Fujian candidates?
In the autumn as bright as a mirror and as clear as water, I should be happy. ?
-Zhang ailing?
In a colorful world, many people are busy for the sake of being busy. When I enjoy it, I often ignore the pursuit in my heart. So, when you feel that you don't need to do something, why not calm down and let time stand still? Why not leave a little blank in the busy life and let the real heart doodle here? Mr. Yu Qiu once said that glory disappears in an instant and noise is another name for *. In colorful days, life is marked with enchanting marks. At this moment, the so-called blank life may be a kind of indifferent state of mind. There is a philosopher's cloud: saints, ordinary people want peace of mind. Sometimes, life needs to be secret and the mind needs to be secluded. Living in seclusion and preparing for the future is gaining momentum. After storing water, the gate can be opened to irrigate the land. ?
Leave some blank space for life, I think quietly. Eternity is a calm state of mind. Say goodbye to the busy life and take it lightly. The taste of life is nothing more than poetry, wine, philosophy and love. In the blank space, singing useless poems, drinking useless wine, reading useless books, feeling useless, and finally becoming useless people, adding a little color to life. Just like a hermit, drinking wine at dusk, watching the sun from east to west, watching the storm surge, living poetically. In my mind, only by living simply can I live freely, just like a blank seal, branding my life with leisure feelings; With leisure, I feel that I am the master of life. ?
I remember Heidegger once said that life is full of achievements, but it still lives poetically in this land. I want to thank Heidegger, the spiritual explorer, for leaving a blank corner in my heart. Let me think calmly when I am upset and sing "If life is between heaven and earth, it is sudden"; Let me steal half a day from my busy schedule and enjoy a time when "when he was young, he got a guest on the moon, not by the plum blossom, but by the willow". For example, Mr. Wu Liu said that "if you are pregnant, you can go alone, or plant a stick to sow"; For example, Mr. Dongpo "recited the poem of the bright moon and sang the chapter of grace"; For example, Thoreau guards Walden Lake, Hemingway overlooks Kilimanjaro's snow … They are all poets, living poetically in their own empty world. ?
Leave a little blank in life, leave a little blank in this arrogant and restless world, even a little, but it can save countless drowning people. ?
On a calm day and in a calm sunshine, I just want to walk quietly to the shore of Walden Lake and sing softly across Thoreau. The full moon is a painting and the moon is a poem. Paint colorful colors in the blank life left for yourself. ?
[opinion]?
This is a masterpiece in the examination room. There are three beauties in the article:?
First, the fascinating title makes people shine. "The full moon is a painting, the lack of the moon is a poem", how poetic, two metaphors, one antithesis, if understood, makes people shine at the moment; Two judgments, one contrast, full of philosophy, profoundly reveal the dialectical relationship between perfection and blank, and nourish the soul! So as to highlight the theme of the article and deduce the topic of "leaving a little blank", which is poetic and elegant. ?
Second, the parallel structure is like a calm literary mind. At the beginning of writing, the author quoted Zhang Ailing's inner monologue as an inscription, always guiding the whole text, highlighting the main idea and showing his understanding and sentiment about life. Then the topic is expounded profoundly and vividly from three different angles by using the parallelism structure. The so-called "leaving a little blank" in life means having an indifferent attitude, that is, being good at bidding farewell to busyness, having leisure and living poetically in your own blank world. ?
Third, profound accumulation makes the article rich and colorful. The author has a wide range of knowledge and a broad vision. He got inspiration from Yu's articles, Lu Xun's poems, Zhuangzi's famous sayings, Heidegger's spirit, elegant demeanor, Mr. Wu Liu's ideal, Mr. Dongpo's ambition, even the scenery of Thoreau Walden Lake and the charm of Hemingway's Kilimanjaro's snow. It not only highlights the center, highlights the personality, but also makes the article colorful.