Self-created poetry and snow

I wrote a seven-character poem about snow, as follows:

Original text:

All the flowers in the street garden are gone, and the branches and leaves on the trees are white.

Thin water freezes to meet the cold weather, and the wasteland freezes to bathe in the cold wind.

It is vast and sparse, and there are few tourists in the lonely garden.

The season turns to light snow and the time turns to winter.

Translation:

The flowers in the street park have lost their artistic conception, and the leaves on the branches have failed.

The water froze and ushered in a cold day, and the cold wind froze on the wasteland.

There are large sparse clouds in the sky, and there are few guests in the silent courtyard.

Seasonal cycle is the season of light snow, time passes quickly, and it is cold winter.

Extended data:

The method of writing poetry

1, the meaning of the poem

Exquisiteness is often related to artistic conception, and the content is too superficial and straightforward. At first glance, there is no artistic conception, and works often lack appeal and become poetic limericks. Therefore, the poet can't simply copy the original appearance of the objective world, but should look for a more typical, refined and representative image and implicitly express the feelings he wants to create.

2, the picture of poetry

Appreciating a good poem is like appreciating a beautiful painting. It presents an immersive picture for us with the power of words, which makes us feel as if we are in it and follow the author's thoughts and emotions.

Therefore, a good poem has very high requirements for visualization. The main feature of visualization is that you can't "directly say that you like prose", but you should talk about pictures and photos. The pictures that are difficult to do feel poetic, and there are paintings in poetry.