2. Train writers to be "detailed" and vivid, and "concise" to be concise and coherent. Process and method: around the center, choose appropriate materials and master some methods of "writing a few strokes in detail and a few strokes in short".
Emotion, attitude and values: grasp the ideological connotation of composition and understand the relationship between life. Teaching emphasis and difficulty: 1, dealing with the relationship between "detailed" and "omitted".
2. Write people's notes in a detailed way. Teaching methods: observation, appreciation and practice. Teaching preparation: Collect the appropriate fragment descriptions of narrative details in relevant articles, and summarize the appropriate writing methods of narrative details in combination with students' homework.
Teaching process: first, to understand what is detailed means to describe and describe the main materials that can directly express the central meaning, put down the pen and ink and write more fully; The so-called sketch refers to a general description of materials related to the central meaning but not directly expressing the central meaning, with less pen and ink. The relationship between the details and the center is 1, and the details depend on the center.
In an article, if the details are appropriate, we can highlight the key points, better express the center and enhance the expression effect. Second, the typical materials that play an important role in the performance center should be written in detail; General materials that play an auxiliary role in the performance center. Third, materials that have nothing to do with the performance center should be discarded and not written.
Read the following text and write as required. When reading "Northland scenery, thousands of miles frozen, Wan Li snowing", did you think of a broad and heroic mind? When reading "There are no birds in a hundred mountains, no footprints in a thousand paths, a boat with a leaf, a bamboo cloak and an old fisherman's cold river-snow", do you think of a person's integrity and the feeling of holding ice and snow alone? When reading Lin's "Wind Snow Mountain Temple, Lu Burning Grass Yard", do you think of a hero who once endured humiliation? In your reading or life experience, there must be many people or things "related to snow". You might as well pick up a pen and write it down.
Please write a narrative on the topic of "related to snow". Requirements: ① Pay attention to details and the details are appropriate; ② You can narrate experiences, express feelings and create stories; (3) Have genuine feelings and strive to be creative; (4) No less than 600 words.
The first step in thinking is to look at the topic and make sure that the center is related to "snow", which is a limitation. Whether writing people or taking notes, "snow" will become an indispensable factor.
"Snow" is either a clue to writing, a trigger point for related people and things, or a symbol of personal integrity and feelings. All people and things in the article must be related to "snow". Try it with "reflecting the ethics and feelings of some people"
Step 2: According to the center, determine the details around the center of "reflecting the ethics and feelings of some people". We can set up a person related to "snow" and describe his life experience related to "snow" as the detailed content. The third step: consider the requirements and focus on Liu Zongyuan. According to the center we have determined, we can focus on telling or describing his feelings of not being in cahoots with the secular.
The fourth step: After consideration, the careful selection of "The Fisherman in the Cold River-Snow" can highlight Liu Zongyuan's integrity and his feelings of not being in cahoots with the secular world. Then the feelings of home and country and the thought of loving the people in Yongzhou can be simply written as a foil.
Please write a narrative of not less than 600 words on the topic of "Memories". Requirements: Narrative, description-oriented expression, comprehensive use of other expressions, with real feelings.
Clearly describe the clues, choose suitable materials, and pay attention to the details of the article. Detailed arrangements: ① Determine the center: _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _
2. How to pay attention to details and highlight the narrative nature of teaching plans in narrative composition?
Knowledge and skills: 1, train some methods of writing character narratives with "a few details, just a few strokes".
2. Train writers to be "detailed" and vivid, and "concise" to be concise and coherent.
Process and method: around the center, choose appropriate materials and master some methods of "writing a few strokes in detail and a few strokes in short".
Emotion, attitude and values: grasp the ideological connotation of composition and understand the relationship between life.
Teaching emphasis and difficulty: 1, dealing with the relationship between "detailed" and "omitted".
2. Write people's notes in a detailed way.
Teaching methods: observation, appreciation and practice.
Teaching preparation: Collect the appropriate fragment descriptions of narrative details in relevant articles, and summarize the appropriate writing methods of narrative details in combination with students' homework.
Teaching process:
First, understand what detail writing and sketching are.
Detailed description refers to the concrete narration and description of the main materials that can directly express the central meaning, so that the pen and ink can be released to write more fully; The so-called sketch refers to a general description of materials related to the central meaning but not directly expressing the central meaning, with less pen and ink.
The relationship between the details and the center is 1, and the details depend on the center. In an article, if the details are appropriate, we can highlight the key points, better express the center and enhance the expression effect. Second, the typical materials that play an important role in the performance center should be written in detail; General materials that play an auxiliary role in the performance center. Third, materials that have nothing to do with the performance center should be discarded and not written.
Read the following text and write as required.
When reading "Northland scenery, thousands of miles frozen, Wan Li snowing", did you think of a broad and heroic mind? When reading "There are no birds in a hundred mountains, no footprints in a thousand paths, a boat with a leaf, a bamboo cloak and an old fisherman's cold river-snow", do you think of a person's integrity and the feeling of holding ice and snow alone? When reading Lin's "Wind Snow Mountain Temple, Lu Burning Grass Yard", do you think of a hero who once endured humiliation? In your reading or life experience, there must be many people or things "related to snow". You might as well pick up a pen and write it down.
Please write a narrative on the topic of "related to snow". Requirements: ① Pay attention to details and the details are appropriate; ② You can narrate experiences, express feelings and create stories; (3) Have genuine feelings and strive to be creative; (4) No less than 600 words.
Thinking guidance
Step 1: Review the topic and make sure that the center is related to "snow", and "snow" is the limiting condition. Whether writing people or taking notes, "snow" will become an indispensable factor. "Snow" is either a clue to writing, a trigger point for related people and things, or a symbol of personal integrity and feelings. All people and things in the article must be related to "snow". Try it with "reflecting the ethics and feelings of some people"
Step 2: According to the center, determine the details around the center of "reflecting the ethics and feelings of some people". We can set up a person related to "snow" and describe his life experience related to "snow" as the detailed content.
The third step: consider the requirements and focus on Liu Zongyuan. According to the center we have determined, we can focus on telling or describing his feelings of not being in cahoots with the secular.
The fourth step: After consideration, the careful selection of "The Fisherman in the Cold River-Snow" can highlight Liu Zongyuan's integrity and his feelings of not being in cahoots with the secular world. Then the feelings of home and country and the thought of loving the people in Yongzhou can be simply written as a foil. Please write a narrative of not less than 600 words on the topic of "Memories".
Requirements: Narrative, description-oriented expression, comprehensive use of other expressions, with real feelings. Clearly describe the clues, choose suitable materials, and pay attention to the details of the article. Detailed arrangement:
① Determine the center: _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _
3. How to write the details of the composition? ppt 1。 Carefully examine the questions and clarify the meaning of the questions.
A careful understanding of the requirements, main points and scope of the topic is the most critical first step in writing.
Second, determine the center and choose suitable materials.
After defining the requirements, key points and scope of the topic, we should carefully recall the materials related to this topic, what we are most familiar with, what we are most innovative and what we want to express. This is the memory material, determine the center. When the center is clear, it is necessary to choose the materials that can best express the center around the center. This is about selecting materials around the center.
Third, make an outline and determine the details.
After determining the center and selecting the materials, you should make a writing plan. What to write first, then what to write, there must be an order. What is closely related to the center, you should write in detail, and what is not closely related to the center, you can skim it and give priority. This does not require an outline to determine the details. The outline is like a drawing of a building. With good drawings, buildings can be strong and beautiful.
After the above three steps are completed, you can write your composition according to the outline, so as to avoid the problems of improper selection of materials, irrelevant text, chaotic structure, or top-heavy, regardless of priorities, or even no center.
In the exam, there are often situations that the composition is too late to be done, the composition gets stuck in the middle and the composition can't be finished, which greatly reduces the scoring rate of the composition to be tested. However, if we can take some emergency measures, we can often win by surprise and improve the performance of the composition to be tested.
First, the method of replacing trees with flowers. It is to modify and replace the original model essay or written exercise slightly in the structure of the article, or the characters involved, or the themes expressed, or the arguments listed, so as to make it meet the propositions and requirements of the examination. This can not only save writing time, but also improve the quality of composition. Not only when writing time is insufficient, but also when writing time is free.
Second, direct substitution method. During the exam, because the first half of the basic questions took too much time, the second half of the writing questions were relatively urgent, and it was objectively not allowed to be carefully conceived. Instead of sticking to the propositions and requirements of the exam composition, it is better to complete an article by slightly deviating from the propositions and requirements. Because the reviewers attach great importance to the integrity of the composition, at this juncture, they may wish to make a makeover of their own impressive articles with similar content and style.
Third, the wrong way is wrong. During the exam, sometimes due to carelessness in the exam, the article is found to be off topic or off topic, but there is not enough time to redesign it. In this case, instead of writing half a paragraph, it is better to write a wrong one and complete the whole chapter. Of course, we should try our best to be far-fetched, have opinions, analyze and summarize, and be lyrical.
Fourth, the method of compiling the outline. In the exam, sometimes due to busy attacking the basics and small compositions, there is not much time left for big compositions. No matter how fast it is, it is not enough. It's better to make an outline than just write a beginning or leave it blank. Of course, the outline should be as detailed as possible, at least let the reviewers see the structure, theme and general content of the article. If possible, fill in the beginning and end again, so that reviewers can get a glimpse of the article.
5. Blank method in the box. When writing an exam composition, it is common to write less than half because there is no outline in advance. Most candidates tend to think hard and bite their pens to continue. The more I think about it, the more I feel that time is pressing, and the more I think about it, the more I feel that I can't contact. At this time, it is better to leave some blanks and write down what you have considered in your own thoughts until you have a clear idea and recall the content, or make up after the full text is completed.
Sixth, the problem of rebate. In any case, the deduction of the topic in the composition is extremely important, what's more, it is especially necessary when the exam composition can't be finished. For example, the topic of a city's senior high school entrance examination is "an unusual exam". Once something is described, once you can't think of a better ending, you might as well end it with "what an unusual exam it is for me".
7. the way to take care of the beginning. Narrative and argumentative essays pay more attention to the care of the beginning and the end. If you can't find a better ending in the exam, you can take care of the beginning to write.
Eight, make the finishing point. In narrative writing, proper discussion can often point out and deepen the theme, but when the exam-oriented composition is too late to end, it is necessary to carry out relevant discussions to summarize the main points. This is not only a last resort, but also an emergency measure of the article.
4. Introduction to the composition handout (2) How to arrange the details of the characters. This method is suitable for people-oriented narrative.
People should write about the characteristics of people's thoughts, personality and quality, and the materials that express people's thoughts, personality and quality, such as their language, movements, psychology and appearance, are the key materials, so they should be written in detail; Events involving the expression of characters' thoughts and personalities are suitable for general narration, because the events mentioned are used to express characters' personalities, not to show the development process of events, so they should be omitted. For example, in Zhu Ziqing's Back, the scene of seeing him off at the station was described in detail: "I saw him hobbling to the railway side in a little black hat, a big black jacket and a dark blue cotton robe, and it was not too difficult to bend down slowly, but when he crossed the railway, it was not easy to climb the platform over there.
He climbed up with both hands, and his feet shrank again; His fat body leans slightly to the left, showing signs of hard work. Then I saw his back, and my tears soon flowed down. "
This passage shows the father's love for his son through a detailed description of his son's appearance and movements. This feeling can't be expressed in words by others, but witnessed and felt by the author himself.
Therefore, "My tears are coming down" expresses the sincere feelings between father and son and highlights the main idea of the article. As for the death of my grandmother, my father's idleness, poor family and other things, from the needs of the article expression center, this is to render a sad atmosphere for the following description of my father's back, so I don't need to write it in detail, I can only write it briefly.
5. How to learn to write a composition? Ppt: You can directly start the topic, indicating that you want to participate in the competition at the beginning, or you can render the nervousness before the competition at the beginning, and then leave some suspense for readers to follow you to the competition.
In the middle, you can write more about your classmates' performance after the teacher, or your own psychology and thoughts, and you can also observe the expressions of other companions. Speaking of the judges' comments, you can write down how you and your opponent performed and what the judges told them to say.
In the end, how did you feel when you won or didn't win, and how did others perform? You can also write. The most important thing to write a detailed composition is to point out the theme, followed by the beginning and the end. This is the content of the teacher's grading. The topic should be considered comprehensively, and beautiful words are the icing on the cake.
These are all based on my years of experience. You can write good words and sentences, but don't copy too much. Good article revision. You can review more when you have time.
Finally, I wish you an award.
6. How to deduce the topic from the composition? Ppt, carefully examine the topic and clarify the meaning of the topic.
Carefully understand the requirements of the topic, the scope of focus, and the key steps to do a good job in composition.
Second, determine and select materials.
Understand the requirements of the topic, focus on the scope, carefully remember the materials related to the topic, which are familiar and which are new, prepare to express your ideas, remember the materials, determine, clarify, surround, select the materials that can be expressed, surround and select the materials.
Third, outline the outline and determine the details
Determine, select materials, make a writing plan, write first, then write, and order. What is closely related, should be written in detail, what is relevant, sketching, and mainly, it is required to make an outline and determine the details. The outline can be stronger and more beautiful than the architectural drawings.
Do it in three steps, write the composition according to the outline, avoid material selection, topic, or structural confusion, or pay attention to your feet, subjective, or even no problem.
In the exam, getting stuck between writing, doing and writing reduces the test-taking rate. If you can take some emergency measures, you can often win by surprise and improve your exam results.
Replace trees with flowers. Modify and replace the original model essay or writing exercise, article structure, or related things, or express the theme, or list arguments, etc., to meet the test propositions and requirements. It saves writing space and improves composition quality. Only writing space should be used, and the rest should be used.
Second, directly substitute. In the exam, due to the occasional expense of the first half of the basic questions, half of the writing questions are hasty, which objectively allows re-careful conception. It is not closely related to the test composition proposition, requiring half writing, but slightly deviating from the proposition, requiring the article to be completed. Reviewers pay attention to the integrity of the composition, and all kinds of key points prevent them from directly substituting impressive content and writing similar articles.
Third, wrong. You should take the composition exam. Because of careful examination, you will find that the article is off topic or off topic. If you get pregnant again, you won't have enough time. In this case, instead of writing half an article and a few paragraphs, you will make mistakes and finish a whole chapter. You should be as far-fetched as possible, save the mess as much as possible, deduct the topic, analyze and summarize the kung fu, discuss lyricism, summarize the article, and say that the article will be abolished.
Fourth, draw up an outline. During the exam, because I was busy attacking the basics and writing, I had to leave a few in the composition room. It is more cost-effective to make an outline instead of writing it or simply leaving it blank. The outline should be as detailed and specific as possible, at least let the reviewers see the structure, theme and content of the article, and make up the writing and ending, so that the reviewers can have a glimpse of the literary talent.
5. Leave blank. Exam composition, the outline has been prepared in advance, and it is more common to write it. In the math exam, you often think hard and bite your pen to continue. The more I think about it, the more I feel connected. Leave blank, consider the content first, wait until the thinking is clear, recall the content before writing, or fill in the full text after writing.
In any case, it is extremely important to deduct the topic of the composition, not to mention the sloppy situation of the examination composition, which is particularly necessary. A city used the exam topic "looking for an exam" to describe something, but wanted to change the ending, which stopped me from saying, look for an exam and finish it. By the end of the sentence, the number of compositions can be significantly increased.
Seven, care. For narrative and argumentative essays, we pay more attention to the care from beginning to end. We should try to find a better ending and write with our heart.
Eight, make the finishing point. In narrative writing, proper discussion can often point out the theme, deepen the theme, test the composition and end, and also carry out related discussion and summary. Urgent measures are urgently needed.
Using A-side, B-side, or the first movement, the second movement and other musical forms to deal with the structure of the article is full of aesthetic feeling and can make people associate;
7. How to make a good composition outline ppt courseware The following are the main points of making a good outline: First, the main points and centers of the composition outline; Second, the composition outline should reflect the level. When writing an outline, you should carefully grasp the level of the paragraph, so that you can write it easily, logically and clearly. Third, the composition outline should reflect the key points, and the materials of an article have a heavy or light effect on the expression center. Only when the key points are reflected in the preparation of the outline and the arrangement of materials can the composition be meticulous, and the details in the article should be divided into small levels, so that the context is clear and the key points are prominent.
Don't rush to deal with the problem when you do it. I make these demands: 1. Read the questions and check them; Make clear the meaning of the composition topic and the requirements. 1. Determine the content and determine the composition content according to the topic requirements; 3. Establish the center, define the writing purpose and establish the center according to the topic requirements and composition content; 4. Select materials, and select the composition materials according to the composition center.
In the outline stage, it is mainly clear how to write, carefully design the articles to be written and arrange the materials. This is the most important step. At this stage, we mainly focus on two links: one is to clarify our thinking, and the other is to highlight the details. After the outline is written, carefully check whether the materials conform to the center, whether the materials are omitted or repeated, whether the organization is clear and whether the key points are prominent. If problems are found, they should be corrected in time.
8. How to write a travel note? Ppt 1, from bottom to top, a wide range of scenery.
For example. Standing in a fixed position, different scenery has different colors, and finally look at cattle and sheep ... second, if you want to write everything; From top to bottom, you can look at the sky first and then the mountains.
Visit a place in order of itinerary and color characteristics; In the wilderness? 1。 The order of sightseeing is the order of goods.
The colors of the scenery are ever-changing, so that it can be written accurately: in the suburbs, you see and hear a lot according to the types of scenery; Layout the whole article from left to right in the order of observation. 2, you can look at the fields first, from far to near, and then look at Yuan Ye and concrete.
Only by careful observation. So, what are the characteristics of the scenery? The order of orientation change, from the outside to the inside, can't write anything well. Grasp the characteristics, from near to far.
3. Vivid, from right to left; From the inside out. We visit a place and grasp the characteristics of the scenery; First in the middle and then around, first in the middle and then around, and finally by the river, describe the concrete and image.
9. Courseware Ten Minutes Composition Outline A long time ago, there was a rich man who had countless wealth, but he was not happy. Because he thinks that although he has wealth, wealth can't buy beauty and happiness. Sometimes, he gets a little pleasure from other people's jokes, but it is a very short-lived pleasure. Ten minutes at most, he began to sigh again.
One day, the rich man went to the countryside to find the secret of happiness. He met a farmer who was singing and farming. He went up to the farmer and said, "You look happy. Can you tell me the secret of happiness? " The farmer was puzzled and asked, "Don't you look like a poor man, aren't you happy?" "Oh, yes, I'm really unhappy." The rich man replied, "that's why I came to ask you the secret of happiness." Why are there so few beautiful things around me? " The farmer replied, "So, do you think there are many beautiful things around me?" Our family is poor, so I farm for a living. The joy of harvest, family reunion, only once a year, there is little beauty around. However, I am so happy, because I have learned to magnify beauty. ""Magnify beautiful? Is this a secret? " The rich man asked, yes, learn to enlarge beauty, and you will be happy! "The farmer said," You say there are too few beautiful things around you, but that doesn't mean there are no beautiful things in your life. As long as you cherish the beauty, relive yesterday's beauty every day and look forward to tomorrow's beauty, then you will be happy every day! The rich man asked doubtfully, "So what is' recalling yesterday's beauty and looking forward to tomorrow's beauty'?" "You have a good life, so there will be many beautiful things in your future. In fact, life doesn't need too much decoration, throw away all unnecessary troubles, bravely walk past yesterday, and walk smartly towards tomorrow.