Highlights of excellent composition evaluation
1. You are very good at observing life and can keenly capture meaningful moments; You are a student with great potential.
2. The language of the article is fluent, which also shows the teacher's feelings. You are the teacher's bosom friend. I hope I can learn from each other's strong points in appearance and pick a bouquet of fragrant flowers in the garden of literature.
Sorry, the teacher didn't understand this paragraph. Would you like to explain it to the teacher again? Thank you.
Your handwriting is neat and beautiful. Teachers should learn from you. If the material selection of the article is novel, it will definitely complement the writing style. what do you reckon ?
5. Great! Your article reproduces the simplicity and frankness of the northeast people, which makes readers feel refreshed. The language is extremely fluent, and the use of synaesthesia is particularly clever. Your writing style is conquering and attractive. Work hard and create more glory!
6. Your article is like a slow stream, delicate and smooth. Beautiful writing, sincere and delicate feelings, very personal style. May you continue to pick the waves of life on the road of writing and make your style more perfect!
7. The style of writing is sharp, with extensive quotations and deep roots. Although the analysis of social problems is still absolute, the article is still moving with a kind of enthusiasm and frankness. Further research and thinking on history books and social commentary. I believe your article will become more mature and lasting!
8. It is wise for a teenager who is not deeply involved in the world to approach a complex society. The language of the article is plain and soft, and the description is very casual, as if leading readers to stroll on the Yuan Ye of the mind. The disadvantage is that the discussion is slightly angular. You know, incisive arguments can make the finishing point and make your article more profound. Keep practicing and you will be better!
9. The writing of this article is beautiful and fresh, full of certain philosophy. It's about "I" walking by the sea. The sea not only gave me beautiful enjoyment, but also aroused my meditation and association. It can be said that the sea has given me a space to swim, and I am immersed in life for the sea, making the sea a "person" with noble personality strength. After reading this article, it gives people a sense of beauty and is thought-provoking.
10. School life seems dull except after class, but this paper is good at finding the extraordinary from the ordinary and showing it with relish: nervous morning, noon of fighting, tired night, and every time we choose a lens full of life interest to decorate it. The fresh and lively language vividly shows the positive mental outlook of contemporary middle school students.
1 1. This article is highly ideological and artistic, which makes people think for a long time after reading it. Ingenious conception, using comparative techniques to deepen the theme; The plot is also quite clever, and the whole story is both unexpected and reasonable. The language is unpretentious, and the author's love and hate are all contained in the narrative, which can make readers feel and think deeply.
12. This article gives a comprehensive introduction to my father: from appearance to heart, from work to life; The introduction to the father is also focused: focusing on the feelings of the father. The characters are plump, real and full of life. Be proud of such a father, work harder and live up to his expectations!
13. You can associate snow with the pursuit of life. Starting from the details of life, the spirit of innovation is commendable. This article reflects your plain writing style. Who says "boiled water" is not the best drink?
14. The quotation of some common sayings is just right, with nostalgia as the clue. It just reflects your ideology.
15. Is your article creative? Complete the train of thought in the form of geometric proof questions. The full text is very literary!
16. The author has a strong ability to control the situation, and the whole article is written in one go, giving people a bright and comfortable feeling! 17. As a casual feeling, your article is quick-thinking and full of wishes. The rich life experience and delicate thoughts and feelings revealed between the lines surprised the teacher. I hope you will make persistent efforts in your future writing and form a landscape of your own!
18. You are a very independent and knowledgeable student. I quite agree with you, but it would be even more icing on the cake if the writing arrangement was more compact. 19. This article has chosen a brand-new angle and let your thoughts run freely here, which is your greatest success. What the teacher wants to remind you is that when dealing with the world, there are always some rules that we need to grasp, so that your thoughts will be more profound and you will always receive the effect of "seeing the world through dripping water".
20. Such beautiful handwriting and clear and neat structure can not help but give people a refreshing feeling, which teachers should really learn from you. Let's promote each other in the future Chinese study, shall we?
2 1. Your writing is as simple and open-minded as your personality. Your writing skills are very good, which is also the crystallization of your long-term tempering. I hope you will feel and appreciate life with your heart and write more touching articles in the future study process.
22. I think this article reflects your heart. The road of life is indeed tortuous and long, but as long as you work hard and persevere, the crown of success will definitely belong to you.
23. The language is clear. You should not take writing as a burden, but record your mental journey with a positive attitude and delicate brushwork.
It can be said that your article is full of true feelings. People, failure is inevitable, and it is even more valuable to have the courage to face it. I believe it is gold, and there will always be flashes. I hope you can adjust your mind as soon as possible, and you will find that the sky is bluer.
25. It is really "writing like a god". It seems that you must have read a lot of literary works. The content is so rich that it shows your literary skills. Only by adjusting the materials in a certain logical order will this article be more exciting.
26. After reading your article, it seems that a stream flows in front of my eyes, pure and lovely. I hope you can keep this style of writing and express your richness in pure language.
27. Writing is like being a man. From your life experience, you can see that you are a good young man who makes progress. You have your own unique insights and profound understanding of things, which is really commendable.
28. Reading your article is really a pleasure. The first is the pleasure of thoughts and feelings, which of course comes from the profound and fresh conception of your article. As the saying goes, "Climbing a mountain is full of emotion and watching the sea is full of meaning". You are a conscientious person in life, and you touched others with your true feelings. This is the greatest success of your composition.
29. Exquisite and refined handwriting reveals your wisdom. Steady and down-to-earth, is the direction of your writing efforts in the future.
30. Careful conception and profound thinking show that you grew up in the world of writing. There is still a long way to write in the future. I hope you can think hard and keep innovating.
3 1. Although you don't like writing very much, you keep writing like a snail at every step, and never stop writing. Your spirit is really admirable. With your personality, you will definitely break into your own world.
Although you can live happily in your own world, the development of society has been globalized, so you should devote yourself to collective life with a brand-new attitude to adapt to the development of society.
33. There are always many absurd stories in the life of teenagers; There are always many magical dreams in the hearts of teenagers. This essay, like a boat full of dreams, is full of the author's innocence, dreams, yearning and just beginning to mature, and sails far away.
Caring about life and society is not the privilege of adults. From the article Accident, we can see that in your heart, there are not only childlike innocence, books and schools, but also endless concern for social worries. This article is full of twists and turns, especially the psychological description is very prominent, and the discussion at the end sublimates the theme of the article.
35. The language is decent and romantic, and the context is smooth, showing the image of a "bookworm" and the affection between "me" and "bosom friend", which is smart and elegant.
We seem to have heard a lot about the fragility of life, which can disappear in an instant. If you walk in the fields and forests, step on fallen leaves and look up at the blue sky, can you feel the breath of life? Yes, the world is beautiful because of life. Life needs to care for each other. This is the theme of your "out of chapter".
At the beginning of the composition:
1, the beginning of the article is concise and appropriate, and the environmental description sets off the emotions of the characters, which is very artistic.
2, the beginning is concise and to the point
3. The beginning of the article is novel and serves as a warning. Let readers produce characters as soon as they meet? In my mind.
The beginning of the article is fascinating and attracts readers. ? The combination of point and surface makes the article vivid, concrete and meticulous.
5. The language of the article is vivid and readable.
6, the beginning is extraordinary, attracting readers.
7. The beginning is touching and has a real feeling.
8. The beginning of the article is very clear, which plays a leading role in the full text.
9. The choice of articles is novel, which arouses readers' desire to read.
Synthesis process:
1, full of passion, describe it?
2, focused, detailed and appropriate, specific content.
3. The metaphor is appropriate and the words are vivid.
4. The language of the article is easy to understand, close to the reality of life and friendly to read.
5、? Tell us in a relaxed and happy tone, which is unforgettable.
6. The narrative is natural and vivid, with compact structure, coherent connection with nature and prominent center.
7. For the description of the scenery, the language is concise and accurate, while the association is touching the scene, and the scene is naturally integrated.
8. By enriching the characters' language and actions, the ideological quality of the characters is set off.
9. This article is lyrical in narration.
10, make full use of the combination of static and dynamic writing, supplemented by metaphor, personification and other techniques.
1 1. The author observes carefully and narrates orderly.
12, the use of some subtle words invisibly adds a lot of interest to the article.
13, the article is elegant, fluent and coherent, especially the characters' language is humorous.
14, the article is reasonable in imagination,
15, through vivid language description, let readers feel like they are in a dream.
16, the article has clear clues and prominent themes, closely surrounding? Go on.
17, the details are quite clever. Extremely rich in skills.
18. It is a major feature of this article to describe the characters' language, demeanor and movements in detail.
19, delicate description, strong life breath, accurate and vivid words and sentences.
20. The language is accurate, vivid and vivid, and the content is extremely rich and specific.
2 1. The story is vivid and concrete, and the words and deeds of the characters conform to their respective identity characteristics.
22. The article comes from life, so although the language is not so beautiful, it is really interesting and well written.
23. The article will? Write in detail
24. The language is lively and interesting.
25. A lot of spoken English in life makes the article more natural and friendly.
End of synthesis:
1, the ending is just right, the center is clear, the language is concise and profound, and it is thought-provoking.
2, use the feeling switch, ending with feeling. In this way, the article is coordinated from beginning to end, and the theme of the article is repeated, which is very infectious.
3. The praise for the characters at the end is sincere and touching.
4. The implicit ending of the article is both topical and intriguing.
5. Focus on the end to express emotions, give consideration to the beginning, and summarize the full text. Coherent from beginning to end, in one go.
6. The vivid description of details reveals the inner world of the characters in a beneficial way, which is the success of this paper.
7. What is the article? For the ending, it is concise and memorable.
8. At the end of the article, the central sentence is really clear, and the conclusion is short and powerful.
9. The ending is full of expectation and enthusiasm. Words are done, meaning is still unfinished.
10, the poetic language at the beginning and end of the article is full of imagination and rhythmic beauty, which makes people want to read and love to read.
1 1. Although it is a trivial matter, it is vividly described by the author, and the indispensable ending highlights the theme of the article.
12. Although the story is ordinary, it is sincere, rich and touching.
13, the end of the article is unconventional, giving people the feeling of wanting to rest.
14, ending with? Point to the best, implicit and meaningful, meaningful.
General comments:
1, the article is miscellaneous but not chaotic, but it can be detailed and focused.
2. Is the article right? The full and proper atmosphere rendering is the focus of the article? Made a delicate and vivid portrayal.
3、? It is practical, contains simple and profound philosophy, and is exciting and moving to read.
This article is full of passion. Read between the lines, can you understand the rights of small authors? Love. The full text has distinct levels and fluent sentences.
5. The case narrative is vivid, concrete and interesting, which is similar to the previous metaphor? Come down in one continuous line. Finally, the author showed his rights in a few words. Feeling, moved.
6. The article is well organized and forms a complete image.
7. The language of the article is fresh and lively, the description can grasp the main features of things, and the length is short and pithy, which is worth reading.
8. The content of this article is vivid and rich, the language is novel and refreshing, and the structure is unique and reasonable.
9. The article is meticulous, orderly, vivid and concrete, which is a masterpiece.
10, the close-up is unique and interesting. The full text is full of childlike innocence and interest, and it is very kind to read.
1 1. Can the article be described in fresh and interesting language? Things. Between the lines, it is full of childlike interest in childhood, and laughter is endless, which is a masterpiece.
12, appropriate details, and the coexistence of reality and reality are the two characteristics of this paper. The content is richer and more vivid.
13, the full text is fresh and elegant, kind and euphemistic, simple and unconventional, and it is worth learning.
14, the full-text language is vivid and accurate, and the plot is wonderful and tortuous, which seems to bring readers into a happy paradise and make people smile.
15, the full text is easy to understand and interesting.
16, the full text is clear, vivid and compact, and interesting.
17, pay attention to observing specific things and develop appropriate imagination, which is the success of this paper.
18, the article melts into the scenery, describes the scenery while expressing emotions, and is good at using analogy to make the article vivid and concrete.
19, the article is novel in content, reasonable in structure, fluent and coherent, and naturally accessible.
20. This article is based on real life, with appropriate materials, novel ideas, clear paragraphs, natural transition, full of interest and strong readability.
2 1, with fluent language and free and easy writing, is a relatively successful work.
22. Although the language of this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, with rich and true emotions and interesting reading.
23. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is also very profound and thorough. The full-text language is forceful, hit the floor, exciting and exciting.
24. This composition has novel materials, wonderful ideas and lively language. There is a fresh breath of life and children's interest between the lines.
25. What does the article say in the order of things? Things, the language is fluent, the level is clear, and it seems very happy from beginning to end.
26. The full text has a lively rhythm and fresh language, and it is always full of humor and fun to read.
27. The full-text narrative is concentrated, the language is concise and fluent, and the feelings are sincere and touching.
28. The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, and it is interesting and fascinating to read.
29. The author is clever in conception, good at choosing points to expand, and his writing is ups and downs, which is intriguing.