Seven words stay overnight in Nanyue Zhurongfeng.
The world of mortals is like a prison, and there is no intention to escape from the guest door.
Don't do Buddhist work in the mud, but cherish the Confucian robes you have learned.
In Vanity Fair, Yuanyang dreamed of a short romantic life and high blood pressure.
I am most afraid of my talent in my life, so I often come here to listen to Songtao.
Let's sing a few residual poems, and wait for Changhe to learn the best poems of bamboo poets. ...
Poetry (1)
Thoughts on the outing of wife and children during the Spring Festival (new rhyme)
It's cold when the rain knocks on the window at night, and I can't sleep alone.
If you don't expect wine, you will worry about your thoughts. Drunk people worry about their children's sleep.
1, "solitary" light is a "single" pair, which is both solitary and unique, and waste words are superimposed.
2. The image of "sleep, sleep" keeps repeating.
3, "Drunken worries can be embarrassing", blunt and obscure! Sleep soundly ...
4, brothers' words and phrases need to be honed a lot!
The title of this poem is "My wife and children are traveling with feelings". The two brothers didn't sleep in this cold night, but they only "worried about their children" and didn't worry about their wives? Son is important! This wife is no longer important. ...
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The rain is knocking on the window, and the night is very cold.
Lonely lamp with sigh.
I didn't mean to spell a sad sentence by drinking.
Drunk wife and children can't sleep well.
Take this song to touch your wife. ...
Poetry (2)
What is the autumn feeling of operators?
The rain in autumn feels very cold and the time is short.
The world of mortals is hard to circumvent, and the board is like a fish sigh.
My heart is higher than the sky and my life is like duckweed.
If you go for a walk, what are the gains and losses?
1, "The world of mortals cannot be circumvented". What does it mean to teach the old lady patiently? Difficult to control! I can't look around. ...
2, "the chopping board is like a fish sigh", want to show that you are a fish in the case and let others kill you? The sentence pattern is too stiff!
3. "Love" means misfortune. Wang's Preface to Wang Tengting has the following words: "Bad luck, bad luck." Life can be solved; Life is like duckweed, stiff! Suspected of rhyming.
4. "Where is the gain and loss?" It's too weak to have a rest. ...
5, "short, sigh, sigh, calculate" brothers have deep feelings, but the choice of rhyme is definitely problematic. None of the above rhymes are appropriate and fluent.
6, regardless of poetry, rhyme is very important! Remember, brothers (about how to choose rhymes and how to use them).
Poetry (3)
Magpie fairy? Miss each other
Thin clouds and stars, the wind shadow on the moon, a flower letter leaning against the window.
Affection is easy, helplessness is easy, and knowing flowers is easy.
Life is shallow, ordinary love is thin, and it is suspected that it is stupid for ten years.
It's hard to add incense and candle wine unless it's an inch.
1, a pseudo-graceful song, piled up words, and the syntax is blunt!
2. Brother, please explain the following wonderful sentences to the old man:
What is "Moon Shadow"? Catch the wind, catch the shadow ... What does "deep affection" mean? What does it mean to know that flowers are easy to use and eyebrows are one inch long?
3, such a small order is purely based on the spectrum! I won't comment much, because my brother's lyrics haven't been introduced yet ...
4, the text is fluent, the meaning is fluent, and readers are interested in enjoying fluent works! Brother, remember?
Poetry (4)
Qilvxiao village
In the sunshine after the snow in the small village, I recalled countless childhood songs.
Happy voices move houses, and crystal colors shine on glaciers.
Pine branches are half at the top of the mountain, with green trees and white clouds.
Every winter, the heart is not cold, and it is cold and sunny.
1, Happy House, earthquake? Such exaggeration is ridiculous!
2, "the pine branches are half green", a blunt sentence! This is an antithesis.
3, "it's cold and sunny", sick sentences, words and rhymes! I don't know what to say.
4. Brother! Mark a "seven laws" to fool the old lady? You have put a lot of effort into this sentence, but I am more tired to read it. ...
5. As for the poetic disease of "sunny, cold and snowy forest", I won't comment much!
6. It's a long way to go in Xiu Yuan, and I'm sure my little brother will be able to write a steady and elegant law. Will not disappoint the old lady like China football. ...
Poetry (5)
Lv Qi's feeling of going home during the summer vacation.
Returning farmland to forests and mountains, the stream is green and drunk.
The sky reflects fish and shrimp, and the pine and cypress are uneven.
The young and old urge the sun and the moon in the fields, and the able-bodied catch blueflies in the north and south.
When will urban and rural wealth arrive? People's reunion is different.
1, the combination of chin, neck and tail is suspected to be a flat head.
2, "the stream is green", repeat, "drunk as a picture", rhymes!
3. "There are pheasant rabbits in the pine and cypress". Can sawtooth and reflection be right? This sentence is blunt!
4. What do you mean by "urging the sun and the moon"? Until the sun and the moon ...
5. "The strong men in the north and the south catch green dragonflies", and green dragonflies refer to money. There is a saying in Hanshan in the Tang Dynasty that "there is no blue dragonfly in the bag, but yellow silk in the basket". Yuan Guzi praised the poem "Willow in the South of the City", "Then there are no green ants in your statue, because there are no green flies in my bag". Bluegrass works for the sun and the moon.
6, the sentence at the end is too simple, and the sentence is a sick sentence!
7, brother, the theme is good, and the writing is too rough. Then cut it with your heart ...
8. When will both urban and rural areas get rich? Ask through the ages! From the rainy night in osawa township before Qin Dynasty, all previous dynasties' "advocating righteousness" captured people's hearts with the slogan of "equal wealth" or similar slogans! Who fulfilled the empty promises? The whole world, generation after generation, would rather believe it! I also believe that one day, I believe that "the saint has come out, Huang Heqing"! Believe that you are "the successor of capitalism"! Little brother, wash and sleep, and realize a Chinese dream. ...
Poems (6)
Sixing Xiang Yu
There are negative ambitions before the battle, and empty concubines in the account.
The world pulls out the water of Shandong, and Hong Men hates it for life.
1, the sentence is obscure, the sentence is vague, the sentence is patched together, and the sentence is established.
2. I feel sorry for the works of Xi Chu Bawang. Over the past 1000 years, there have been too many works at all levels and angles! From form to content, it is impossible to dig out new ideas. Du's "Make a comeback", Yi 'an's "Outstanding People", Wang Anshi's "Fatigue after Hundreds of Wars" and Dongpo, Jia Xuan, Yuan Mei and Cao Xueqin's "Beauty of Jiangshan" are even more excessive. ...
I won't comment on this boring job.
Step 4 (bend over)
Wu Zhui Jian Bei,
Bloody love.
Hong Men Leng Yue took a sad picture.
I still hate the injustice done to the king.
On June 30, 2022, the butterfly dance was completed.