Two self-motivated poems, 200 points, please advise! thank you

One,

Starting a business is much more difficult and tempered.

Wind and rain for a few days;

Indifferent to world law,

There are thousands of turns to realize Buddha!

Second,

Yanziji overlooks Lanting,

White waves beat against the coast and the river roared.

Hongbo meets the sky to show great spirit.

Yu Xiang will tie the goshawk one day!