Help me change my poetry!

lying in the grass

looking up at the Millennium

until the night falls

blue.

stars are scattered among them,

shining like diamonds.

The meteor arrived as scheduled, but

forgot to make a wish

Just because every time it passed,

there was a life falling

running out of light and heat,

leaving a wonderful mark in the night sky

flying over time and space,

unable to let go of the care of love

Even though

in the nebula where I disappeared <