Highlights
Mother!
Put aside your sorrow,
Let me indulge in your arms,
Only you are the settlement of my soul.
Little flowers,
also want to raise their heads,
Thank you for the love of spring
However, the profound kindness made her finally fall silent.
Mother!
Are you that spring?
Comments on maternal love in Bing Xin’s poems often have dual connotations: one is the infiltration of maternal love into the poet; the other is the poet’s affectionate praise of maternal love. These two little poems reflect this dual connotation. They express children's attachment to their loving mothers and sing a hymn of love for their loving mothers. The metaphors are novel, the language is clear and touching.
The flower of success,
People are only amazed by her current beauty!
However, her Ya'er was
soaked in the tears of struggle,
sprinkled with the blood of sacrifice.
Comments: This is a philosophical poem. The poet compares the success of life and career to flowers, the initial stage of career achievement to the "buds" of flowers, the hard work of struggle to the "fountain of tears" that cultivates flowers, and self-sacrifice to the "rain of blood" that nourishes flowers. ", vivid, relevant and thought-provoking.
Inquiry and Thinking
There are many voices praising "Stars" and "Spring Water", but some people disagree. For example, Liang Shiqiu said back then:
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When I read Bing Xin’s poems, the biggest disappointment is that she completely inherited the shortcomings of female mainstream writers and almost lacked the strengths of female mainstream writers. Ms. Bing Xin, whom I know from "Stars" and "Spring Water", is a poet who is as cold as sub-zero.
The genres of "Stars" and "Spring Water" cannot be considered elegant in the country of poetry. This may be the easiest thing to do. Capture a specious poetic feeling, select a few beautiful words and arrange them to form a poem, and over time and months, you can create an episode. This is the most lazy style of poetry, and the most unfavorable style of poetry.
Another shortcoming of "Stars" and "Spring Water" is that the syntax is too close to prose.
To summarize: Ms. Bing Xin is a prose writer and novelist, not suitable for poetry; the genres of "Stars" and "Spring Water" are not worthy of imitation and have become fashionable.