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The fragrance of flowers is not known until dawn?
Cut a shallow candle and light up the greenhouse. The night is quiet, thousands of epiphyllum blooms faintly, and the air is filled with intoxicating fragrance. Not only epiphyllum, almost all white flowers are very fragrant, and simple flowers often have charming fragrance. ?
Cut a shallow candle to light up the study. With the ink of the scroll, I saw many flowers in full bloom. I see your blooming, you are a flower, such a beautiful flower, charming face, elegant talk, dumping countless celebrities. You are Lin, such a simple flower. You bid farewell to your ladies' salon, visited the ancient buildings in the countryside with your husband, and went to the factory with the students to remedy cloisonne. Servant dust, after years of busyness, may hide your beauty, but it can't hide your fragrance. You chose a simple blooming, leaving the fragrance with the ancient buildings in China. ?
I saw your blooming. You are Lei Jieqiong, a rich lady. You should have dressed up beautifully, but you chose to be a simple and fragrant flower to save the country and contribute to society. So you left home, went to the countryside and went to the factory. So you became an ordinary teacher and organized students to launch patriotic movements to publicize revolutionary ideas. So you became an important leader, a democracy fighter and a famous scholar of NLD. You are a flower, giving up colorful colors, but gaining lasting fragrance. ?
I see your blooming, you are a flower, a chrysanthemum that has experienced frost and cold, and you can still bloom proudly in the cold of life. You are Chen Shuju, an ordinary woman selling vegetables, living in poverty, but ready to help others. You helped hundreds of students return to school, you devoted yourself to charity for decades, and you donated more than 100,000 yuan to the school. Your goodness, like elegant flowers, is long and fragrant. ?
I have also seen many simple flowers bloom. You are Madame Curie, giving up upper-class life, burying yourself in experiments, and engaging in scientific research all your life, making great contributions to mankind; You are Jiang Juezhi, entrusted by the living Buddha to see a doctor for the local people in the poor northwest, to teach local children to read and to bring civilization to the frontier; You are Shen Xue, who has been practicing silently for ten years and won the gold medal in the Winter Olympics for China. ?
There are more ordinary flowers, they are teachers, workers, farmers, cleaners, volunteers ... they are silently dedicated and diligent in their posts. They are common and simple, but they have the most charming fragrance. ?
Cut a shallow candle to light up the heart. I know simple flowers have intoxicating fragrance, and simple life can bring fragrance to the world. Life can really contribute because of simplicity, and flowers bloom most beautifully because of simplicity.
Test analysis: This is a new material composition question. When conceiving, we should read the material carefully and understand the meaning contained in the material carefully. It is not difficult to see that this material is a metaphor for people with flowers. Four kinds of flowers, four sentences, four angles, choose any angle:
(1) The first flower vendor: "Almost all white flowers are fragrant, and the brighter the color, the less fragrant the flowers are." The contrast between "white flower" and "gorgeous flower" in appearance can be understood as a "simple" and a "gorgeous"; "Fragrance" and "lack of fragrance" can be regarded as a comparison in connotation. This sentence tells us a truth: the simpler a person is, the more inherent virtue and spirit he has, and the more admirable he is; And those who only pay attention to appearance and pursue glitz are often beyond gold and jade.
(2) The second flower vendor: "Cordate telosma is actually very fragrant during the day, but it is rarely smelled." The same flowers, the same fragrance, the same day and night are called cordate telosma. The reason is that the problem is not flowers, but people. So, why is this? People should be busy with all kinds of affairs during the day and pay attention to more things. People's hearts are too impetuous to objectively ignore the fragrance released by flowers, but the night is very quiet. No matter when, impetuous people can't find the beauty of life and enjoy the happiness of life. So this sentence enlightens us: impetuous and noisy, you can't enjoy the happiness of life; Only by pursuing peace of mind can we enjoy a better life.
(3) The third flower man: When you buy lotus flowers in the morning, you must pick those that are in full bloom. Morning is the best time for lotus flowers to bloom. If a lotus doesn't bloom in the morning, it may not bloom at noon or at night. In this passage, the first sentence is the conclusion and the second sentence is the reason. The reason is the basic point of conception. Lotus flowers should bloom in the morning, or there will be no chance to bloom. Comparing people to flowers, people are most likely to succeed when they are young. Life consists of teenagers, middle-aged people and old people. People have no ambition when they are young, and it is even harder to have ambition when they are middle-aged or old. After all, only a few people succeeded later. If we miss the golden season of life, then we may not bloom the most splendid flower of success in life again. So this sentence inspires us: cherish youth and make a difference as soon as possible. We can make up our minds at this point: we should cherish youth, seize it and let it shine in the struggle.
(4) The fourth flower man: The more expensive the flower, the easier it will wither. The key to this sentence is to interpret the meaning of "expensive flowers". "Guihua" can be interpreted in many ways. First, it refers to those teenagers who demand rich nutrition and occupy warm sunshine, but can't stand the slightest hardship and experience. Therefore, the idea is: sharpen yourself and cultivate a tough character. "expensive flowers" can also be interpreted as youth. As the old saying goes, "A butterfly in a hundred years dreams of 36,000 spring days." Life is like a traceless dream of spring, and the fastest time is often the most beautiful time. The idea is: cherish youth.
This kind of multi-material and multi-angle composition doesn't have to be all-encompassing, and it's not connected at all. You just need to analyze the meaning, dig deep and reason.