The teacher commented on the composition 1 Amid cheers, all the final exams were finally over. We will leave the campus temporarily and embrace the long-awaited holiday life. Although we are full of expectations, we are still somewhat disappointed. In addition to the students who get along with each other day and night, there will always be a warm smile in my mind.
On the eve of the holiday, we went back to school to attend the farewell ceremony. This semester, the overall performance of our class is not bad, and the students' faces are filled with happy smiles. Just open the student status handbook, and the first thing that catches your eye is still the handsome handwriting and a familiar smiling face. In the teacher's comment column, you left me a message: "This semester has made great progress, but you still need to continue to work hard, I hope you can achieve better results"! A simple smiling face followed.
Looking at this smiling face reminds me of the year when I first met you. At that time, I was introverted and unwilling to communicate with others. In class, you asked me to answer questions. Although I knew the answer in my heart, the whole class burst into laughter because of my nervous answer. From then on, I am even more reluctant to raise my hand to speak. I still listen carefully in class, but whenever you ask questions, I bury my head lower. I hope you will. Since then, this smiling face has lived in my heart. Every time I encounter setbacks or success, you will not hesitate to give me this smiling face and let it become my driving force.
Time flies, I've been with you for almost five years. In the near future, I will graduate and leave you, but the smiling face you left me will always accompany me. In the hot summer, there are several birdsongs from time to time outside the window, and the indoor temperature makes people feel stuffy and irritable. Looking at a pile of exercise books on the table, I was in a daze, and suddenly that familiar smiling face flashed in front of me. I smiled as soon as I got warm.
Teacher's Comments Composition 2 Lv Lanhai is my teacher. She has neat and slightly yellow short hair, bright eyes and Zhang Yuanyuan's face, which shows the unique attitude of intellectuals. She is also my head teacher. She has a magical power that often inspires us, supports us and warms us.
Once, I was a seed that had not germinated yet, waiting quietly for a spring rain encounter.
Now, in the breeze, I thrive. I am standing under the blue sky, with thick green branches and leaves pointing to the sky, and it-the breeze shuttles among the green leaves, cutting the mottled leaves.
The autumn wind is crazy and fierce, as fierce as fire and burning. A year ago, I stepped into this unknown campus with a childlike look.
On weekends, my classmates invited me out to play, and I came home very late. Suddenly, I remembered that I didn't write Zhou Ji, so I rushed to write wildly, finished it in more than ten minutes, and then fell asleep happily. I handed in my weekly diary the next morning and did nothing all day. On the third day of math class, Zhou Ji sent it. A line of scarlet comment on writing stood out: "You have misspelled so many words, which are too sloppy ..." I was lost in thought, when a female middle school student raised her voice: "Today, everyone is very serious about Zhou Ji, but only a few people deal with it rashly ..." When she said this, she gave me a look, and my face immediately burned and my head was buried. The mezzo-soprano rang again: "A person's vision should be higher, and the details determine success or failure ..." The teacher didn't talk much, but every sentence was earnest. Now, I have been relieved and gradually got rid of my carelessness. The autumn wind in September blew away dead branches and leaves. Although the process is very painful, you can put on elegant starlight afterwards.
The spring breeze is very light and soft, and it will pass as soon as it blows. I didn't get good grades in the final exam of the first semester of junior high school. I will study hard next semester, and after three successes, I have a feeling of flying high. So next month's exam, I retreated a thousand miles, was hit hard, and never recovered. At that time, the teacher's comment was written like this: "A person's collapse is not due to objective pressure, but his weak willpower ..." This sentence was deeply imprinted in my heart. From then on, I learned to put myself in the other's shoes, pick up textbooks, review knowledge and move forward wholeheartedly. After that, I got a relatively good result. Just like, if you can show your courage in those days, it is not enough to stand out from the crowd.
Now that I think about it, it was the teacher's comments that put me on the right path, just like the spring breeze in February, which blew out new green trees.
In the future, the winds from different seasons, sometimes quiet and warm, sometimes sudden pain, will still blow me and "cut" me. When I am stronger, I bow my head and my feet are full of vitality. At this time, I really appreciate that meeting.
Teacher's comment on composition 3 1, the full-text narrative is concentrated, without branches or vines, the language is concise and smooth, and the feelings are sincere and touching.
2. By enriching the characters' language and actions, the characters' ideological quality, reasonable article imagination, natural and vivid narration, compact structure, natural and coherent connection and prominent center are highlighted.
3. The language is concise, the center is clear, the thinking is reasonable, and the writing level is clear.
4. It is really valuable to write the inner activities of the characters vividly and leave a deep impression on people.
5. The article is coordinated from beginning to end, with clear center and complete structure.
6. The article is well-founded, persuasive, with outstanding personality, natural context transition, clear organization, caring from beginning to end, pointing out the ending and highlighting the central idea.
7. The author observes … carefully, describes it delicately, and has vivid language and novel expression.
8. The full-text language is concise, the structure is natural, ... The article has a rigorous structure and echoes from beginning to end.
9. The language is humorous and interesting, the plot arrangement is tortuous and vivid, and the first and last echoes are clever. Although the length of this article is short, the content is vivid and concrete, the paragraphs are clear and the language is easy to understand.
10, a series of verbs expressing the actions of characters are used accurately and well.
1 1、""; Coupled with the breeze and willow flowers, the spring in the pen is picturesque and beautiful!
12. The descriptions of ""and ""are unique, childlike and refreshing, and the quotation of this ancient poem is also appropriate, which enhances the expression effect of the article.
13, spring is really beautiful. Grasp the writing of "",write the characteristics of "",and write the characteristics of "". Although we have all seen these scenery, we have a brand-new feeling through your careful observation.
14, the full text is lively, the language is fresh, and it is always full of humor and fun to read.
15, the tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, which makes people fondle it.
16, the article fully and appropriately renders the atmosphere of … and gives a detailed and vivid description of the key point of the article ….
17, this composition has novel materials, wonderful ideas and lively language. There is a fresh breath of life and children's interest between the lines.
18, don't be afraid of trouble, good articles have been changed. ...
19. The content of this article is vivid and rich, the language is novel and refreshing, and the structure is unique and reasonable.
20. Observe carefully and write clearly the characteristics of ""according to the method of summarizing first and then dividing. Accurate language and concrete images make us feel immersive.
2 1, this passage has a general description, a specific description, a dynamic and static, and writes the loveliness of "". Take care of the exercises before and after, observe them carefully and write down your favorite feelings.
22. Because of rich associations, the pen front shines brilliantly. Look, compare ""with ""and ""with "". How vividly these figurative metaphors write "".
23. Writing scenery captures the characteristics of scenery and describes the blending of scenery, from far to near, from surface to point, and handles it in an orderly way. The articles written are more coherent, and the scenery has different shapes and colors, which captures the modeling characteristics.
24. In your pen, it is like a small garden, full of vitality. The description of ""is in sequence, which is clear at a glance.
25. The characteristics of ""are introduced from the outside to the inside. Observe orderly and meticulously, write accurately and vividly, mobilize a variety of senses, and the content is true and concrete.
26. This article wrote a very common thing about giving up your seat. Although the selection of materials is a bit trite, the writing of comparison is still very appropriate: the description of characters is concise and vivid. The description of the portrait of middle-aged women is only a dozen words, but it captures the characteristics. The two descriptions of Mr. Pang are also very successful, which fully shows the author's disgust and contempt for him.
27. End with a question, leaving room for readers to think. The ending sticks to the theme and expresses the author's complicated feelings. That's right. Write "cry" at the beginning and "laugh" at the end, which is harmonious from beginning to end and effectively expresses the theme.
28. Little girl, don't forget that "there is no limit to learning the sea, but there is no limit to sailing." Life has a long way to go. If you don't reach your goal and are exhausted, the door of Peking University Tsinghua is open, but it's a pity that you are gone!
29. "The future is limitless. Twelve-year-old children should be congratulated, and another excellent work has come out! Being able to speak this language means that there is no one in the motherland.
30. The careful description of inner activities and clever care before and after prove that you have mastered certain writing skills. From your article, I seem to see Ba Jin in the century! "
The teacher commented on the composition 4 1. How carefully you have observed it, especially the characteristics of spring, with appropriate wording and vivid description. You deserve to be a young writer in your class.
The article you wrote is vivid, with accurate words and appropriate metaphors, especially the imagination in the last natural paragraph, which closely follows the theme and expresses your wishes.
Your words are accurate and vivid, and your language is fluent. You can also use many people's poems to describe plum blossoms. It turns out that you are as unique as cotton.
4. You have so much knowledge! Not only do you know the origin of the name "Milan", but you can also compare "Milan" with Chinese rose flowers to highlight your own characteristics.
The article you wrote is really vivid, with accurate words and appropriate metaphors, especially the imagination in the last paragraph, which closely follows the theme and expresses your wishes.
6. Correct format is your advantage, and scribbling is your disadvantage. I hope you can carry forward your advantages, correct your shortcomings and be a model of "good homework".
7. Your article is very creative in structure and deeply reveals your love for chrysanthemums.
8. The language of your article is humorous and colloquial, giving people a cordial feeling. That's great. I believe your composition will be better next time.
9. The teacher is very happy to see your article. The writing is clean and tidy, and the content is novel and interesting. I hope to continue to work hard next time!
10, you carefully observed the grass, at the same time, you linked the grass with the teacher and praised the teacher by praising the grass. Don't you think such an article will have a novel artistic conception?
1 1. Your article describes a scientific and interesting robot with rich imagination. The description is very touching, the language is vivid and fascinating. The teacher is very happy to see your progress.
12, reading your article is inspiring, and fluent language is the highlight of the article. I hope I can write excellent works in the future and try to be a "little writer".
13, the beginning of your exercise is concise and attractive. The content is vivid and concrete, and reading your article really aroused my love.
14, your article has a clear center, prominent points, clear organization, full use of metaphors and personification, and makes things vivid. This is a successful and good article.
15, your article has made rapid progress, especially the fluency of the language. The fly in the ointment is that the writing is still a little sloppy. I hope that your next composition will foster strengths and avoid weaknesses, so that your composition level will reach a new level!
16 You have grasped the static characteristics of Chimonanthus praecox, carefully observed the shape, color, taste and spirit of Chimonanthus praecox, and read your excellent works. You are really moved by its extraordinary temperament.
17, you use typical events to express your character. The narrative is clear and the process is concrete, which makes people feel comfortable to read.
18, your article is lively and interesting. You are really a good boy who observes carefully and is good at thinking.
19, you are good at thinking, observing and summarizing, so you can write such a good article. I hope you will work harder in the future.
20. Teachers are often surprised by the beauty of your sentences and the fluency of your composition. All these show that your thinking is agile, rich and meticulous. But the only thing that worries the teacher is your handwriting. Will anyone recognize it in senior year? The teacher believes that you will give the teacher a surprise soon!
Teacher's comments on the composition 5 1. The article is meticulous, orderly, vivid and concrete, which can be called a masterpiece.
2. The article is novel in content, reasonable in structure, fluent and coherent, with ingenious details and rich foundation.
3. The full-text language is vivid and accurate, and the plot is wonderful and tortuous, which seems to bring readers into a happy paradise and make people smile. The full text is easy to understand and interesting.
4. The clue of the article is clear, the theme is prominent, and the poetic language at the beginning and end of the article is closely around. It is full of imagination and rhythmic beauty, which makes people want to read and love to read.
Appropriate details and the combination of reality and reality are two characteristics, while ... the content is richer and more vivid.
6. The plot faltering is stronger than usual, and the accident can attract readers' attention.
7. The plot changes are unconventional, and the development of unexpected events with occasional suspense and waves reflects the author's innovative ideas.
8. The plot develops smoothly and lacks certain ups and downs.
9. The plot changes are unremarkable and lack new ideas.
10, the plot is straightforward and there is no suspense.
1 1, the detailed ending of the process is short and incomplete. Unreasonable structure gives people the feeling of anticlimactic.
12. Unreasonable ideas are full of loopholes and cannot reflect the truth of life.
13, the plot changes too fast and is not coherent enough.
14, appropriately use the methods of comparison and comparison to prove the center of the article through the disparity and difference between things. Taking advantage of parallelism to explain the characteristics of things in many ways not only enhances the language potential, but also leaves a very deep impression on readers.
15, meticulous description of inner activities and clever care before and after prove that you have mastered certain writing skills.
Teacher's Comments on Composition 6 Every time I send out a test paper, the first thing I want to see is the teacher's comments. The handwriting embedded in the corner of the striking score may be a little scrawled. Occasionally, I will see the handwriting in different shades after the pen is refilled with water, but it feels warm and full-it was written by the teacher himself, and I will naturally cherish it. Looking at the comments and savoring them carefully, you will always be intoxicated, just like enjoying a small poem. Look at the elegant handwriting in the comments, how beautiful it is! Especially the language of praise appears on my test paper, how rare it is!
Look at those changeable words, sometimes serious, sometimes humorous and cheerful, sometimes approachable and sometimes thought-provoking. Whether it is easy to understand or profound twists and turns, it makes my heart beat like a drum. Sometimes we don't criticize or praise directly, but leave a short and enlightening sentence for ourselves to experience. ...
Success and failure coexist, not every exam can be smooth sailing.
It may be that I got carried away because I did better in the previous exam, or maybe I was addicted to surfing the Internet the night before the exam and did surprisingly poorly in the math exam. Until now, the pain of falling out with Sun Shan is still deeply imprinted on my mind. I am no longer eager to hand out test papers, to see comments written by teachers, or even to be afraid of reading them. I know that my behavior has failed the trust of the teacher, and I am ashamed of the comments on the test paper that contain the teacher's painstaking efforts.
The test papers are still being handed out, and I clearly see the students who handed them out smiling contemptuously at me. Facing the test paper, I dare not even read the comments below the score. I don't want to see the cold and critical comments on the test paper, and I don't want to know that the teacher has given up hope on me. I glanced at the test paper helplessly, and what I saw actually relaxed my mood a lot: "No matter how smart a person is, he sometimes thinks long and sometimes loses." Not to mention you? Don't lose hope, the teacher expects your next good grades. "A few short words touched me very much. The teacher didn't despise me because of a slip of the tongue. The teacher understands me.
Because of this lesson and the teacher's profound comments, I got rid of my rashness, arrogance and impetuousness, and I remembered every knowledge. In the next exam, I answered questions with ease and got good grades.
The mood of reading teachers' comments has also become relaxed. Reading the connotation of comments always brings me thinking and reverie. "Where there is a will, there is a way." "Ninety-nine percent of genius depends on hard work", which looks very kind, encouraging and meaningful.
For these reasons, I prefer teachers' comments. Whether it is praise, encouragement, criticism or persuasion, I will carefully understand and keep it in mind, and I will continue to learn and grow from teachers' comments. ...
The teacher commented on the composition 7 1. The structure is complete and the narrative is organized, but this seems to be a mistake. Is it interesting? Your description should focus on "interesting things" The teacher hopes that you will think more about the selection of materials in the future, and I believe you will succeed soon.
As soon as I finished reading your composition, I remembered your innocent smiling face. You must have an emotional connection with the characters in the text! Really well written! But if you want to add icing on the cake, you need two points to become the king of composition in your class: first, use punctuation correctly; Second, think about the content before writing, and don't alter it. You know, there are two effects: changing it right and doing it right directly. Well, good luck!
You really deserve to be the "composition king" in our class. Your literary talent is vividly reflected in this composition. The words and sentences you wrote are great. Keep working hard, today's "king of composition" and tomorrow's famous writer!
Your composition this time is very true, because I know that you did take part in the table tennis competition just held in our town and achieved good results. Congratulations first! The article describes your fierce battles with various players, among which your competition with rural players is the most exciting part. I wrote about your tactical changes and your psychological changes, which made us feel immersive.
You show the charm of autumn with a child's perspective, novel themes and rich content. Your composition is always different, and teachers are ashamed of themselves.
6. Write in your eyes with your pen. It is amazing to write so vividly and concretely. Don't be proud!
7. This article of yours is really an excellent work, exactly the same as the composition on the same topic in the "Composition Daquan" on the teacher's desk. I think this may be because you like this article very much. The teacher has a suggestion. Imitation is ok, but it is not appropriate to copy them all. Some writers made progress by imitation before they became famous. You are at this stage now. You might as well imitate this article, focusing on flowers and fruits, beginning and end care and using metaphors. Go write about peach trees and apricot trees, and have a try!
8. The narrative of the article is very organized and the transition is natural. The process of discovery runs through the subtle changes in your feelings, which is a bit natural. Success! Thank you, teacher. You've been working hard recently!
9. Your Chinese characters have become your symbol and an example for the whole class. The words in the composition book are as good as ever. However, as far as this article is concerned, if you write longer and more detailed, then you are really an example of everyone's composition and a star of the class! How's it going? The teacher thinks you can do it. Work hard!
10, you can write clearly what happened, but it is not specific and the language is not lively and interesting. Pay attention to accumulate more good words and sentences in the future, shall we work together? The teacher believes you!
1 1, your composition is great this time! Your ability to choose words and make sentences is so strong, your writing is so beautiful, and your structure is so rigorous and wonderful! If you can write more neatly, it will be icing on the cake! Come on!
12, xx, your composition is well written, with neat handwriting, fluent sentences, clear organization, clear center, correct punctuation, detailed content and rich emotions. You see, you have almost all the advantages. But there is one shortcoming, alas, I don't need to say it-typo. How's it going? Don't have a headache! If I help you, you must work hard. Well, I wish you success in your studies, just like your name. All right!
13 first of all, your material selection is very solid. Indeed, with your personal experience in playing table tennis, you can write such a vivid article. Secondly, the end of the article echoes, the structure is rigorous, and the words are very rich, showing your solid basic skills. There is no best, only better. I hope you will continue to work hard and strive to become the "king of composition".
14, you are a man of heart in life. It is good to observe life and write down ordinary things in life.
15, the spring you wrote is wonderful. Reading your words, I feel as if I were there.