Fan Wen:
Zhuge Liang (I know the Three Kingdoms better)
Start with what you admire most about him. The beginning can be named figuratively (for example, you dedicated yourself to him, and then you wrote it), and you can praise him with poems (so there are many words, and the effect is good regardless of the content).
For example, from 1 to 3, it is enough to describe only one. The idea of the example is to write clearly the expression and psychology of the characters (if you don't know them) according to simple materials, and use some appropriate metaphors to describe association (if you don't want to add them, you don't have to write them).
What do you think of this matter (see the above example, your feelings, that is why you admire him)
Finally, praise him further (if you didn't point out his character at first, point it out now, let it echo from beginning to end, and highlight your love for this person)
The black silk scarf of the feather fan reveals unparalleled unknown wisdom with deep eyes. Silkworms in spring will weave until they die, and candles will drain the wick every night. Zhuge Liang, an ancient person I admire most (for example, at the beginning,
Example (from Liu Bei's death to Zhuge Liang's death)
Zhuge Liang not only has wisdom, but also has a short life. Such a talented official deeply touched me with his life's struggle, and then he devoted himself to it until he died. It just flashed through my mind. If you don't waste your life, you must belong to yourself, and I am willing to be a dedicated person like him (in the end, think for yourself)
(2) Huo Qubing (former 140—— former 1 17), a famous soldier in the Western Han Dynasty, was born in Pingyang, Hedong (now Linfen, Shanxi) and was the nephew of General Wei Qing who was good at riding and shooting. 17 years old, assistant to Emperor Wu of Han Dynasty. In the same year, he went to Xiongnu with Wei Qing, served as the captain of whoring Yao, led 800 elite riders to drive hundreds of miles, raided the rear of Xiongnu, killed 2,028 Xiongnu soldiers, captured Xiongnu Prime Minister and Minister of Housing, killed Xiongnu Khan's grandfather and father Ji, and won the title of champion.
In the spring of the second year of Yuanshou (12 1 years ago), Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty appointed Huo Qubing as the general of a title of generals in ancient times, and led 10,000 cavalry out of Longxi to attack the Xiongnu Right King Xian Department. Break the five kingdoms of Xiongnu in six days. Then he crossed Yanqi Mountain for more than 1000 miles and fought against Xiongnu at the foot of Gaolan Mountain, killing nearly 9,000 people, killing Xiongnu King Lv Hou and Zhelan King, and capturing Xiongnu Evil Kings Guo Xiang and Dewey alive. In the summer of the same year, Huo Qubing led tens of thousands of elite riders out of Beidi County, crossed the Juyan Sea, fought fiercely with Xiongnu at the foot of Qilian Mountain, annihilated more than 30,000 people, captured Attila 5 people alive, and the Queen Mother, Khan E Shi, Prince, Prime Minister, General, etc. 120 people, surrendered 40,000 Huns to the evil king, and all occupied the Hexi Corridor. Xiongnu lamented: "The loss of Qilian Mountain made my six animals unhappy;" Losing my mountain makes my married wife colorless. "
In the spring of the fourth year of Yuanshou (before 1 19), Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty ordered Wei Qing and Huo Qubing to leave Dingxiang and Dai Jun with 50,000 cavalry respectively, and went deep into Mobei to find the main force of Xiongnu. Huo Qubing led the army into the north for more than 2,000 miles, crossed the back hill, crossed the river, engaged with the left part of Xiongnu, wiped out 70,400 enemies, captured three Xiongnu Tuntou kings, Hanwang and 83 generals alive, and attacked wolves in Xushan (now Mongolia) and Gu Yan. Xushan was the place where the worship ceremony was held. After World War I, "Huns fled far away, and there was no Wang Ting in the desert south". Huo Qubing's prestige surpassed that of Wei Qing because of his meritorious service to Fu Yougong, and many Wei Qing departments took refuge in Huo Qubing.
In the sixth year of Yuanshou (1 17), Huo Qubing died in Chang 'an at the age of 23. Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty specially ordered the tomb to be buried with him and built his own tomb into the towering shape of Qilian Mountain. Large-scale original stone carvings such as Walking Xiongnu were displayed in front of the tomb to commend his great achievements in expedition to Xiongnu, and he was named Huan Hou. On the day of burial, the surrendered Xiongnu soldiers dressed in black armor lined up in dozens of military formations on both sides of the road from Chang 'an to Maoling, in order to attend the funeral for Huo Qubing.
Huo Qubing led the army to attack the Huns four times in his life, and all of them came back with great victory, annihilated more than 40,000 Huns 1 10000, surrendered more than 40,000 Huns, and opened the land of Hexi and Jiuquan, thus eliminating the threat of the Huns to the Han Dynasty. He fought bravely and was a military genius. Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty once advised him to learn Sun Wu's art of war. He replied, "Why do you want to detain Gufa, because you have to plan at any time?" Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty built a luxurious mansion for him and rewarded him with meritorious military service, but he said, "Huns are immortals and have no home." Huo Qubing is highly respected by later generations. Li Bai's "Hu Nobody" has a poem saying: "The wind blows and the seaweed withers, but the tendons are dry and thin, and the horse is proud. Han Jiabing, 300,000, is the general and leader of Huo Piao Yao. The meteor is inserted in the white waist, and the sword flower and autumn lotus are light out of the box. When the snow went down, the soldiers shone brilliantly, and the arrows of Yutong and Lu shot shining armor like yellow sand. Both the dragon and the tiger return, and the white moon can destroy the enemy. The enemy can be destroyed, and the head can be destroyed. Hanging in the sky, with beard and purple plug buried. Hu is a nobody, Han Daochang. "
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2. Write a 600-word ancient composition-Yao Lisi Li Baibai was a madman at that time. Only Li Bai's wildness can lift the torch of poetry and illuminate the splendid civilization of the prosperous Tang Dynasty; Li Bai is a poet, and only the country of poetry can create Li Bai's extraordinary to irrigate the boundless land of poetry.
Only in the Tang Dynasty did the times create "heroes". The air is filled with the fragrance of poetry, and the land is cultivated by the era of freedom. Shaped a detached Li Bai; Created a wild Li Bai, attracting me closer to Li Bai.
The Tang Dynasty was the Mount Everest in China's poetic circles, and Li Bai was the rock on the peak, majestic and unshakable. The Tang Dynasty was the Yangtze River and the Yellow River in China's poetry circles, while Li Bai was a surging tide, which was ferocious and unstoppable.
Without the solid stone of the giant peak foundation pad, it is impossible to have its own greatness; Without the strong current set off by huge waves, it is impossible to have its own fierceness. Therefore, we know that a "hero" who has lost the backing of the times cannot have his own greatness.
The historical environment of the Tang Dynasty created the transcendent Li Bai. "I used to ride a horse, but now I ride ten thousand." Li Shimin, who thinks he is the descendant of Lao Zi Li Rong, came, riding six horses in Zhaoling, like a gust of wind, and prospered the Taoism of Laozi and Zhuangzi, which stood in the sky for nine days to see the world, and the Buddhism of Wei, Jin, Southern and Northern Dynasties.
There is no ideological resentment in the past, and there is no restriction on past speech. Therefore, Li Bai also inserted the wings of dreams and flew in the free sky.
He is a Dapeng whose wings are like clouds hanging in the sky, and he disdains to be a follower of Confucianism. He is a stork with "two clear nights and six purlin clouds hanging down", looking up at the universe with his head held high and maximizing his vision. He is a cloud and must fly to the zenith to detect the vastness of the sky; He is water, and he must rush to Barnet Heitfeld to set off wild waves at sea.
So he "waved his sword to serve the country and left his relatives to travel far away" and treated all the sorrows in life with a detached attitude. The detachment of life enabled him to bear the joy of ordinary people and the emperor's summons and the sadness of ruthless exile.
The detachment of poetic style enabled him to write Cen Can's magnificent frontier poem "The bright moon hangs high in the sky, the smoke waves are vast, and a thousand miles of wind blows the battlements of Yumenguan", which enabled him to write Wang Wei's quiet and beautiful landscape poem "I don't worry about wine, but my skirts are full of flowers."
Birds are still scarce when you are drunk. "So that he can write Meng Haoran's pastoral poem" Kneeling into the carved rice, the moon is bright and special ".
I can't help but feel ashamed to think of this. I helped Park Mu, and declined politely and dared not eat it. "More make him write a unique and unparalleled" will enter the wine "and so on.
Yan Yu, a poetry critic in the Song Dynasty, said that when others write poems, they all write them sentence by sentence with a pen, but Li Bai just needs to spit out his heart. I think this is the transcendental Li Bai created by the times I saw.
3. The story of the ancients writing articles to temper words: Wang Anshi used "green" and Jia Dao used "scrutiny" to dig out the poem on the wall of Taizhou Temple: "The moon shines on the river before the peak, and the monk opens a bamboo building in Cuiwei." If you go, people with opinions will change the word "one" to "half" with a pen. Turn (turn) for dozens of miles and you'll get it. Because of the sigh, there are people in Taizhou. (Li Dongyang's "Lu Tang Shi Hua") tells the story of a poet in the Tang Dynasty who changed a word and ran for dozens of miles. It's also very touching. The moonlight on the front peak will definitely cover the moon, and it will not spill all over the river, which is both practical and poetic. Wang Anshi (1021-1086), a famous politician in the northern song dynasty, was a prime minister and carried out reforms with the support of Zongshen. Wang Anshi is also a writer, and his poems are well written. This has been a beautiful legend for thousands of years. 1. Feilaifeng-Lin Bao outside Shaoxing, Zhejiang. 2. Chihiro Tower-describe this tower as very high. In ancient times, a search was equal to eight feet. 3. Fate-because this quatrain was written by Wang Anshi when he was a local official in Zhejiang. The first two sentences are about the image of Feilai Peak Tower, and the last two sentences are about Dengfei Peak Tower. I don't know. The poet only told us that the tower alone is more than 8,000 feet-this is of course an exaggeration. The poet also told a legend: Standing on the tower, you can see the sunrise at midnight. Please think about the momentum of Feilaifeng. Although the pagoda is high, it is not out of reach. In the blink of an eye, the poet has climbed to the top of the tower and seen everything in the world. Drifting clouds can no longer block the line of sight! "Don't be afraid to float around to cover your eyes, you are at the highest level." At first glance, you seem to be talking about the experience of enjoying the scenery; If you think about it, you will understand a philosophy of life: in social life and ideological cultivation, don't you have to stand tall to see far? ! In the poet's view, this is ambitious self-encouragement; For readers, this is an inspiring revelation. Su Xun is either a gifted scholar or a talented woman, which is of course inseparable from his teachings. It is said that one day, Su Xun bought a painting and intended to match it with a couplet, but after he drew up the couplet, he didn't write the middle words, so he copied it out and asked his children to fill it in, so as to test his talent: Su Shi (Dongpo) has a light wind and a light moon. Su Xun asked the second child what he thought. Su Zhe praised his sister and said, "This is a refined word. With the word' help', the wind will be gentle. With the word' lost', heaven and earth can become one color, confusing and picturesque. " Su Xun also thinks his sister is good, and Su Shi admires her talent. Ren Fan wrote a poem on the wall of Taizhou Temple. Pick up the pen and change the word "one" into the word "half". Turn (turn) for dozens of miles, and you will get to the word "half". If you are eager to change it, you will see the changed words, because you sigh, "Taizhou is occupied." -(Li Dongyang's On Lutang Poetry) tells the story of a poet in the Tang Dynasty who turned around and changed a word and ran for dozens of miles.
4. How to write an ancient story composition at the beginning? If I travel to the Tang Dynasty, I must see the famous Li Bai with my own eyes, ask him where his inspiration for poetry comes from, humbly worship him as a teacher, and write some good poems to show off with my classmates.
If I travel to the Tang Dynasty, I will meet Wu Zetian, the only cruel female emperor in China history, and see how she governed a country. I will make friends with her, tell her what the world thinks of her, let her reflect deeply, and tell her that history has proved that people-oriented can win the hearts of the people and make the country and the people safe.
If I travel to the Tang Dynasty, I will definitely go to the capital Chang 'an to learn about the customs there and try all the delicious food. It is said that Chang 'an was the most prosperous city in the world at that time!
If I travel to the Tang Dynasty, I will enjoy the most luxurious Huaqing Pool Palace and take some nice photos for myself, which will make my classmates envy me to death! I also want to know about the architectural techniques of some of my favorite places in Huaqingchi Palace and bring them to Shenzhen to make the metropolis more beautiful. Peace and prosperity.
If I travel to the Tang Dynasty!
But now, every street is clean.
If I travel to the Tang Dynasty, I must go to the capital Chang 'an. I want to make friends with her, let her reflect deeply, knowledgeable people ... If I can, I will make a big fuss about it-it's an antique, which makes my classmates envy to death, and I want to taste all the delicious food. It is said that this is something that ordinary people dare not think about. Yes, I'm going to enjoy the most luxurious Huaqing Pool Palace. I must take some artworks back and take some beautiful photos for myself to make Shenzhen a more beautiful and charming metropolis.
What time are you coming back? There is an old house, but there is no harsh sound of cars. Because there are bustling markets and no industrial pollution, it is refreshing to tell her what the world thinks of her. There is no car exhaust polluting the fresh air. Let's take a taxi to the Tang Dynasty!
If I travel to the Tang Dynasty and the air is fresh, I will meet Wu Zetian, the only cruel female emperor in the history of China. In order to win the hearts of the people, I will write some good poems to show off to my classmates. I want to think about the most important question, at least for a year or two! Here, looking around, I must live in this paradise-like fairyland forever.
If I travel to the Tang Dynasty and have a good time, I must settle there and take the train! I also want to know about the architectural techniques of some of my favorite places in Huaqingchi Palace. Chang 'an was the most prosperous city in the world. Gee, tell her that history has proved that people are fundamental, and see how she manages a country: I am flying and have a cordial local flavor. I must see the famous Li Bai with my own eyes. If I travel to the Tang Dynasty, I will humbly worship him as a teacher, ask him where the inspiration for poetry comes from, and take it to Shenzhen to find out.
5. How to write such an article that the ancients admired most? Don't write words that few people know It's best to choose people who are well known and have the spirit to learn, such as Qu Yuan, Wen Tianxiang and Zhuge Liang.
But pay attention to the choice of the ancients! ! Don't make a * * *. Then look up the story about this character on the internet, and get your consciousness or admiration and reflection from the story. Pay attention to the center, don't write a little bit about this and that, because the word "most admired" implies that you generally have only one. If the article is for teachers, I will make a few comments, which will definitely benefit! ! 1. If the style is not limited, try to use epistolary style, just like writing a letter, but pay attention to the format to make the article look more attractive (if you really use epistolary style, you can write a letter to the ancients you admire most, and call them "you" directly, paying attention to tone and respect) 2. Quoting more stories and famous sayings gives the teacher such a feeling. A lot of extra points ~ ~ but the things quoted must be true, related to the characters and the central idea of the article. 3. When praising, don't just write some bold and explicit words like "Ah ~ I respect you", but you have no brains. Write deeply, don't just call mom and dad there, but express your feelings clearly. Take that sentence for example, it should be changed to "My respect for you is gone." You can also fill in the words) 4. Pay attention to the order of examination, see clearly the requirements of the questions, grasp the key words, and mention the relevant thoughts and feelings in the text (for example, you should pay attention to the "most" questions you give; "Admire" means thinking positively, and don't look for negative factions such as traitors; "The ancients" want ancient figures, not busy Liu Xiang! From time to time, write some sentences that can reflect the central idea and theme in the article, so that the teacher can understand, and the teacher has no time to play hide-and-seek with you and find your ideas.
Pay attention to the structure and segmentation of the article, and everyone who can write a composition knows it. 6. The handwriting is neat and the language is fluent. It's best not to use English, and don't mention real information such as real names and places, so as not to violate social morality (for example, you say that Chen Shui-bian is a good man). ) I hope it helps you. Let's go
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6. Why did ancient people write articles without punctuation marks? Most people use punctuation marks in ancient articles. 1842 years ago, missionaries published Chinese newspapers and periodicals in Nanyang, among which Cha Schooler Monthly was the first publication aimed at China people. Its content is mainly Christian doctrine, but it also has knowledge about world history, folklore and astronomy. In addition, Biography of the Moon in the Examination of the Secular World also introduced the western punctuation system into Chinese, and not only punctuated sentences, but also included ","and ",and especially used some place names and" ball ball "names. Although there are no punctuation marks in ancient books and articles, there are "jv fights". Teachers in private schools use red pen to break sentences when teaching students, which improves their level.