Not all trees can grow in the sand.
But Poplar did it.
Not all flowers can represent love.
But Ross did it.
Not all flowers can walk out of the mud without being defiled.
But Lotus did it.
Not all the stars can be satellites of the earth.
But the moon did it.
Not all beautiful flowers can be proud of the blooming snow.
But plum blossom did it.
Not everyone can be with you forever,
But I can do it.
I can't find the source of what you said. It may just be a composition. I found some small articles, hoping to help you.
This edition is selected from three compositions in the examination room of the recent joint examination of eight schools. The three compositions respectively show the author's efforts to "refine" the composition: rich accumulation, skillful skills and delicate angles. Reading this article carefully may bring you unexpected gains.
Composition topic: Same.
. Requirements: (1) Fill in the "same" vehicle in front and the ontology behind to form a complete composition. For example: musical architecture, dreamy senior three, sea-like mind ... (2) About 1000 words, and the style is not limited.
One.
Poetic Jiangnan
□ Guo Jinsong, Senior 3 of Yucai Middle School.
"I walked through the south of the Yangtze River and looked like a lotus in the season."
Jiangnan is not my hometown, but I came to Jiangnan.
"Peacock flying southeast" is a permanent process. First, there were waves of literati who still spoke "Luoyang accent" in the Eastern Jin Dynasty until the "Du Nan" poet in the Song Dynasty. They came for the peace and prosperity of Jiangnan, but later, more people came for the poetry of Jiangnan.
There is Li Bai, wandering between the monuments of the Six Dynasties and the hills in the south of the Yangtze River. Although I still looked at Chang 'an, I finally left my life by the quarrying river. And Su Shi, who is often out of the office for several months, can't forget Jiangnan.
Then I came too. Although I am so young, I am also a pedestrian on this road.
Road leads to the poetic Jiangnan.
In Wuzhen, I stopped in front of Lizhi Academy where Prince Zhaoming was studying. Chai Fei locked it quietly, but he could see the vegetation in the yard. This is probably the artistic conception of "the garden is worthless". In fact, it is not "unworthy". It is enough to come to Wuzhen to have a look at the water. "The river is clear and blue," and the ripples are like poems.
In Suzhou, I always have a pen and paper in my hand. I want to remember-there are poems everywhere. On the Canglang Pavilion, "the breeze and bright moon are priceless, and there is love near the mountains and far away"; By the moat, "* * * The advantage of the water gets the moon first, I'm not a fish?" The most interesting thing is that in the Humble Administrator's Garden, I listened to an old man who had never met before talking about couplets and identifying the sentences of seal script.
Actually, there's no need to rush. Not far from the residence, there is a "strange willow color", which makes the boudoir woman's skirt "repent to teach her husband to find a seal"; Liu Xiahui is a pond, "Xiao He only shows sharp corners"; Under the lotus, "fish play between the lotus leaves."
I sat by the pond reading a book. Reading Bai Juyi's "Good Jiangnan" and Wang Wei's "When those red berries come in spring" makes me crazy and intoxicated. ...
When I looked up, it was winter.
Willow is no longer so green, and lotus is crippled. "The small building listens to the spring rain all night, and the deep alley sells apricot flowers." I can't help sighing like Lu You: Jiangnan is so fragile!
The powder of Jinling, the songs and dances of West Lake, and the "back garden flowers" across the river ... suddenly think that the role of Jiangnan is not always so perfect. Because it is too delicate and delicate, just like sister Lin, who was raised by her, only teaches people to love, but she really can't stand the test of life.
How many towers are paid in the misty rain!
No wonder Jianhu woman wants to be "at home in the four seas", no wonder Zhou Enlai's "Song of the Great River" turned eastward, and no wonder she woke up my Lu You, expecting to "go home when it's still sunny".
Jiangnan always makes people drift, but life can't always drift; In the northwest border, "Hengyang geese go without observing", but after the cold winter, geese still refuse to stay in Hengyang.
I want to keep the poetic Jiangnan in my memory forever, but my ideal is far away.
"My horseshoe is a beautiful mistake. I am not a passer-by, just a passer-by. "
Two.
An old house like a snail's shell
□ Gao Haiyun of Yucai Middle School
Like thousands of Shanghainese in Qian Qian, I once lived in Shikumen, a landmark building in Shanghai.
The old house is located on the second floor of a blue-gray house. It's blue-gray outside, but it's a warm pavilion inside. Warm yellow furniture is squeezed into such a small space.
The old house is small, 10 square meters L-shaped room. In fact, four windows were opened, facing east and west respectively. In this way, with the help of the scenery outside the window, the old house feels great, but in fact, even a writing desk can't be inserted. I remember doing my homework when I was a child and sitting in front of my mother's sewing machine. The exercise book is always printed with two grooves on the sewing machine. The moonlight outside the window filled the lights in the window and poured on the sewing machine. I stepped on its pedal and wrote the words "Batten, Batten", with a special mood.
The walls of the old house are blue. Dad said it was like the sky and the blue sky was boundless, which seemed to make the house bigger. But as long as I can remember, that wall is no longer as pure and blue as the sky: my first word is written on it, and it is upside down; There is a hole I dug on it, which is the result of accidentally finding a chisel one day; There are also the stickers of "Transformers" and "Saints" I bought when I was a child, as well as my graffiti works all over the wall-trees, flowers, cows, sheep, planes, tanks, cruisers ... I believe Picasso will be moved to tears after reading these paintings.
As soon as I entered the door, the room was full of furniture and small things on the wall. It's crowded, really crowded! In summer, no matter how luxurious the window air conditioner was, the feeling of crowding was still sweating, but what's wrong with it? This crowded feeling is warm and comfortable every winter, and the air conditioning and heating system has been broken for several years and is too lazy to repair it.
Everyone has a gradually formed sense of space. I grew up in this small snail shell and naturally adapted to this cramped space. The mountain is not high, and the fairy is famous. The water is not deep, and the dragon is the spirit. A small house is just a home. I grew up with this snail shell, and the old man's mark was engraved on it. Shrinking in a snail's shell, whether it is cold outside or not, it is still sunny here, and the seasons are like spring.
But the years are ruthless, and so is the house. There are cracks in the ground of the old house in the 1970s and 1980s, and we all know that its time is coming. Looking at the demolition workers brandishing that ferocious sledgehammer, knocking on the wall of my house, just like knocking on my heart, I feel like a snail without a shell, naked in broad daylight, shivering and dizzy. My childhood was shattered and ended with a bang. Moving to a new home is no longer the feeling of sheltering from the wind and rain, although the new home is stronger, more beautiful and more fashionable than the old one. But the sun will always rise from the eastern horizon to drive away last night, and the spring scenery of the Yangtze River will certainly wash away those past years. The river of time flows east and always flows east.
The old house is gone, the snail shell is gone, and the parents who can rely on it are old. It's time to welcome the day when wind and rain play their role.
After reading three compositions in class, I might as well do this exercise: draw up a topic: draw up several topics and give it a try. Ontology should be "small" and "real" (what you love, like, pursue and yearn for ...: impressive scenic spots, unforgettable novels, vivid literary images, life experiences, favorite items, etc. ), and the vehicle should not only be an image, but also pay attention to the similarity with the ontology.
Matching materials: choose one of the following topics to match the materials you have accumulated.
Kaleidoscope youth (middle school life); Fairy tale moonlight (autumn fog, snowflakes); Xi 'an like a book (place names can be replaced).
Three.
Life is like summer flowers.
□ Zhu Wenjie, Senior 3 of Yucai Middle School.
Let life be beautiful like summer flowers and death like autumn leaves.
-Tagore In the flood, there is often a deep voice asking: Why do people exist, why do they exist? What is the value of living?
The tide rises and falls, and the sun and the moon cycle. It took thousands of years for people to get a vague answer: people live to leave a mark. Even the short fragrance of summer flowers is enough.
So Qu Yuan came.
He lingered on the Miluo River with the sublimity and melancholy of "I am alone in the cloudy world, and everyone is drunk and I am alone". He wants to find a mark to prove the value of existence. The turbulent river seemed to whisper, so Qu Zi jumped into its arms to listen to the river's answer. The romance of life turned into the brilliance of Jiang Bo. Qu Zi's summer flowers did not wither, but flowed with the water to eternity.
So Sima Qian came and stepped on Qu Yuan's mark.
He knows that history has given him a responsibility, and he also knows what he should leave for the world. But he only hates the fragility and shortness of life, and that summer flower only blooms for him for one season. So Tai Shigong still picked up a pen after being hit hard, and wrote the poem "A historian sings a swan song, leaving Sao without rhyme"-only after the storm can Xia Hua be stronger and more shocking.
So Zhu Gekongming came, bearing the burden of ups and downs.
This "humble man in Wollongong" wrote "an example of a teacher" with the loyalty and blood of an old minister. Flower of life watered by sweat and blood is so gorgeous. "The name of the teacher is real, and who is better than the Millennium". It's just that the summer flowers withered before the first autumn rain. "Before he could conquer, he died, and the hero wept on his skirt." But his fragrance remained for a long time.
So Li Bai came, cocky.
There is no doubt that the greatest poets in the prosperous Tang Dynasty also came to look for marks. He sang all the way, with "since God has given talents, let them find jobs!" , spin a thousand silver, all come back! " . He is a wonderful flower in Central Asia, with rich fragrance, and the extraordinary talents poured out by his works have fascinated future generations for a long time.
So Cao Xueqin came with the Green Lantern and a glass of Leng Cha.
He smiled bitterly in the biting cold wind and thought in hunger and cold. A Dream of Red Mansions mourned for gold and jade, which pushed him to the peak of novels in Ming and Qing Dynasties. But he still just smiled bitterly, because summer flowers should not bloom in winter, and petals blown off by the north wind should not be buried in the snow. He shook his head helplessly.
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Everyone's life is a summer flower, but not every flower can bloom the most gorgeous beauty. Come and go, some bloom, some wither, some are destined to have only the first sight, but some can stay in the world forever. Those eternal names, accompanied by the fragrance of summer flowers that never dissipates, are gently answering the question that has no ultimate answer. They want to find a sign and spend their whole lives watering a flower of life.
Summer flowers, who are struggling to find the value of life, were answered when the autumn wind started.
Is your accumulation "5 12 trillion"?
Li Qiang, a special Chinese teacher in Yucai Middle School.
The poetic Jiangnan is an article that needs to be recited quietly. Cultivate a little "poetic" emotion, turn on a light that is not very bright, and match it with some very Jiangnan folk music ... Then start reading gently and slowly until the beginning, inheritance, transformation and integration of the article are clearly displayed in front of you, until you are in a trance, you also come to this poetic Jiangnan, and it seems that you are also telling this beautiful water town. ...
This is the beauty brought by poetic words, and this is the charm brought by talented words.
From chanting, you will gradually realize the author's rich and rich accumulation, and his material storage has almost reached "5 12 trillion". In order to come up with excellent works, there must be a little accumulation, and the importance of accumulation has been vividly reflected in this article.
When you accumulate certain materials, your thoughts and literary talents will flow like a stream, and "brilliant" is probably such a performance.
Life is like summer flowers. This is an exam composition that skillfully uses various composition skills. You see: eye-catching inscription, thought-provoking beginning-phoenix head; Rich and typical material-pork belly; They all point to the theme and echo the first sentence-leopard tail. Coupled with flexible paragraphs, fluent language, and even the use of punctuation marks have reached the "highest level" of skills.
Accurately learning, mastering and using various methods and skills of composition is also the focus of composition training and review. Form serves content. The plate determines the price of the dish. Can you believe it?
The title of an old house like a snail's shell is sometimes the "grade label" of a composition, and sometimes it is a sign of "exemption from inspection". This is my first feeling when I read this topic, because I have read hundreds of books before, such as Life is like a torch, Faith is like the Great Wall, Dreams are like a rainbow, Open-minded as sunshine, Firm as a Rock, and so on. How much courage and talent do we need to explain and demonstrate after we accidentally "mistakenly" empty ","empty "and" empty "
This classmate's choice is particular. He found another way and chose a material closely related to his life-the old house. It is a part of the author's life, so there are things to write and feelings to express: the color of the old house, the decoration of the old house, the "mark" of my exercise book in the old house, my childhood graffiti works, and my innocence and childlike interest.
In this way, choosing a beautiful angle and a piece of plain material is one of the "magic weapons" to win the composition (especially the composition in the examination room).
Good luck!