[original poem]
E ri duo Feng Xue zhi bian
This is the only height I can conquer at present:
I leaned out my forehead carefully,
Be amazed at the thin wall
The sun has been wandering for a long time towards the snow.
Is decisively jumping into an infinite gravity.
Sand and gravel from mountains and seas slide down from time to time,
The brown abyss buzzes from top to bottom,
Like the cry of a distant army.
My knuckles wedged into the crack of the boulder like rivets.
Thousands of torn palms oozed blood from the soles of their feet.
Oh, I really want an eagle or a snow leopard to be with me.
On the corroded rock wall;
But there is a pitifully small spider.
Enjoy this gift from nature silently with me.
Comfortable.
[Appreciation of the poem "Edo Snow Peak Edge" I]
This is a self-portrait of a climber.
The sentence is simple: "This is the only height I can conquer at present." The words "at the moment" and "only" imply multiple meanings: this height is not the "extreme" of "all other mountains are dwarfed under the sky". , but "I" went all out to achieve it; This does not mean that "I" can't reach a new height in the future (or the next moment), nor does it mean that the height at this moment is insignificant. After all, it was a difficult conquest. This sentence also implies that I have conquered one height after another, the gap between goals and efforts, and some kind of "take a breath first" decision. As if it were a reward for all the hardships, "I" was surprised to see the magnificent scenes of snowy peaks and sunsets, one after another overlapping and strangely rising long sentences, saying that the sun finally jumped into the mountains and seas after a long time. I have never seen anyone organize the tension and momentum of the sunset so finely in one sentence. Long sentences are easy to write or tedious or loose or procrastinating, but the image density here shows the poet's tempering ability.
On top of the brilliant visual image, the poet superimposed a grand auditory image, and the rubble of the landslide caused the noise of the abyss, such as the killing of the army drifting away. The superposition of these sounds makes the sunset more spectacular. The dynamics of landslides and sunsets are both declining, which is just the opposite of the dynamics of climbers. Therefore, the effect of audio-visual integration not only produces "sublimity" in the aesthetic sense, but also creates a tension in the reader's physiology. That "Mountains and Seas with Infinite Gravitation" actually wants me to fall. It's not easy for me to stick to this height when the killing sound like hordes of horses goes from top to bottom. The poem immediately changed from the spectacular scene in the eyes of "I" to a description of its own state: the finger was inserted into the crack of the rock, and blood dripped from the soles of the feet. That is to say, the sunset and the landslide were not the objects admired or watched by idle people, but the life experiences of the mountaineering warriors who were close to the cliff here and now.
The poet suddenly came to a "close-up", and a little spider was on the rock wall with me! This is really an unexpected genius. At this height, there is only an unremarkable spider with "I"; At this height, even a tiny spider enjoys the happiness and glory endowed by nature. In contrast to the grandeur and noise of the previous poem, here, the words "pity" and "silent enjoyment" carry a lot of weight. They make the glory of the previous section not only show off, but also make it stand at a humble and firm height. The love for life and praise for vitality are all revealed in this little spider. Many times, the humble little image is more powerful than the common "grandeur".
[Appreciation of the poem "Edo Snow Peak Edge" II]
This poem is about the author's experiences and feelings on the way to the peak.
The title of this poem illustrates the author's position. "This is the height I can only conquer at the moment" implies that the poet is going to have a rest because of physical fatigue at the moment, but he has not given up his plan to conquer new heights. "Carefully lean out your forehead" shows the height. On the other side of the thin wall, there is a scene of snow peaks setting, and the word "hesitation" vividly summarizes the appearance of the sunset. However, the sinking trend of the west is irreversible. At the turn of cold and hot, the red sun approaching the ice peak showed a decisive gesture of jumping to the desperate situation. The seclusion of mountains and seas seems to have infinite gravity like a black hole. Gravel slides down from time to time, and a faction rises in the abyss, just like the shouting and killing of the army. The poet was suddenly startled and instinctively stuffed his knuckles into the cracks in the boulder. This sentence is extremely vivid. The tearing details of Melody show the critical situation at that time.
In the second section, after getting out of danger, the poet realized the sense of accomplishment of conquering nature, so he longed to be with the brave men who conquered nature, such as eagles and snow leopards. However, the appearance of the little spider has made this sense of accomplishment plummet-a poor life ten million times weaker than human beings can still climb here. What reason does a man who claims to be the Lord of all things have to be complacent about this? At the same time, the poet also realized that in the face of nature, all beings are equal, and individuals live in "silently enjoying the joy endowed by nature", regardless of size.
The whole poem is concise, vivid and exquisitely structured. The ending is implicit and meaningful.
[Appreciation of the poem "Edo Snow Peak Edge" III]
This is the only height I can conquer at present. I leaned out my forehead carefully and was surprised to find that facing the snow in Emei, the sun, which had been visiting Huang Huang for a long time in the thin wall, was decisively jumping into an infinite gravity mountain and gravity sea. The gravel slides down from time to time, causing the brown abyss to scream from top to bottom, like the shouting and killing of the army. My knuckles are riveted in the crack of the boulder. Blood drops oozed from the torn soles of thousands of palms. Oh, I really long for an eagle or a snow leopard to accompany me on the corroded rock wall, but a poor spider is quietly enjoying the comfort given by nature with me.