The structure of the article is very small, only four paragraphs, about 1200 words. This is different from ordinary travel prose, but expresses the author's feelings through the green pool of Meiyu Pool. So the first paragraph only used one sentence, "I went to Xianyan for the second time and marveled at the green of Meiyu Pool." The pen is abrupt, but the topic is orderly, so that readers can understand the center of this article at a glance. "Meiyu Pool is a waterfall pool", just to set off the strange and lovely water in Meiyu Pool, the waterfall falls down and writes the beautiful scenery like flying flowers and broken jade. Writing Meiyu Pavilion is only for the transition to writing plum rain pool Pavilion. All these pave the way for the following description of plum rain pool's "green". Therefore, the author did not describe the process of the tour in detail, but made a concise and vivid introduction to the waterfalls and Meiyu Pavilion along the tour route. In the middle of describing the Meiyu Pavilion and the waterfall, two sentences were inserted: "This is the thin cloudy weather in autumn. Slight clouds flow over our heads; Both the rock surface and the grass show a little moist oily green. " It not only explains the season of travel, but also deducts the word "green" from "some oily green", always taking care of the center to be described in the article. Finally, the full text suddenly stopped with the sentence "I went to Xianyan for the second time, and I couldn't help but marvel at the green of plum rain pool", but it still came down to the word "green", which reflected the beginning. A pen is extraordinary, and a bundle is neat. The difference between the end and the beginning is that only the word "can't help it" is added, but it is a vivid stroke. After the author's description, even readers can't help but be surprised by the green color of Meiyu Pool.
The word "green" not only plays a relevant role in the structure of the article, but also is the focus of the full text. The author, like an expert in calligraphy and painting, used various techniques such as metaphor, personification and association to describe the strange, lovely, moist and soft plum rain pool water from all angles, and integrated his admiration, joy and yearning into this piece of green. "The sparkling green of Meiyu Pool attracts us; We began to chase her sacred light of separation. " How well the two words "attraction" and "chasing" are understood! The strong attraction of the green color of Meiyu pool to "me" and my desire to appreciate the lovely green color are integrated. At this point, love and scenery are as difficult to decompose as water emulsion. Through metaphor, the author not only describes the quiet beauty of the pool, but also "seems to be a huge lotus leaf covered with strange green", which makes the author have the delusion of holding her; It also describes her dynamic beauty. "She is wrinkled loosely, like a skirt held by a young woman ..." With the author's brush strokes and the author's emotional waves, not only slight green ripples appear in front of our eyes, but shining green waves jump between our fingers, and a soft, lively and cordial feeling will overflow from our hearts. The author even imagined her as "like a little girl of 12 years old", wanted to pat her, caress her, kiss her, and called her "daughter green" smartly, which was very feminine. Bright and colorful pictures and interesting feelings are harmonious and unified. In this poetic green, the author's love for life is fully revealed, and the author's upward passion is high.
The article "Green" is a household name, not only because it vividly depicts the "strange" and "intoxicating" green of Meiyu Pool, but also because of the rich poetry between the lines. It has not only the artistic conception and structure of poetry, but also the emotion, artistic conception and language of poetry. It can be said that poetry is text, and there are poems in the text. The latter three, namely sincere and rich emotion, bold and rich imagination and vivid language, constitute the main factors of green poetic characteristics and are the unique charm of green.
Although "Green" is a landscape prose, "all scenery words are sentimental words", the author melts his "heartfelt feelings" about the motherland's landscape into the detailed description of the scenery in "plum rain pool", which makes the scenery not only delicate and vivid, but also profound and sincere, expressing "the voice of the author's inner singing", thus making the full text full of poetry and painting. At the same time, the author's expression of this emotion is not like the Yangtze River, which flows thousands of miles, directly expressing his own thoughts, but using the brushwork of playing hard to get, first suppressing and then promoting. First, the word "Jing" is used to express the overall feeling of plum rain pool's green, which also symbolizes the author's internal motivation to pursue and explore the scenic spots in plum rain pool. Then through vivid and meticulous description, it shows us a three-dimensional picture of the surrounding environment of Meiyu Pool.
In "Green", the author also gives full play to his rich imagination, creates a vivid image, brings readers into a poetic artistic realm, strongly expresses the author's sincere and rich feelings, and has a strong artistic appeal.
Mr. Zhu Ziqing is quite accomplished in language. His prose language is mostly spoken, concise, simple and natural. In order to express his feelings, he paid great attention to the tempering and processing of language, and paid attention to the creation and refinement of words, striving to create the artistic conception of poetry with vivid and vivid language, and to achieve an "unattainable realm" in simplicity.
Green language is very representative. To sum up, there are three aesthetic characteristics: painting beauty, dynamic beauty and music beauty.
The body of painting now uses only one sentence in the author's description of the mountain waterfall: "A white, shiny water embedded in two wet black edges will appear in front of him." Using a word "mosaic" to describe the waterfall in the mountain stream is accurate and vivid, which makes the waterfall full of three-dimensional sense. Dynamic beauty, the author writes that the image of Mei Yuting is "sitting on a prominent corner of the rock, empty up and down, like a goshawk spreading its wings in the sky." A word "ju" is full of momentum, and a word "fu" is full of expression. With a word "ju" and a word "fu", it turns static into dynamic, and the Meiyu Pavilion standing in the air and on the stone is vividly written. The music is beautiful. The green language has a clear sense of rhythm and a clear and harmonious melody. It is catchy to read and beautiful to express, which can make readers intoxicated with beautiful music and produce aesthetic characteristics of "both pleasing to the ear and pleasing to the ear".
Ai Qing's "green" looks like an inverted green ink bottle.
Everything is green.
Where to find so much green:
Dark green, light green, light green,
Green, light green, pink green.
Green is black, surprisingly green;
The blowing wind is green,
The rain is green,
The flowing water is green,
Sunlight is green, too;
All green is concentrated,
Squeeze together,
Overlap together,
Crossing quietly together.
A sudden wind,
It seems that the dance teacher is conducting.
All the greens are neat.
Fluttering with the beat ... Ai Qing's poem "Green" describes in literary form that spring is green everywhere, the grass on the tree and the earth swing back and forth in the spring breeze, the wind is green, the water is green, and the world is full of green. Green is the color and symbol of life. Background:1February, 979, a national delegation of poets led by Ai Qing visited Guangzhou, Haikou, Sanya, Zhanjiang and Shanghai with him. He talked poetry with others, visited together, picked up shells at the ends of the earth, told jokes on long-distance buses, and wrote his Bonsai, Green, Tianya Haijiao, Seawater and Tears, and The Story of the Sea. Green is the color of nature, hope, comfort and happiness! . Mr. Ai Qing's famous sentence "Green" describes the swaying of green, the beauty and illusion of green, the green that moves with the wind, and even the green life. "Green" really has eternal charm!