2 1. Read the following text and complete the composition. (60 points)
Modern Chinese Dictionary (6th Edition) explains the word "aftertaste" as follows: huiwèi① The aftertaste of food: ~ infinity. 2 Move by memory: I have been listening to what he said.
The process of aftertaste is a process of re-feeling, a process of in-depth understanding and a process of re-understanding.
In life and study, many times, a dish, a sentence, a poem, even a cloud, an event, a feeling … will make you memorable.
Please write an article of no less than 600 words on the topic of "aftertaste".
Requirements: ① Except for poetry and drama, the style is not limited; (2) There should be no real names such as names of people, schools and places; (3) the handwriting is neat.
Excellent composition
Never go far.
At noon in the country, it is very quiet. Lying on the greasy mat, the hot air rolled wave after wave, making it difficult for me to sleep. Quiet, very quiet, the wind blows over the leaves, and everyone can hear it clearly. Tossing and turning, suddenly heard the west end of the yard, there were waves of subtle voices.
"Goo goo, goo goo, goo goo …" It comes from a row of pine trees beside the yard. Pine trees are dense and lush, and many birds live on them. At this moment, the birds are enjoying the joy of noon and singing wildly. With the cooing, I turned over again and fell asleep.
Back in the city, I never heard that magical voice again. During the day, the toll collector and the owner shouted at each other on the road downstairs; The old man pedaled three rounds, tirelessly shouting in the loudspeaker, collecting old TV sets, old refrigerators and long hair; At night, the smoke from the barbecue stall downstairs is rolling, and young people are drinking beer and planning state affairs; There are even neighbors who are drunk and come back to sing. I shut the window tightly to cut off all the noise and the sounds of nature.
Goo goo, where have you been? Why can't I see you?
Another morning, I woke up early, the alarm clock didn't go off, it was only five o'clock. A ray of fresh sunshine came through the curtain. I simply open the curtains and windows and let the sweet sunshine like fresh juice flow into my room to welcome the beauty of this morning.
Suddenly, a "goo goo" gently floated to my ear. It's goo goo! Surprised and happy, I put my head out of the window and tried my best to see the faces of the "goo goo". However, a few lush trees hid the singers very close. I have to sit down and enjoy the fresh beauty alone.
I didn't expect this long-lost "goo goo" to never go far. This "goo goo" sound, like a cluster of clear springs, is clear and comfortable. This kind of "goo goo" sound is like a long drought, which is refreshing. This "goo goo" sound is like a breeze among bamboo forests, and the leaves are swaying. This "goo goo" sound is like a glass of sweet wine with old friends, which is quite elegant. Long time no see, goo goo. "Goo goo", long time no see!
Thank you for the silence this morning, which gave me a chance to hug this long-lost "goo goo" and realize that the lovely "goo goo" has never gone far!
Perhaps it is the noise of the city that makes us unwilling to hear this natural sound. Perhaps it is the busy life in grade three that keeps us from hearing the whispers of nature. How many natural voices are masked by noise and blocked by complicated affairs, and how many voices we regret lurk around and never go far?
"Goo goo", so you haven't gone far.
"Ding-ding-ding-dong-dong ..." The alarm clock sounded "wonderful" music. The parents in the other room woke up and asked:
"Son, did you sleep well?"
Great.
comment
This article has a small opening and profound meaning. Who hasn't heard the cooing of birds? In this paper, the familiar things around us are tightly locked in the topic, which solves the first difficulty of composition and shows ingenuity and originality in material selection. What is particularly commendable is that in the common materials, I skillfully integrated my own feelings and thoughts on life. At the end of the article, I even included some philosophies. Yes, the beauty of life is around us, and we can't let "complicated affairs" block the "natural voice". In writing, the author selects several fragments to create a strong sense of picture, and pays attention to describing them in different ways, rather than simply describing them, which makes people feel unfinished after reading them.