(1) expresses homesickness. The rustling cold voice set off the sadness of the poet's foreign life. Midnight reminisces about the past and promotes weaving, and the poet feels homesick.
(2) Expressed the loneliness of living in a foreign country. The rustling cold voice set off the sadness of the poet's foreign life. Children catch up with the night show to promote weaving, and the music scene reflects sadness, which shows the loneliness of being in a foreign country.
(3) show nostalgia for childhood. The children hurried to promote knitting in the evening, which evoked memories of childhood. The rustling and chilling sound and the falling leaves of autumn scenery also showed their nostalgia for their carefree life in a foreign country.
(2) There are many answers, and the answers are as follows:
(1) Write love with scenery. The rustling sound and the children's chasing at night promote weaving and set each other off, so as to show the poet's loneliness or homesickness in a foreign country.
② Dynamic and static combination. The rustling leaves and the wind set off the silence of autumn night.
③ Comparison of joys and sorrows. Catching children at night promotes weaving, and the music scene reflects sadness.
4 synaesthesia application. The sound of rustling causes the feeling of autumn chill, and the sense of touch is caused by hearing.
⑤ Use allusions skillfully. The poet secretly used the allusions of Hans Zhang (autumn wind: Hans Zhang, a Jin native, was an official in Luoyang, saw the autumn wind, and left his job to return to his hometown because of homesickness), leaving no trace.
Scoring standard: (1)(2) 5 points for the topic, 3 points for the content and 2 points for the language. Among them, the question (1) answers some kind of "emotion", and the question (2) answers some kind of "expression technique", each giving 1 point, and each giving 2 points for analysis. As long as you answered one of the "answer examples" in this question, if there are other answers, it is reasonable.
(1)① The author expressed a feeling of homesickness, homesickness and homesickness.
One or two sentences in the poem say that the leaves of trees are flying, the cold sound is blowing, the autumn wind is rustling and the river boat is drifting, which effectively sets off the poet's sad mood of being in a foreign land and wandering around. Three or four sentences describing the life scenes of children playing tricks on crickets with burning lamps will naturally arouse the poet's association. He will remember that his childhood was so naive, romantic, happy and interesting; He will think of the warmth and beauty of his hometown; He will think of the voices and smiles of relatives and friends ... a feeling of being at home, like going back to childhood.
(2) Poetry expresses the author's lonely feeling of living in a foreign country.
Write a sentence or two about the scenery, and use fallen leaves, autumn wind and cold to set off the desolation of wandering and loneliness. A river of autumn water, the sky is dark, and the ears are cold. The poet couldn't sleep all night. He must be depressed and his meaning is not smooth. Write three or four sentences about children catching crickets at night, which is very interesting, cleverly contrasts sadness and shows the loneliness and helplessness of living in a foreign country.
③ Poetry expresses the author's thoughts and feelings of missing childhood.
Looking at the whole poem, generally speaking, three or four sentences are seen by the poet. Children catch crickets at night with great interest, forgetting the autumn wind and chill, regardless of the fall of trees and the cold in Qiu Jiang, catching crickets at midnight with relish. That kind of obsession, that kind of caution, that kind of ups and downs of sensitivity, are all shown in one gesture. This cheerful and interesting life scene naturally evokes the poet's pursuit and nostalgia for childhood. One or two sentences can also be understood in this way. The autumn scenery, accompanied by rustling sounds and swaying leaves, reveals a sense of wandering and inexplicable melancholy, and also reflects the poet's nostalgia and yearning for the carefree childhood living in a foreign country.
(2) (1) Lyric by scene, blending scenes.
All four sentences in the poem are about scenery. Write one or two sentences about the natural environment and three or four sentences about life scenes. The fallen trees are rustling, the cold sounds are bursting, and the autumn wind is Qiu Jiang, conveying the feeling of drifting and desolation; Playing tricks on cricket makes the child happy, revealing the meaning of getting carried away and forgetting the fish. A sadness and a joy, set each other off and become interesting, all of which are integrated into the environmental description without trace.
(2) Dynamic and static combination, with dynamic lining static.
Autumn leaves, autumn wind, autumn sounds, Qiu Jiang, autumn lights, Qiu Er, autumn boats and autumn meaning are all vividly written, with light and shadow; Dark as ink, deep and unpredictable, endless darkness, this is quiet writing, quiet and cold, full of melancholy. Whistling wind and naughty children, these dynamic scenes skillfully reflect the deep silence in late autumn, and even arouse people's appreciation of the poet's sad and sleepless heart in the cold and silent night.
(3) Contrast sadness with joy, so that joy sets off sadness.
One or two sentences describe the scenery, the autumn wind sweeps away the leaves, and it is freezing in the cold, which is a sad scene and conveys sadness; Writing three or four sentences about people, encouraging weaving in the middle of the night, and bright lights shining on the fence are a happy scene, spreading joy. Sadness and joy are mixed, and joy sets off sadness, which shows the loneliness, helplessness and sleeplessness of wandering wanderers.
(4) Express one's feelings and express one's feelings, and use allusions in secret.
The autumn wind moving on the river secretly uses the allusions of Hans Zhang. According to legend, Hans Zhang, an official living in Luoyang, missed his hometown when he saw the autumn wind, so he resigned and returned to his hometown, but he got his wish. Knowing this, it is naturally easy to understand. The poem conveys the poet's thoughts and feelings of being far away from home for a long time, unable to return home and missing his family.
(5) personification, synaesthesia and gracefulness.
"The rustling leaves send cold sounds, and the autumn wind on the river moves guests' feelings", and "sending" and "moving" reflect feelings in things, giving the leaves and autumn wind a human modality. It seems that these poems of material state and emotion bring readers into an artistic conception of sending cold air and moving Qiu Jiang, which is fascinating and full of melancholy. The rustling leaves send cold sounds skillfully uses synaesthesia, urges the feeling of cold autumn with rustling sounds, and conveys tactile feelings with auditory images, which is meaningful.
⑥ Choose words carefully, and "cold" and "pick" are vivid.
The word "cold" is a pun, which has both the feeling of chilly autumn wind and the meaning of being stranded at the end of the world. The word "pick" in the details is very interesting. The child's concentration, sensitivity and delicacy, and the child's breathless observation, surprise and excitement are all in one "pick". "Pick out" personality and "pick out" charm!
⑦ Combining the virtual with the real, reflecting the real with the virtual.
The four sentences in the whole poem describe the scenery and characters, and everything you see and hear, whether bright or dark, is realistic. Full of autumn sounds, full of autumn nights, a autumn river and a group of children, just like a photo of the scene, give people the feeling that they have heard their voices, seen their people and been in the environment. This vivid scene skillfully conveys the poet's sad and lonely feelings full of sadness and sleepless nights. Free time in reality (guest feelings), contained in reality, reflected in reality, has endless meanings!