The first sentence is unclear, so why not change the order and change it to "Moon Returns to the Forest, Midnight Walk, Dream Memories, Deserted", and the second sentence should be more neatly contrasted. It is best to write something similar to poetry. It's nice that the dialogue is neat and tidy. It's not just a bunch of sticky words that make it look beautiful. That's called moaning for no reason~.
The last three paragraphs are just fine. It could be good if I change them.