Development: The men in the caravan decided to take the rope and transport the cows and packers to the other side calmly, decisively and skillfully. ?
Orgasm: The team leader is calm and commanding properly. Under his guidance, "I" glides nervously. ?
Results: The whole team worked together, trusted each other, cared and cared for each other, reached the other shore smoothly and set off again.
The language of this article is very distinctive.
1. Exquisite words are vivid.
At the beginning of the novel, the caravan leader "hit the horse with his calf" and replaced the words "hit" and "beat" with the word "hit", which showed the tacit understanding between the leader and the horse and showed his skillful control and deep love for the horse.
Write about the steepness of the canyon: "The cliff is about to collapse". The "precipice" was originally motionless, but in the eyes of the men in the caravan, it was "hanging fast", turning static into dynamic, giving the precipice a powerful expression of the deep and steep characteristics of the canyon, which was shocking and made a powerful foreshadowing for the cowardice of writing cattle and horses later.
I used the word "small" three times to write the action of the man crossing the rope: for the first time, I wrote that the thin man "kicked his feet, flew offshore and roared past"; The second time, "three men walked by one by one"; The third time, "after that, there was a pack, so it was just fun." The men on this shore also flew by one by one. "
The flexible use of the word "Xiao" vividly shows that the smaller the person is when crossing the Nujiang Gorge quickly on the zip line, and the author uses the ordinary word "Xiao" creatively, so he is a master of using language!
2. The metaphor is novel and ingenious.
"The bell rang again, and the caravan slowly flowed to that mountain pass like very thick porridge." It is a novel and unique metaphor to describe the slow progress of the caravan with "extremely thick porridge"
For another example, "the leader and two men walked to the front of the cliff, tore off their belts and sprinkled urine in an arc." When they fell less than a few feet, they were scattered by the wind and drifted southeast along the canyon. The Nujiang River flows like a stream of urine, carefully. "
Here, the author describes the scene of a caravan man urinating on the Nujiang River very realistically, and refers to the Nujiang River under thousands of feet as "like a stream of urine", which seems vulgar, but in fact it is very expressive. Overlooking the scenery of the Nujiang River under the Zhang Wan Canyon, it seems difficult to show the boldness and rudeness of caravan people. This is the genius of Acheng's language art.
3. Flexible application of foil technology
This paper spares no effort to describe the performance of cattle when preparing, during and after sliding rope near Nujiang River, which sets off the steepness of Nujiang River and the stimulation of hitting the sliding rope.
Through the reaction and feeling of "I", the caravan men are vigorous and fearless.
4. The characters' language is concise, clear and neat.
"The leader said hoarsely,' Can we have a rest?' The others whispered, "No need." "What a concise dialogue! The tacit understanding between men is beyond words.
Another example is: "Chief Qu looked at the eagle and said,' Is it a snake?' Several people also looked at the eagle and said, "Yes, snakes." "Every conversation, cherish ink like gold, clearly highlights the tough and simple personality characteristics of caravan men.