words of encouragement from itself and others, stimulating its enthusiasm for hard training. Finally, in the face of the storm, it bravely fought against the wind and rain and gave off a dazzling light. Finally, the moral of the story is revealed, giving people profound inspiration.
Legend has it that there are as many stars in the sky as there are fireflies on the ground.
In the firefly family, there is a thin firefly. Its brothers and sisters all look down on it and reject it. Its world is full of desolation and loneliness, and the star that belongs to it is also dim and dull. Light. (Suppress first and then rise)
This thin firefly has also been sad about this, but it has never complained to God. A voice came from the bottom of its heart: "Don't be sad, don't be sad, go exercise, as long as you keep exercising, you will become very strong." (Faith is the pillar of the spirit) From then on, every day when the sky is clear, When the first ray of dawn appears, people will see a firefly dancing back and forth in the sky until the last ray of light disappears from the horizon.
The firefly's brothers and sisters all laughed at it and called it a fool. Its good friends, the trees and flowers, said: "You are not a fool. If you do this, you will become stronger day by day." So the firefly kept training year after year. It felt that its wings were about to break, and it cried sadly. The flower advised it: "If you want to become strong, you must endure pain. Don't you see that you are much stronger now than before?" In this way, the firefly became more confident. (Encouragement is the motivation to move forward)
One night, there was silence all around, and gusts of cool wind came on, as if it was going to rain. All the other fireflies were looking for shelter from the rain, but it was the only one flying carefree in the air. Suddenly, heavy rain poured down, and the fireflies were all frightened. Except it was not afraid. It flew bravely in the air, fighting the storm. (Opportunity favors those who are prepared)
The rain stopped, the flowers and trees on the ground were blown down, and the fireflies disappeared. Suddenly, two bright stars appeared in the sky, one was a firefly, and the other was a star belonging to the firefly. The light they emitted illuminated the earth.
This thin firefly succeeded. It became the brightest star in the world. (Sharp contrast)
In life, we must be brave and persistent like fireflies and not be overwhelmed by difficulties. How can you see a rainbow without going through wind and rain? In fact, success is right in front of us. As long as we persist, we will definitely reach the other side of success.
Variation and innovation:
This article is very successful in using the genre of fairy tales to reveal the philosophy contained in phenomena in nature and to give people useful enlightenment. The way this article is written, you can change the object and write about the relationship between other animals and plants, such as "frog", "bat", etc., which will create more innovative works.
(Recommended by Zeng Weihui and Fang Qingxia)
Title materials: Entering the world of novels (coincides with the second unit of the second volume of the 9th grade version of the People's Education Press)
Life Just like a kaleidoscope, there is light and darkness; life is like a river, with clear streams and turbid sand; life is like a big stage, with justice and evil... In the accumulation of your life, whether Recognizing these ups and downs, do you think of the characters in typical storylines?
Please pick up your pen and use the creative techniques of novels to write an essay. Prepare your own topic.
Instructions for ideas
The material in this question actually stipulates the writing style. Novels depict typical characters in typical environments and through typical storylines. The novel should make full use of portrait description, action description, language description, psychological activity description, etc. to depict the character. It can fictionalize the storyline, pay attention to the beginning, development, climax and ending of the storyline, and reveal a theme of certain era significance.
Wonderful sample essays
Problems
Dong Dan from Shecheng Middle School, Yushe County, Shanxi Province
Highlights: Portraying the self-exposure of characters
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This article is a short story. The author depicts a typical image of Director Gao who accepts bribes but is afraid of exposure, and reveals the corruption in official circles. The selection of the article is of contemporary significance. This article is undoubtedly another alarm bell for increasing anti-corruption efforts in today's society.
The highlight of this article is the vivid description of character actions and psychological activities, which portrays Director Gao's character traits vividly and realistically. The closing question also leaves room for the reader's imagination.
Director Gao was sitting on the sofa with his legs crossed and a cigar in his mouth, reading the newspaper. At this time the doorbell rang, and he quickly got up and opened the door. (Action description, image portrayal)
His subordinate Director Cheng came in, holding a cigarette in his hand. Their bureau was selecting cadres, and the director knew his purpose at a glance. I think I came here in the same way, and now it’s time to enjoy other people’s patronage.
Sure enough, after everyone exchanged a few words, they got down to the topic and talked about the selection. Director Gao just agreed casually, never taking his eyes off the cigarette, thinking, I just want to use a cigarette. Touch me? That's ridiculous! Director Cheng finally stood up to say goodbye. Before leaving, he specially asked, "Director Gao, please taste this pack of cigarettes." (One is psychological description - greed; the other is implicit - bribery)
Sending Director Cheng away, he hurried back to the room, closed the door, and eagerly opened the carton of cigarettes. There was a stack of cigarettes inside. I counted the RMB, 200, which is about the same, Director Gao beamed with joy.
(The action description is distinctive; cannonballs wrapped in sugar)
After settling these, he picked up the newspaper again and read it nonchalantly. Suddenly, a piece of news came into view: the CEO of a large state-owned enterprise was sentenced to 20 years in prison for embezzling public funds and accepting bribes. He smiled and said to himself, idiot! Can't you learn to be smarter? Be smarter? Learn from me! (Although there are lessons learned from the past, I am taking chances)
Buzzing, one long leg The mosquito woke up Director Gao who was concentrating with his eyes closed. He waved his hand, how annoying! Director Gao seemed to be still in his dream and cursed angrily, you bastard! You dare to confront me? You are not what I told you. If you go up, you go up. If I tell you to go down, do you have to go down?! (Talking to himself, telling the truth with one word and covering the sky with one hand) The mosquito was also frightened and flew towards the window.
The mosquito seemed a little domineering, and also seemed to be mocking the director. The director stood up and wanted to kill the damn bug. Suddenly, the mosquito was caught by a crystal and flexible spider web in the corner. Director Gao smiled contemptuously, turned around and smoked a cigar.
For some reason, he suddenly became a little upset, and he couldn't get rid of the situation of mosquitoes being stuck in his mind. I don't know why, but this word comes to mind: The legal net is wide and open, and there are no omissions. (It indicates that the tragedy is about to happen again)
He slapped his forehead hard, what happened to me? Could it be that I can do it too... But then I thought about it, how did I become the director in the first place? Don’t rely on giving gifts? Nowadays, society is like this. Wouldn’t it be a loss if I don’t accept it? Feng shui is changing. But what should I do if something happens? The money I have now... Oh! This is really a difficult problem! (The climax of the story is thought-provoking and memorable)
Variation innovation:
p>He is good at making up stories, depicting characters in detail, and using various description methods to let the characters show themselves on the stage. How to bring the characters to life is what this article is worth learning from. The symbol of mosquito in the article is also very prominent, which also reflects the author's ingenuity in conception. If you write about topics such as "anti-corruption", "warning call", "temptation" and "loss", this article is of great reference value.
(Recommended by Yang Haiyan and Xu Yun)
My Family’s War
Wang Xu, Shecheng Middle School, Yushe County, Shanxi Province
Highlights Introduction: Use the past to reflect the present with humor
The highlight of this article is very prominent: the content is about the ordinary war and peace of a family of three, but the method is compared with the story of the Three Kingdoms. Turning the past into the present, learning and applying it vividly make this article outstanding among similar compositions.
The author's concept of combining the past with the present, humorous language, and the theme of pursuing democracy and harmony are all very prominent. It is a very unique composition.
Although I know nothing about painting, let me use a painting to represent our family (the association is strange and fascinating)... OK! This map of the Three Kingdoms period with the Three Kingdoms standing in tripod and dividing the world into three parts is another example. Couldn't be more appropriate.
Let me introduce myself first: My surname is Wang and my given name is Wang Xu. At home, I am Liu Bei from Sichuan and Sichuan. My mother is Sun Quan of Soochow and my father is Cao Cao of Wei. (One-to-one correspondence, using the past to reflect the present)
Sixteen years ago, Liu Bei was born. Since then, there have been many wars and smoke billowing in the family, and the situation is very impressive. Sun and Liu are extremely dissatisfied with Cao Cao's behavior of using the throne to control the princes. Liu Bei then determined to rebel against Cao Cao's thieves and establish the Han Dynasty - to strive for democracy and autonomy! (Explanation, highlighting the main idea)
In the ninth year of Liu Bei, the classic battle in the Romance of the Three Kingdoms - the Battle of Red Cliff broke out. Let me tell you in detail.
One day, Cao Cao returned to the camp drunk and unconscious. He suddenly cursed Sun Quan for no reason in the camp, and finally sent troops to the bedroom. Sun Quan was furious and sent troops to the dining room. Sun knew that he was no match for Cao, so he asked Liu for help. , the battle between Sun and Cao was about to begin. In the end, it was up to me, the resourceful Liu Bei, to resolve the situation. Cao fell asleep as soon as he entered the room, while Sun Quan was in the room counting out Cao's crimes. Early the next morning, Cao Cao, who had been trained so thoroughly, was so angry that he drooled. Cao Cao almost wanted to drown... Finally he realized his mistake and had to bow his head and admit his guilt. Such severe "tracheitis" made Liu Bei dumbfounded. (Focusing on the family's "Battle of Red Cliff")
Time flies, the sun and the moon fly by, and we are now in the 21st century. This is the information age, and Liu Bei of Sichuan and Sichuan is in charge of the keyboard. Those who enjoy it are deeply involved in it, not thinking about tea and food, and it is extremely enjoyable. Cao and Liu saw that he was so obsessed with the game and feared that it would be difficult for him to become a great weapon in the long run, so they agreed to attack together. They saw that Cao and Sun's troops were like breaking bamboo, advancing layer by layer. Liu Bei knew how powerful he was, but he was defeated by words, and finally calmed down with actions. During the war, I reluctantly gave up my love. Even so, I realized that there is a way to victory since ancient times - never tire of learning, and use knowledge to strengthen yourself. Cao Sun was also tired. (Focus on dealing with "I" being addicted to games)
Although collisions were inevitable among the Three Kingdoms, year after year, day after day, democracy finally became stronger and stronger. (Take care of the front and rear, compact structure) Since then, the war has become less and less, and the peace has become increasingly harmonious.
This is the Three Kingdoms War in our family.
Variation and innovation:
Using the past to incorporate the present, turning reality into fiction, you can write something that is originally ordinary, humorous and full of interest. This is a writing skill worth learning by students. This article makes good use of this technique and achieves a natural and interesting effect.
Have you mastered this surprising skill in writing related activities?
(Recommended by Yang Haiyan and Xu Yun)
Wonderful essay
Thousands of years of pipa playing in Hu language
Shandong Zibo Linzi District Experimental Middle School Tan Chen
Highlight introduction: Carefully drafted title to show his unique style and unique materials, Talking about Zhaojun
This article interprets Zhaojun in such a grand and sad way, and I admire the young author's writing style and knowledge reserve. There are two readable points in this article: One is the title of the article. "Thousands of years of pipa playing nonsense", what a poetic stroke, what a sad stroke. This stroke is a portrayal of Zhaojun's life and the final chapter of her life through the ages. This title alone will lead us into the magnificent history, into the Tang Dynasty, and behold her graceful elegance. Second, the selection of materials is very unique. It is difficult to condense Zhaojun's life into more than 700 words. Any of Zhaojun's deeds can be written into a long novel, but the author uses summary and poetic language to downplay the details of her life and highlight her soul. . It is this treatment of materials that gives the article a richness of culture and history.
From the beautiful Zigui to the bustling Chang'an, you walked with a smile; from the splendid palace to the vast desert, you faced it calmly. No matter how much resentment and sorrow there is, it can only flow along the strings. Zhaojun, you are like a clear spring in the magnificent historical picture, singing beautiful poems in a low voice... (A novel metaphor, leaving a deep impression on people.)
The beauty and charm of the Jiangnan water town are in You have left an indelible beauty on your body, your graceful figure and your beautiful fair face. This is the best gift Zigui can give you. But the mountains and valleys of my hometown cannot keep you. Although the poetic and picturesque scenery of small bridges and flowing water is the pastoral life you yearn for, the imperial edict of Emperor Yuan of the Han Dynasty requires you to go to Chang'an... You feel like crying but have no tears. (Writing about landscapes is actually about writing about people.)
When you came to Chang'an, to Yeting, and saw the splendid palaces, you felt indescribable joy in your heart. There were so many beauties all around giving gifts to the painter in order to win the emperor's favor. You shook your head and ignored them. You naively thought that your beauty would not be buried in the harem, but you didn't expect that the flaws that Mao's painter touched on your portrait would become your fatal flaw, and you lived a lonely and lonely life day after day. You once thought that the palace was a warm place, but now you are shivering inside, your previous fantasy has come to nothing, and you want to escape. But how to escape? (The arrogance of not being secular also brought out the author's own sentiments.)
When the Xiongnu Chanyu came to the court, you asked yourself to travel far. The emperor read your letter and agreed casually. But he didn't expect that fate would play a big joke on him. On the day before you left, you were rich and beautiful, and you were moving around. When the emperor saw you, he was astonished, but he soon regretted it. (The author is more casual, which has the meaning of life.)
When you follow Chanyu to the outside of the Great Wall, your inner confinement relaxes, and there is a new world there. But soon you are lonely again. The difference in living customs makes you at a loss as to what to do, and your heart seems to be empty, filled with loneliness. You often flow the sadness of your soul into eighteen beats of Hujia under the cold moon. Even the wild geese couldn't bear to listen to the sad sound of the piano... (The eighteen beats of the Hujia that traveled through the ages have become an unheard sound.)
But your journey to the north has resolved the heavy ice of war that lasted more than a hundred years. You stepped forward at the critical moment, completed the sublimation of your personality, and maintained the peace between the Han and the Huns for more than half a century. You sacrificed your small family for everyone, chose to bear the burden of history with your soft shoulders, and endured the loneliness and sadness. You are our pride! The pipa has been playing nonsense for thousands of years, Zhaojun, you are standing in the eternal scenery in history. (Highly appraise Zhaojun's escape from the enemy, with rational analysis.)
Variation innovation:
This article's evaluation of Zhaojun is extremely accurate, and it goes right to the point of portraying the characters. Leave more blank space for imagination. The sky of literature requires the wings of imagination. It is this clever blank space that allows readers' thoughts to fly better. The second is to depict the characters with the help of scene description. The water and soil of one place nourishes one person. The mountains and rivers of Jiangnan endow Zhaojun with a beautiful appearance and a soul as soft and strong as water. The yellow sand and cold moon of the desert can better set off her lonely heart... Because of this, there is also the nonsense that the thousand-year-old pipa has turned into. We can learn from this method of characterizing. This article is about Zhaojun. You can also select the content of his Hujia Shibapai and analyze her image from the content. It is also easy to come up with new ideas from this perspective. (Recommended by Lu Yiran)
Wonderful essay
Appreciating nature
Xu Bingqi, a third-year student in Linzi Experimental Middle School, Zibo, Shandong
Highlights: Typical essence of title preparation and ingenuity in material selection
This article expresses feelings about the beauty of nature and is a prose poem praising nature.
The structure of the article is very novel. The concise introduction in the form of an inscription serves as the guide for the entire text. The main part of the text is written in the chronological order of spring, summer, autumn and winter, with clear layers. Each part has a subtitle. When formulating the title, a one- or four-character correct phrase is used, and certain words are used to highlight the characteristics of the respective seasons. Regarding the organizational materials of each part, the materials that best highlight the characteristics of the season are selected based on the season.
The four seasons are a poem, a poem created by nature.
——Inscription
(A total stroke, a word "poetry", sets the emotional tone of the article.)
Smart Spring
p>Every year, the first thing to report to us is undoubtedly spring. Every time, she comes quietly, with a slight breeze blowing, the fields turn light yellow and light green, and when the branches also ripple with a little light green, spring is really here. (Spring comes early, which points out the mood when spring comes, which is anthropomorphic.)
Spring is undoubtedly smart. (To highlight the essence of spring, the transition is natural and clever.)
In the early morning, a little sunshine lazily spreads on the river, bringing some pearl-like mystery to the soft river surface. "The wind suddenly picks up, ruffling a pool of spring water." The weeping willows on the river, accompanied by this gust of wind, also danced their waists, like a moving girl. Even the birds in the trees couldn't help but sing. In this dreamlike world, no one wants to disturb you. (The harmonious and beautiful picture embodies the meaning of "smart".)
I don't expect that spring will bring me flowers. As long as the spring breeze spreads across every corner of my heart, I will be full of confidence. The yellow leaves are filled with fragrant and mellow drinks, plowing the plowshares of youth. (Don’t be immersed in the surface of things, but look at the essence of things rationally.)
The chic Xia
In just one night, Xia will use her roughness and heroism to replace The tender words of spring. She was so chic that spring seemed to leave no trace, and the air of summer appeared everywhere. (The chic summer is presented to the reader as a whole.)
In the early morning, the pure blue sky makes people feel refreshed, and the clouds hanging leisurely in the sky are also white and golden, as if they were It looks like it has been washed and dyed. There is also a bit of golden color in the air, which is filled with lush green, making the surrounding colors colorful. (Writing about summer from the "details" makes people indulge in it, and the language is full of poetry.)
The warm wind that has just arrived in summer awakens the cicadas that have been dormant for a long time. The duet of the chirping cicadas and the grasshoppers, which is now fast and sometimes slow, sometimes quiet and sometimes loud as the wind blows in the woods, makes the music even more subtle. (Writing summer from the perspective of sound.)
Elegant Autumn
Autumn always comes unknowingly. It is not like spring, which surprises us with a wild flower on the roadside; nor is it like winter, which makes us intoxicated by the romance of the first snow. She is so elegant that she "waves her sleeves and does not take away a cloud." (It does not show the color of autumn, but the feeling of autumn is already revealed.)
When a maple forest is dyed red, plus With a little drizzle, the grass in the forest becomes the sound of autumn. In the poetic autumn sounds, the chirping of autumn insects also has a bit of free and easy elegance. (A big background, listening to the drizzle and the whispering of autumn insects.)
In the evening, walking on the boulevard under the afterglow of the setting sun, a withered yellow leaf turned in the air several times, Finally he fell to the ground and returned to his mother's arms. Feeling the elegance of the leaves, an unknown melancholy surged in my heart. It can be said that "the sound of the sycamore tree sounds of autumn, and the sound of a branch of banana brings sadness." (The sadness of autumn by the ancients gives the article a heavy feeling.)
Beautiful winter
In winter, the twilight fields are vast, calm and desolate, but in the end it brings a perfect and unique end to the poetry of nature. Winter is a wonder of nature in my eyes. The snowflakes flying all over the sky, the wintersweet standing proud of the frost, and the crackling ice particles on the windowsill all tell the story of winter. They are so peaceful, simple, pure and holy. In winter, one’s character is sharpened in the cold, and new hope is nurtured in the ice and snow. Because of this romance, it also makes winter beautiful. (The angle chosen is very novel, and it was written out of the coldness of winter.)
The poems of the four seasons record the agility of spring, the chicness of summer, the elegance of autumn, and the beauty of winter. The four seasons are like four songs, each with a moving melody, and like a symphony, with four high and low movements, harmoniously blending into one... The four seasons are poetry, the four seasons are paintings, the four seasons bring us wonderful enjoyment, and the four seasons make Our soul has been sublimated, and it also records our life, the 365 days and nights we have experienced. (To summarize the above, the sentence structure is integrated and integrated, novel and meaningful.)
Variation innovation:
This article is a hymn to nature. Faced with the big topic of nature, the author cleverly cuts it into sections and writes from four aspects: spring, summer, autumn and winter, and uses subtitles to frame the content of the writing. There are many points that can be written about spring. In order to avoid being scattered, use a "flexible" to "restrict" it. Around this point, the selected materials will not be scattered. When we write about a big topic, we might as well learn from this method, cut the big topic into pieces, and add a small title to each piece to frame the writing scope. This writing method of converting big words into small words is worth trying. The article can also be cut from the perspective of a certain scenery, such as mountains, rivers, cultural landscapes, etc., to illustrate the appreciation of natural beauty.
(Recommended by Lu Yiran)
Calling for Green
Yu Longyao, a third-year junior at Linzi Experimental Middle School in Zibo, Shandong
Highlights: Layer The in-depth and in-depth discussion of the theme of improving objects and images is in-depth.
This article is an article about protecting the natural environment. Today, when environmental protection has become the common consciousness of mankind around the world, the author does not use big principles to discuss the importance of environmental protection to human survival, but starts from the melancholy and disappointment caused by the disappearance of green around him. Calling for the return of green.
The author contrasts the ideal nature with the real nature, giving people a strong visual impact. Facing reality, the author's thoughts break through time and space, and the content becomes rich. The green once upon a time has been completely lost, who is to blame? It goes without saying that the sense of urgency is more vivid.
If it only stays at the green level, the article will be very flat and there will be no ups and downs. At the end, the author extended from green and classified all beautiful things under "green", expanding the connotation of "green" and making the theme more in-depth.
"Why do the white clouds shed tears quietly, why do the gusts of wind speak for her." (Quote from the lyrics, which has a sad meaning.)
Every time I can't help humming When I played this song, I felt a deep respect for the little girl, and at the same time I suddenly felt an inexplicable sadness. I was a child who grew up in an environment of high-rise buildings. I had never seen a truly dense forest or green mountains. As for the free birds and gurgling streams, they were even more distant legends to me. All impressions of nature, apart from books and television, are just hearsay. In my mind, the sky is always gray during the day, and at night, I don’t even know how the sky is filled with stars. Occasionally, there is silver moonlight, and I feel lonely there alone. (The two images are in stark contrast, highlighting the theme.)
I go for a walk in my free time, but the noise of the city makes me upset, and the exhaust from the cars makes me afraid to breathe. , what makes me even more miserable is that from time to time I see a thick tree being chopped down, and I seem to hear their painful groans. Who can imagine that the barren Loess Plateau was once a lush forest. Now only the thick underground coal mines can prove its former greenness and vitality. The rolling Yellow River was once crystal clear, but now even the Yangtze River has turned into the Yellow River. I had no choice but to return home. Although the few potted flowers I raised were nothing compared to the forest, they were only a drop in the bucket for greening the environment. However, I finally saw green, the color and hope of life. (Flexible thinking, breaking through the limitations of time and space, and having a profound awareness of environmental protection.)
Before God created humans, he had already created nature, and nature is harmonious. The green mountains are surrounded by green water, the blue sky is dotted with white clouds, the stars will surely hold the moon, and the fragrance of flowers will surely harmonize with the chirping of birds. The beauty of the mountains and the vastness of the sea alone are enough for all creatures in nature to thank God for giving us such a beautiful world. (A thought-provoking stroke, which contributes to the strength of the article.)
Green is the eternal basic color of life, the messenger of peace, and full of youthful vitality. I love green, no matter how noisy the flower season is, I am still willing to keep silently a touch of fresh green, no matter how many years go by, my heart will remain the same. I call for green, for peace, for health. I wish that the vastness of green, the depth of green, and the purity of green will stay in my heart forever. I reply to my gratitude for life with the unique green color of life. (Express your beautiful wish to call for green, making the theme big and deep.)
Variation innovation:
This article is written in response to the disappearance of "green", because beauty has disappeared , to "call", the author calls not only green, but the beautiful things and emotions that have disappeared in human life. The author's choice of angle is very clever. If he were to call out all the beauty, the article would be very large and empty. The author chooses a green dot to write, which makes it easier to write deeply. Finally, by appropriately extending this point, the coverage becomes wider, and the call for all the good things that have disappeared is reflected. When writing about multiple things, focus on writing one point in detail, and then mention other techniques that we can learn from. The article can also be written in the form of a combination of pictures, like Mr. Lu Xun's "Hometown", which writes about the green in memories, the green in reality, and the ideal green. By organically intersecting and integrating these three parts, it will also Write a good article.
(Recommended by Lu Yiran)