"Zhao Jun resentment? Ode to the rain on the lotus
Song? Yang Wanli
In the afternoon, I dreamed of the bottom of the boat, and the fragrance filled the West Lake. The sound of heavy rain hitting the tent surprised the dream at first.
However, it is a pool that jumps in the rain, and the real beads are still together. Gather like a nest of mercury, and clear the waves.
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In the first two sentences of the word, the author dreamed of boating on the West Lake. The author dreamed that he was driving a boat in the West Lake, swimming under the lotus leaf, and the fragrance of the lotus leaf was everywhere. Then the writer was awakened by the rain. The word "first shock in a dream" highlights the urgency of this rain.
"It's a pool of lotus jumping in the rain, and real pearls are scattered together." The author saw two sentences in the yard. The rain on the lotus leaf is like pearls, crystal clear and constantly beating. The rain fell on the lotus leaf for the first time, breaking into small pearls and instantly gathering into big pearls, which is so repeated and interesting. At this time, the lotus leaf turned into a huge green cup, and every shake made the pearls roll together. There is too much rain, and the lotus leaves can't bear the weight. If they tilt slightly, water drops will flood into the pool like mercury. The word "jump" indicates that the rain is very urgent, which echoes the word "hit" in the previous film; Compared with water drops, Mercury vividly depicts the appearance of water drops rolling and gathering on the lotus leaf. The four verbs "tiao", "san", "ju" and "xie" are used together. Rain hits the lotus leaf, and the water drops on the lotus leaf roll, and repeated scenes are vividly written.
This word is ingenious in conception, novel in content, vivid in movement, and highly artistic in appeal.
Extended reading: Yang Wanli's poetic achievements
Yang Wanli's poems had a great influence at that time: "Who is the master in today's poetry world, Cheng Zhai's poetry method is being implemented." (Jiang Teli's "Xie Yangcheng Zhai President's Sentence") "The four seas become Zhai to dominate the poetry world." (Xiang Anshi's "Two Poems of Pan Yang with Rhyme")
Yang Wanli learned extensively from his predecessors, but he never stood still, but was determined to surpass him. He said, "I didn't know there were predecessors in the pen." ("Mai Shi Ke Ye Gui") added: "Chuanzong made me feel ashamed, and writers have their own romantic feelings. Huang (Huang Tingjian) and Chen () stopped at the column, and Tao (Tao Yuanming) and Xie (Xie Lingyun) by going up one flight of stairs left. " (Postscript Xu Jin's Poems on a Visit to the Province) It is with this pioneering and innovative spirit that he refused to follow others' advice and finally "shed all his fur and express himself" ("Song Poetry Money Sincerity"), instead of turning all the way, becoming a unique poetic style. The beginners of Jiangxi Poetry School focus on the rhythm of words. After the age of 50, the style of poetry has changed, from imitating predecessors to imitating nature, creating his unique "sincere style" Chengzhai pays attention to the so-called "living method", that is, he is good at capturing fleeting interests and expressing them in humorous and simple language. For example, "Ba Fengbo": "Fengbo advised you to have a glass of wine, why bother to play a bad drama and shock poetry!" It fully embodies the characteristics of Chengzhai style.
Yang Wanli's poetry works are eclectic and varied, ranging from the heroic momentum of "returning a thousand troops to the Three Gorges, penetrating the heavenly heart and the moon cave" to the "graceful posture, describing people's feelings, and then describing details, and wonderful music" (Postscript of Yang Tingxiu's Stone Man Peak by Zhou Bida). His sincere poems are characterized by novelty, strangeness, vividness, quickness and humor, and are especially famous for "beautiful circulation" (Liu Kezhuang's Preface to Jiangxi Poetry School) and "lively stabbing the bottom" (Liu Qi's Gui Qianzhi, Volume 8). Take a nap in early summer, for example: "Plum teeth are sore, and bananas divide the screens. I slept for a long time and thought mercilessly, watching children catch willow branches. " What is written with deep feelings is called "absent-minded" (Volume 4 of He Lu series). For example, two scripts and pens, "Fengbo" watching Jin Huashan on the beach of Xiaheng Mountain, and "Playing with the Moon on a Summer Night" are witty, thoughtful and have strong artistic appeal. Yang Wanli paid great attention to the advantages of learning folk songs and absorbed many lively poems of colloquial people. He often "pretends proverbs and enters from the mouth" (Jiang Hongxiang's Tang poems), thus forming a popular, simple, natural and vivid language feature. Yang Wanli left a lot of poems to express his patriotism and worries about the times.
Extended reading: character evaluation
Yu: There is such a person in the southeast! In addition to the preliminary appointment, two people recommend it together, and this person should be the person in charge.
Zhao Shen: The courage of the benevolent.
Xiang Anshi: The poetic world is unprecedented, and the new literature machine is unique today.
Jiang Teli: Who is the master in today's poetry? The "Chengzhai Poetry Law" is being implemented.
Zhou Bida: Chengzhai has a big chapter and a short chapter, which is made in seven steps, without changing a word. All were wiped out, knocking down the Three Gorges, penetrating the heavenly heart and threatening the moon. As for the posture of the object and writing people's feelings, the narrative is good and the music is wonderful. There is a mouth at the end of the pen and an eye in the sentence.
Lu You: (1) Cheng Zhai Lao Tzu wrote a poem couplet, which made the whole world obey in one sentence. (2) The article has pricing, and the discussion is for the public. I'm not as good as Chengzhai. This comment is the same all over the world.
Luo Dajing: When the dynasty was established, the discussion was quite tenable. If you ask for Zhang Jun's share, it is said that Zhu is different from Tang. This is a world event in Chu Jun's supervision of the whole country.
Yan Yu: First learn Mid-levels (Wang Anshi) and Houshan (Chen Shidao), and finally learn the quatrains of the Tang Dynasty. I have given up all my family's health, don't make a fuss.
Jie Jin: Articles can cover a lifetime, and chastity can inspire the whole world.
Jiang Yikui: During the reign of Ganchun, poets called Cheng Zhai, Fan Shihu (Fan Chengda) and Lu You as great masters.
Wang Fuzhi: If Zhou Bida, Wang, Fan Chengda and Yang Wanli can also be seen, then elegance and grace will be restrained, which is enough to be harmonious.