This paper discusses some methods of composition structure planning based on usual composition teaching practice.
First, the string point
The so-called "linking points" is to select several representative "points" and then play them on that "point", and form a complete article through the films connected by several "points".
For example, the following composition is entitled "Middle School Life":
[example]
Feel the middle school life.
-March of senior three.
Senior three, it's really eventful.
Entering the third year of high school, entering life, experiencing the March of the third year of high school, experiencing a ups and downs, and having a taste in my heart.
Tension: the main theme of life
Nervous, no doubt. Every time I see the countdown card on the stairs, I feel nervous and even anxious. After all, ten years of cold window, try your luck here!
Every day, the teacher's work is fixed and integrated. The teacher came into the classroom with a stack of papers, and soon came out with a stack of papers. As soon as the math teacher left, the foreign language teacher came in, and the geography teacher took pains to lift the small blackboard again and again ... Students kept writing in every class every day, busy solving problems they didn't understand, busy asking teachers for advice, and busy correcting test papers ... For the unknown in July, nervousness is the only constant tone. As a result, the school, canteen and classroom are three points and one line, which is a constant curriculum; Take time to eat, take time to ride a bike … just to squeeze out more time to study.
However, the tension did not consume us. In the heavy study, we are experiencing the excitement of enriching life and feeling the rhythm of intense life.
Complain: serenade of life
In senior three, you can often hear such a discussion:
"Well, the exam is too difficult. I don't think I have much hope. " A is dejected and despondent, with an ascetic face.
"I don't know what TV is for several months, and I don't know what music tastes like." B sighed bitterly.
"Dead meat! I can't watch the football match at 2: 35 tonight. It's really ... "C's mood won the understanding of fans.
"ouch! I almost forgot the big event, and there is a mock exam in history class in the afternoon! " Ding's reminder alarmed the dreamer. So everyone took their positions and quickly prepared for the war.
Complain, for the college entrance examination; The discussion began with the college entrance examination. Anyway, it is not surprising that complaints and arguments are commonplace. It's natural to listen more, as if it were an indispensable serenade in life.
Hope: Rhapsody of Life
"The newspaper said that this year's enrollment expansion, we all have great hopes!" The students who spread the news told everyone happily. "Yes, yes, if everyone works hard, we will certainly be able to do it!" As the college entrance examination approaches, everyone sincerely encourages each other and cheers on each other-as long as there is a glimmer of hope, we must make 100% efforts. Especially in the parent-teacher conferences again and again, the enrollment information released by the school again and again has kept our confidence index rising. "yes! Make up your mind and work hard! "
Senior three, senior three! Life in senior three seems to be the most wonderful movement in life. The tense theme excites us, and the bright hope walks with us. Into the third year of high school, into life, in the near future, will be out of a colorful spring!
To tell the truth, such a composition is not easy to write. If the article only records life in chronological order, regardless of priorities, like a running account, it will appear dull, superficial and tasteless, which can neither give people useful enlightenment nor give people a healthy mood after reading.
However, in this composition, the author found another way, skillfully selected three fragments, carefully designed three subtitles, and made a big fuss about the three "points" he chose. In fact, if you grasp that "point", you will not be at a loss when writing, and it will be easier to grasp. Through three points, this paper describes the special tension and hardship of senior three students, and also describes the special excitement and hope of senior three students, showing the vigorous and enterprising spirit of modern students.
Through the analysis of the above exercises, we can see that the "connecting points" method can effectively improve our level of "planning the layout of articles" in composition. Of course, there is no certain method for writing, but the method of "linking points" is adopted. There are various methods, such as the most common "diary style" and some short and pithy "small scripts", which are all good methods. In addition, when adopting this method, we should also pay attention to two issues:
1, selected points. Generally, it is advisable to use three, which will be more or less monotonous or boring. The three "points" not only conform to people's reading, appreciation and aesthetic habits, but also make it easier to express what they want to express clearly.
2. The connection between points. Although choosing "point" is easier to write, it should be noted that the point is not irrelevant and should be an organic whole. For example, in the last composition, the author grasped the three points of "tension", "dissatisfaction" and "hope", which is very representative. Through these three points, we can basically see the whole life and mental state of senior three students. It can be seen that the selection of points should not be blind, and the selected "points" should have the function of "replacing faces with points".
Second, rise.
The so-called "rising" is to learn from the expression of "rising" in classical poetry and "say something else first to cause what is said". Specifically, it is to say one thing before expounding something, and then trigger it on this basis, so as to explain the relevant truth thoroughly.
For example, the following article:
Jumped into the water
When people swim in cold weather, there are about three ways to adapt to cold water: some people squat by the pool, lift the water to their bodies, and then swim in the pool; Some people may stand on the edge of shallow water first, then try to go to deep water step by step, or gradually squat down into the water; Others, after warming up, jumped out of the pool.
It is said that the safest way is not to enter the pool and test first; Secondly, it is necessary to enter the pool and gradually deepen; As for the third method, it may lead to cramps and even heart disease.
But on the contrary, it is the first kind that can feel the stimulation of cold water most, because every time you are in a cold place, it will cause a cold bone.
However, people who jump into the pool can forget the cold completely, because they must deal with the swimming problem in front of them immediately.
Just like swimming, when people want to enter a strange and difficult environment, some people will explore carefully and make full preparations first, but many people repeatedly postpone their trips or even cancel their original plans because they know that there are many difficulties. What's more, the first time I stepped into that environment, I left a lot of back roads, and when the situation was not good, I withdrew. Of course, there are still some people who make up their minds and devote themselves wholeheartedly to it with the idea of taking a drastic measure. Because they are eager to deal with the obstacles in front of them, they can forget a lot of pain.
In today's society, the competition from all walks of life is becoming more and more fierce. If you are too cautious in everything, you will often miss opportunities. Now people say that mediocre people lose opportunities, strong people seize opportunities, and smart people create opportunities. To create opportunities, we must have the adventurous spirit of "jumping into the water", otherwise it is difficult for people to show their skills on the big stage of life.
If he is young and strong, I encourage him to be the third person. Although it may be a little dangerous, you will find that those who dare to jump into the pool have come and gone in waves while others are still hesitating by the pool, or squatting by the pool and shouting cold, forgetting the cold around them. In a strange environment, it is because such people are faster than others, tougher than others, and dare to take risks, so they often succeed.
This paper starts with the "three methods" of water inflow, and then analyzes their advantages and disadvantages. On this basis, contact with social real life, and finally lead to suggestions. The whole article is coherent and interlocking. This structure is easy to operate and the reason is easy to accept.
It should be noted that the story mentioned above must be able to play a stimulating role, and the content behind it must be internally related to the previous content and cannot be separated from oil and water. In addition, we must be able to do "this and that" and make a big fuss about "that" as the focus of writing.
Third, ask questions.
The so-called questioning means asking more why. This is particularly useful in reasoning. Every phenomenon has a reason. What is the reason? Can be analyzed; The cause will inevitably lead to the result. What will happen? Can be analyzed; What is the phenomenon? Can be analyzed; How to grasp? You can also analyze it. That is to say, discuss ideas around "why", "what" and "how" setting questions. In addition, positive questions can be asked and negative questions can be asked. Ask a few more why, and your mind will be broadened.
For example, on the topic of "speaking of opportunities", we can "ask questions" like this:
What are the opportunities?
Are there people and things who have seized the opportunity and succeeded at all times and in all countries?
Is opportunity the only factor for success?
Why seize the opportunity?
What will happen if you can't seize the opportunity?
How can we seize the opportunity? (that is, what qualities should you have? )
It is easier to explain the problem thoroughly by asking questions at different levels and analyzing them step by step. Let's look at a short article:
Persistence-the quality I pursue
I dare not say that I am a patient person; But perseverance is really my pursuit of character.
When I was a child, I was excited by the persistence of the protagonist Arthur when I read the comic strip of the novel Niumang. Arthur lived in exile for 13 years, suffering from hunger, slavery, beatings and all kinds of insults, so that he was completely disabled and unrecognizable. But he devoted himself to the independence and liberation of Italy, fought against the church, never backed down, and finally died generously and tragically. In ancient China, I was deeply moved by the legend that Kuafu filled the sea every day, and also by Deng Xiaoping, a great man who experienced ups and downs in the Cultural Revolution. In my opinion, their most valuable thing is obviously perseverance. This persistence means persistent struggle for ideals and beliefs and perseverance in the face of setbacks; Perseverance is the crystallization of iron will and endurance fighting spirit. In today's competitive society, it may be difficult for us to avoid failure, but we must persevere.
I am a "Shanliwa" in a poor mountainous area. Here, I'm going to climb two slopes and pick a bucket of water in the next ditch, but I started to do it myself when 12 years old. In junior high school, I traveled to and from the rugged mountain road for more than ten miles every day, but I was never late. After I was admitted to the county high school, I went home to get dry food and pickles every half month, so I suffered from "low consumption" for three years. In order to earn some extra money, I got off the coal mine, pushed the "coal hopper car" and worked as a loader at the station. As a child of Dashan, Dashan made me endure the hardships of years and tempered my perseverance. Really! Here, in order to survive, perseverance is a must; In order to change your destiny, you must be patient. Perseverance can make people bear hardships and stand hard without regret, and it is not negative and pessimistic when encountering difficulties. Perseverance also cultivated my indomitable character, and finally let me walk into today's examination room with the determination to win.
When I say this, I don't mean how persistent I am. Compared with those with lofty ideals, my perseverance is just a piece of cake. Moreover, my perseverance is only a natural forging under the pressure of life, far from my conscious pursuit of contributing to society. As an old man of 18 years old, what I appreciate most is the beautiful "national defense green". Therefore, my first choice is military school, and my second choice is military school. Military academy will be like a red cradle, feeding me to grow up; Military academy, like a fiery furnace, will quench and add steel to me; The military academy will set up an ideal banner in my heart and let me master the excellent skills of surviving in a dangerous environment. All these will inevitably make me more patient. Please rest assured that in the future, I have the confidence to become an excellent soldier with more conscious pursuit. Of course, if I fail, I will never be discouraged; When I return to my hometown, I will also use the perseverance given by Dashan to start a new pursuit. ...
After the first paragraph of this impromptu composition clarifies the point of view, it is like this: the second paragraph answers the question "what is perseverance" after enumerating examples; In the third paragraph, after repeating my own experience, I answered, "What will happen if I have perseverance?" ; The fourth paragraph answers the question of "how to cultivate perseverance" through ideas.
We can see that the analysis through setting questions is not only clear, but also relatively thin at present. However, it should be noted that it is not appropriate to appear in the form of "rhetorical questions". Ask a question before each paragraph and then answer it. As mentioned above, "question" is in the dark, "answer" is in the light, and the writing is natural and smooth.