A group of barefoot children are in the water,
Happy as a fairy.
Little brother stepped on the water hard,
How high is the splash?
He shouted: "Sister, be careful, slip!"
Said he slipped!
He patted his muddy pants,
He said, "Shit, shit!"
And his happy red face,
But it exudes excitement and pride.
My little sister has two short pigtails,
Right behind these muddy pants,
She bit her lip.
Carrying a skirt
Run gently and carefully,
I wish I could.
What a beautiful fall!
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How does poetry show children playing with water after rain and enjoying it? (1) Show the scene of playing with water and render the joy of the group.
The poet closely followed the theme and wrote the scene of the square after the rain: after the heavy rain, the clouds opened and the sun rose, and the green trees washed by the rain in the square were more verdant. The faint treetops are bathed in the sun, shining with golden light, but the water in the field has not been collected, forming an "ocean", which is exactly where children play!
It is children's nature to play with water after rain. Look, a group of children are coming. They are barefoot, holding their trouser legs high, scrambling to tread water, shouting and laughing in the "ocean" on the surface of the square. They are "as happy as fairies"-this is a vivid metaphor, which renders the lively scene of children carefree, unrestrained and enjoying the water, creating an extremely happy atmosphere, and the joy of the group is beyond words.
(2) Highlight treading water wrestling to convey annoyance and joy.
If the poet's opening words show the joy of children playing with water, it highlights the typical description of my little brother wrestling on the water-you see, he stepped on the water hard and splashed! The word "hard" came secretly. My little brother tried his best when he stepped on the water, so the spray was very high. Maybe he was too hard and his body was unstable. He slipped while calling his sister "be careful". How humorous and interesting!
My little brother slipped and his pants were wet and sticky. While slapping again and again, he repeatedly shouted "Oh dear". Is he worried about his mother's scolding or his friend's jokes? Nevertheless, the "joy" on his face not only did not weaken, but radiated the brilliance of "excitement and pride": he stepped on the water excitedly and proudly splashed the water higher than his companions, right? What does it matter if you fall, let alone out of happiness and pride! This is really annoying and fun, and the childlike innocence is shining. ...
(3) Describe your little sister's modality, suggesting that you are playful.
Is it only for boys to play with water after rain? No, girls also have the nature to play with water. You see, behind my little brother treading water for fun, followed by my little sister with two short pigtails. Maybe it's a lesson for my little brother's water wrestling, but my little sister is very careful-she "bit her lip" and doesn't yell like a boy; She "wears a skirt" to prevent the rain from getting wet; She "ran softly and carefully" to prevent the water from slipping and falling like her little brother. This description vividly shows the model of Miss Sister playing with water after rain. Compared with the little brother stepping on the water hard and splashing high, it shows another feature, giving people a feeling of swaying.
However, in this case, how can children like to play with water? The beauty is that the poet closely follows the modal description of Little Sister when writing articles, and adds a note about her psychological activities: "If only I had such a good autumn!" " "My little brother stepped on the water hard and splashed. Although I fell, what I fell out was "excitement" and "pride". What a "happy" fall! Comparatively speaking, my little sister is playing with water after rain, unknown, cautious, how awkward! How happy it is to fall like my little brother! The word "happy" not only reproduces the feeling of my little brother wrestling in the water, but also implies that my little sister wants to get rid of the shackles of playing in the water, follow the footsteps of her little brother, fall down, have fun and be playful!
Bing Xin loves children, understands children, and observes children's life, hobbies and interests in detail, so she writes vividly. Let's read After the Rain and experience the fun of children playing with water again!