Appreciation of the sentence of seven matches
The novel "Seven Matches" takes the Red Army's Long March across the grassland as the background, intercepting a tiny but very touching scene, which shows the lofty revolutionary belief and brilliant revolutionary character of the Red Army soldiers. Words? Preview tips? Emphasize, want? Understand how the author expresses the revolutionary character and belief of the characters. . The author believes that we might as well appreciate it from the following four points.
First, the parallel story clues of light and shade
The novel can be clearly divided into three parts according to the appearance of the characters, and Lu Jinyong's whereabouts run through the whole text. Therefore, in this sense, Lu Jinyong's whereabouts are the clues that run through the whole article. This is an open line.
What is really worth appreciating is the hidden line of this article. What is the title of the article? Seven matches? It can be seen that the importance of matches, the author is closely around a? Fire? Words to arrange the plot and organize the materials. ? If only there was a fire roast! ? Lu Jinyong, who was hungry and cold, told the importance of fire at the beginning of the article. ? Uncover the party card and put a small pile of matches and dry matches side by side. ? Matches appeared, and we couldn't help but be shocked by the unknown soldier's saving matches with his life. ? In the boundless darkness, clusters of bonfires are burning. ? Matches were finally delivered to the army, which played an important role. Like Lu Jinyong, we miss the great unknown soldier more. So? Fire, matches, bonfires? Step by step, it constitutes the dark line of the plot development of the novel.
Second, the combination of positive and negative characterization
1. Environmental description sets off the characters. Environmental descriptions in novels are often used to contrast characters, and this article is no exception. At the beginning of the novel, it describes the strange weather of sunny rain mixed with rain and hail on the grass, and then describes the grass after heavy rain in detail through Lu Jinyong's eyes. These descriptions not only show the environment of the characters' activities? The hardships on the Long March show the strong will and perseverance of the Red Army soldiers, and also imply? Seven matches? In this case. The environment of Lu Jinyong's activities is also the environment of unknown soldiers. The description of the environment here is actually to create an atmosphere for the appearance of the unknown soldier and the description of his heroic behavior.
2. Side reflection of inner feelings. ? If only there was a fire roast! ? If there is a fire and a glass of water, maybe he can still live! ? In Lu Jinyong's view, these ideas are just? Delusion? . The unknown soldier kept it? Seven matches? , he didn't use this? Seven matches? Save his life, because he deeply knows: this, this is, everyone's! ? So, he's willing to sacrifice his life to support this? Seven matches? . Just in Lu Jinyong? As if he saw a fiery red fire, he snuggled up to this comrade by the fire? At that time, the unknown soldier tried his best to entrust matches to him and passed away safely. It can be seen that Lu Jinyong's inner feelings are written many times in this article, which is essentially to reflect the noble quality of the unknown soldier from the side.
3. Highlight the theme. This paper gives a close-up portrait of the unknown soldier and a positive description of the unknown soldier's eyes, movements and language. The description of the moment before the sacrifice, in particular, embodies the sublimity and greatness of the unknown soldier and highlights the theme of the novel.
Thirdly, figurative rhetoric with profound implications.
The full text uses vivid metaphors many times, some of which have profound meanings and give people a vivid impression. For example:? Red matchsticks are gathered together, and the positive pressure is in the center of the scarlet seal, like a jumping flame. ? See this sentence, you can contact the metaphor in A Midsummer Night by the Sea (Volume II). Whenever rows of waves surge in, the glow reflected from the peak is red and bright, just like a flaming flame. ? Are the vehicles the same? Flame? Because they are all dynamic, vivid and vivid, but what is in the text? Flame? , but can remind us of the unknown soldier a fiery heart, think of these? The match pile will light a warm fire and bring light and heat to the troops. Another example is:? Only that hand is clear, it is held high, like a road sign, pointing straight in the direction of the Long March troops. Road signs? It means that the unknown soldier pointed out the direction of the troops ahead, pointed out the direction of the Long March, and his revolutionary spirit also pointed out the direction of revolutionary victory.
Fourth, use words vividly and appropriately.
All excellent works pay attention to the use of words. The words used in this paper pay more attention to vividness and appropriateness. Please look at the following two sentences (emphasis added):
Suddenly, a cold wind blew, and thick clouds appeared from the ground, instantly covering the sky?
(2) The comrade closed the party card with a match, held it in his hand, put it in Lu Jinyong's hand as carefully as holding a bowl full of water, and held it tightly together, staring straight at Lu Jinyong's face.
In the first sentence? Take? , showing the speed and strangeness of thick clouds, is that clear? The climate in the grassland is strange? And use it? Floating? Fly? Such words cannot show this effect. A group of verbs in the second sentence? Close? Lift it? Holding? Release? Shake it? Gaze? And a set of adjectives? Careful? Is it tight? Straight man? , all show that the unknown soldier will see the game is very important. In his view, party cards and matches are more precious than his own life. Therefore, he is cautious in his actions, pious in his behavior and noble in his heart. A series of vivid and appropriate verbs and adjectives reflect the unsurpassed loyalty of the unknown soldier to the party, his trust in his comrades-in-arms and his firm belief in the revolutionary cause, which effectively shows the theme of the novel.
Appreciation of seven games
It's dawn and the rain has stopped.
The climate in the grassland is very strange. Good weather with few stars in the month. Suddenly, a cold wind blew, and thick clouds appeared from the flat ground, instantly covering the sky. Then there was a heavy rain, mixed with hail as big as chestnuts, and nowhere to pour down.
Lu Jinyong poked his head out of the bushes and looked around. The whole grassland is immersed in a misty rain and fog, and no one can see or hear voices; Weeds washed by heavy rain lie flat in the mud like combs, and even the road can't be seen clearly. It's still cloudy, and occasionally a few hailstones fall and hit the muddy green water, splashing a handful of water. He sighed painfully. He fell behind because of inflammation in his calf wound. For two days, he worked day and night. He tried to catch up with the brigade today, but he was caught in this unlucky rainstorm, which delayed half a night.
He cursed the weather, walked out of the bushes, stretched himself, and a cool breeze suddenly made him shiver. Only then did he find that his clothes were completely soaked.
? If only there was a fire roast! ? He twisted his clothes hard and watched the water drip down his trousers, thinking. Does he know it's delusional? Not only now, but also the day before he left, their company had to eat raw food because there was nothing to make a fire. But he subconsciously put his hand into his pants. Suddenly, his hand touched something sticky. He quickly squatted down with joy and rummaged through his pockets. Sure enough, a pinch of highland barley powder stuck to the bottom of the pocket; The flour was wet by the rain and became a thin paste. He carefully scraped off the thin paste, which was as big as an egg. He pinched the dough sparingly. One moment it grew into a shape, and the other moment it turned into a circle. He couldn't help feeling happy. Fortunately, I didn't find it yesterday morning! ?
I haven't eaten for a day and a night, and I'm even hungrier when I see something to eat. In order not to swallow it all at once, he squeezed the dough into long strips and was about to send it to his mouth when he suddenly heard a low cry: Comrade.
The sound is so weak and low, as if it were coming from underground. He paused, then limped towards the sound.
Lu Jinyong staggered across two ditches and came to a small tree before he saw the greeting people. He lay there leaning against the root of a tree, with a pool of muddy sewage under him. He seems to have not moved for a long time. His face is even more frightening: his hair wet by rain sticks to his forehead like black felt paste, and water drips down his hair and cheeks. Eyes closed feebly, only the Adam's apple under the upper jaw quivered up and down, and the chapped lips made a deep voice. Comrade! ? Comrade!
Hearing Lu Jinyong's footsteps, the comrade labored to open his eyes, struggled habitually, and seemed to want to sit up, but did not move.
Lu Jinyong looked at this scene, his eyes were like being rubbed into something, and his heart was sour. This is the third time that he saw his comrades fall down in the two days he stayed behind. ? This must be starving! ? He thought, hurriedly grabbed the steps, put his arm around his comrade's shoulder, handed the highland barley noodles to his mouth and said, Comrade, eat quickly! ?
The comrade raised a pair of absent eyes, gave Lu Jinyong a dull look, raised his hand and pushed his arm away with difficulty, moved his lips a few times, and squeezed out a few words through his teeth: no, no? It's no use. ?
Lu Jinyong's hand stopped in midair and he didn't know what to do at the moment. He looked at Qing Wu's face frozen by the cold wind and rain, and the raindrops hanging on it, thinking bitterly: If there is a fire and a cup of hot water, maybe he can still live! ? He raised his head and looked at the foggy distance, then took his comrade's wrist and said, go, I'll help you go! ?
The comrade shook his head with his eyes closed and made no answer. It seems that he is saving all his strength. After a while, he suddenly opened his eyes, pointed his right hand at his left armpit and said in a hurry, this? Here! ?
Lu Jinyong put his hand into his wet clothes in confusion. For an instant, he felt that his comrades' chest was as cold as his clothes. Under the man's armpit, he took out a hard paper bag and handed it to the comrade.
The comrade opened the paper bag with trembling hands, which was a party card; Uncover the party card, there is a small pile of matches inside. Burned matches and red matches are clustered together, and the positive pressure is in the center of the scarlet seal, like a jumping flame.
? Comrade, look at that comrade waving to Lu Jinyong. When he comes near, he puts out a stiff finger, carefully fiddles with matches one by one, and whispers: one, two, three, four.
Someone has seven matches, but he counts them for a long time. After counting, I looked at Lu Jinyong inquiringly, as if to say, see?
? Yes, I see! ? Lu Jinyong nodded happily and thought:? It's easy now! ? He seemed to see a flaming fire, and he was snuggling up to it with this comrade?
At this moment, he found that the comrade's face seemed to spread out, and the dying color in his eyes suddenly disappeared, bursting with joy. I saw him close his party card and hold it in his hand, carefully stuffing it into Liu Jinyong's hand like holding a bowl full of water, holding it tightly in his hand and staring at his face.
? Remember, this, this is, everyone's! ? He suddenly withdrew his hand, took a deep breath and lifted it with all his strength, pointing to the north. Good, good comrade? What about you? You take it to
So much for words. Lu Jinyong felt his arms suddenly sink! His eyes are blurred. Trees in the distance, grass nearby, wet clothes, closed eyes? Everything is like a whole meadow, foggy, only the hand is clear, it is held high, like a road sign, pointing straight in the direction of the Long March troops?
Say that finish, Lu Jinyong walked very fast. When it was dark, he caught up with the guards. In the boundless darkness, clusters of bonfires are burning. Soldiers who have been rolling in the mud for several days in the wind and rain are talking and laughing around this raging wildfire. There is a mist on their wet clothes. Wild vegetables in foreign porcelain bowls? Huh? Huh? Did it ring? Lu Jinyong quietly walked behind the instructor. Reflecting the flashing light, he opened the party card with trembling fingers and handed the remaining six matches to the instructor one by one. At the same time, he counted them in a strange tone:
? One, two, three, four