Author: Lin
Genre: Modern Poetry
From: First seen in Selected Poems of the Crescent Moon (19365438+September 0)
2 original works
Her eyes, her lips,
There is a circular vortex on the lips.
As beautiful as dew,
A bright smile.
Hiding in the shining shell teeth.
It was a smile-God's smile, a beautiful smile:
The reflection of water, the light song of the wind.
.
Laughing at her loose curly hair,
Scattered in her ear.
Soft as a flower shadow,
Itchy sweetness
Into your heart.
It was a smile-a poetic smile, a picturesque smile:
Traces of clouds, soft waves of waves.
3 Appreciation of works
The smell of golden waves/sunshine is pure and beautiful.
This poem depicts a girl's elegant and pure smile. Between the dew and the shadow of flowers, the breath of sunshine comes to my face; In the soft waves, pure beauty is just around the corner.
First, daydreaming endlessly.
Peace of mind, fading impetuous, enjoying nature; Do not seek fame and fortune, but seek spiritual detachment and enjoyment. The poet's choice of images such as eyes, lips and shell teeth is the most reverie place in girls. That gentle smile is a dimple rising from the eyes and lips, and it is as neat and white as the jade teeth exposed from the shell lips. In the image between flashes, a bright and sweet smile is depicted.
As a result, laughter changed from concreteness to elegance, from formal display to depiction of god, and the image of poetry changed from a girl's body to a fresh and natural one. Laughter is "the reflection of water, the light song of wind" and "the trace of clouds, the soft wave of waves". That's God's smile, beautiful smile, poetic smile, painted smile! That smile is so sweet that it itches in people's hearts. The poet's observation and performance are really nuanced and unique. With sincere feelings and subtle feelings, she outlined a fleeting but tangible moment.
Second, flexible rhetoric.
Whether it is a simile or a metaphor, the gloomy and intelligent forest can write freely, inspire generate and flow freely. The two lines of stanzas select a series of metaphors respectively. Laughter gradually changed from dew and shadow-like vision to light song-like hearing. With visual and auditory synaesthesia, laughter not only has sound, but also has shape, thus giving people a concrete and real feeling. Metaphor is both real and vivid, ethereal and elegant, giving people an infinitely beautiful imagination. The beauty rendered by the poet is a kind of pure beauty, a kind of sacred beauty, which goes straight into the depths of people's emotions.
At the same time, personification is also a rhetorical device that Lin likes to use. In the poem Laughter, personification techniques are skillfully and naturally used: eyes, lips, curly hair, poetry, painting and so on. All can be personified and skillfully used, as if a beautiful and affectionate girl stood in front of the reader, and the pear vortex was smiling and shining.
Third, a rigorous and symmetrical structure.
Lin's poems are like a person, and his poems are like a person. It not only has rich internal meaning, but also has exquisite and symmetrical structure, which can be called the perfection of internal beauty and external beauty. The poem is divided into two sections, each from long to short and then to long, and the last sentence is slightly shorter, just like a crescent moon, which reveals chic in femininity; Another example is the girl's arch eyebrows, which have a lasting appeal in twists and turns. The two poems use exactly the same structure, forming a rigorous symmetry, uneven and neat; The first line of the first section has one more word than the first line of the second section, with a slight change in the arrangement order. The whole poem is like a charming castle peak after the rain, pleasing to the eye, delicate and fresh.
This poem is the artistic style of Lin's early works. The language is delicate, with a hint of grass and sunshine, which reminds people of spring dew and reveals beautiful fragrance.