Author/Zhong Ning
Once upon a time, the topic of college entrance examination composition was approved as "there is no word in the poem that worries about the people (Ming Yuan Hong Dao)". Seeing the 20 12 essay topic of Jiangsu college entrance examination, I can't help secretly admiring the intellectual feelings of the proposer who cares about the country and the people.
20 12 Jiangsu college entrance examination composition is:
Read the following materials and write as required.
The mother used the needle and thread in her hand to make clothes for her long-distance son. Before leaving, I had a stitch for fear that my son would come back late and his clothes would be damaged. (Meng Jiao)
Why do I often cry? Because I love this land deeply. (Ai Qing)
In these sacred hearts, there is a clear power and strong love, which flies like a torrent. You don't even need to listen to their voices. From their eyes and behaviors, you can see that life has never been so great, so full and so happy as when you are in trouble. (romain rolland)
Write an article of not less than 800 words on the topic of "Trouble and Love".
Requirements: ① Independent decision; 2 angle selection; (3) Besides poetry, the style is optional.
20 12 Jiangsu college entrance examination composition remained relatively stable, and it continued the examination form of Jiangsu college entrance examination in recent years, which was composed of three parts: tips (materials), composition topics and writing requirements. From the perspective of examination, worry and love are a relational proposition, and worry and love are a parallel structure. Since it is a parallel structure, we should analyze the dialectical relationship between them. From the specific writing point of view, you can focus on one point and give consideration to others; You can also combine worry with love. Worry is a kind of love, a kind of implicit and profound love.
Chinese curriculum standards point out that reading is a process of dialogue. The composition of the college entrance examination is also a dialogue process, which is a dialogue process among proposers, candidates and reviewers. What kind of life realm should Trouble and Love discuss with candidates? The biggest advantage of the topic "Worry and Love" is to arouse students' worries and guide them to pay attention to themselves, life and society.
There are small worries and big worries, and love has small love and great love. There is no difference between big and small worries, and there is no difference between high and low, which should be true feelings and expressions. The three materials in the topic, ancient and modern, Chinese and foreign, are to inspire and guide candidates to do such thinking. Small troubles mainly focus on family and friendship; Great worries are mainly concentrated on grand themes such as society, nationality and country.
From the perspective of family material, who is worried about you? Parents, teachers and classmates all have a deep love behind their worries. Such a story of "worry and love" is around us, but it is often forgotten by us. Motherly love has been countless since ancient times. The thread in the hand of a kind mother makes clothes for her wayward children. Before leaving, I had a stitch for fear that my son would come back late and his clothes would be damaged. But how much love has an inch of grass, and it is rewarded with three spring rays. " Meng Jiao's Ode to a Wanderer is one of the most popular, famous and quoted ancient poems praising his mother. The thread in his hand and the tightly sewn clothes are all because of the word "fear". After careful reading, the mother's inner "fear" is full of affection: she is reluctant to leave her son for fear of delaying her son's bright future; I hope my son will make great achievements in his long journey, but I am afraid that "it is good to stay at home for a thousand days, but it is difficult to go out." This is a mother's deep love.
There is an article "Father's Trouble". The father repeatedly called his son, who is a public servant of the people, not for other reasons, but because of a news in the newspaper that so-and-so was investigated for taking bribes. Father's anxiety is a kind of affectionate care, a silent care and a sober medicine. The father's worries made his son dare not have delusions in the face of many temptations.
"Who will come to my class?" This is a teacher's worry. 20 10 65438+ 10/4, Xu Shulai, a 42-year-old math teacher from Xinghua Middle School in Jiangsu Province, died of acute pancreatitis not long ago. On the morning of the onset, Xu Shulai endured severe abdominal pain and gave the students two classes, and then went to the office to correct the examination papers. His last words before he died were: "Who will take my class?" Besides, he still has a stack of students' math papers in his pocket. Teachers' worries are full of love for students and loyalty to education. On may 8th, 20 12, Zhang Lili, the most beautiful female teacher in Jiamusi, pushed her students aside, but she was run over by a car, resulting in amputation of her legs. After waking up, she said in a letter to the students: "Today is the tenth day of my waking up, only one month away from your senior high school entrance examination!" I wake up every day and think of you for the first time! "It is this anxiety and deep love for students that makes Mr. Zhang Lili make such a choice when facing the bus bound for students. On the eve of the 20 12 college entrance examination, Zhou Yulan, a female teacher in Yidu No.2 Middle School in Hubei, desperately protected 659 college entrance examination admission tickets. " I lost my college entrance examination card. What should candidates do? "This is Miss Zhou's worry, and it is this worry that makes Miss Zhou so brave and tenacious in the face of gangsters. These most beautiful teachers, with students in their hearts, care about love and win the eternal love of students.
Worrying about the country and the people has always been the tradition of China intellectuals. "What I know makes me worry, and what I don't know makes me want." This is often said "the sadness of leaving Xiaomi". When the poet passed by the old capital, he saw that the former flower palace was razed to the ground, and crops were planted, and the rice seedlings were flourishing. "Tian Daochang, who is this?" Broken mountains and rivers are the poet's troubles. The lofty ideal of China intellectuals expressed by Fan Zhongyan is "to worry about the world first, and to enjoy the world later". After the failure of Qingli New Deal, Fan Zhongyan was demoted to Dengzhou. Teng Zongliang, an old friend, rebuilt Yueyang Tower and wrote to ask him to write a commemorative article. Through the myriad weather of Dongting Lake, Fan Zhongyan uttered a resounding sigh: "Worry about the world first, and enjoy the world later." Fan Zhongyan does things for the people in a down-to-earth manner, and has no intention of writing. Fan Zhongyan rebuilt the weir when he was appointed as the salt official of Xixi, Taizhou. The locals named it Fan Gongdi to commemorate its achievements. Fan Zhongyan cared about the country and the people all his life, regardless of personal gains and losses. He was strict, frugal and clean, and died without a new dress.
As a high school graduate, we should take the rise and fall of the world as our responsibility and social progress as our responsibility. There is a student's exercise "River in Memory". The author tells about the river in front of his hometown, which was originally crystal clear and played with his friends when he was a child. Now the roads in my hometown are wider, there are fewer people and the water is dirty. Because of industrial pollution and going out to work, his hometown became a scar in his memory. He can only recite "Jiangnan" repeatedly in his memory: Lotus can be picked in the south of the Yangtze River, and he plays lotus leaves in Tian Tian, playing lotus leaves and playing lotus leaves ... In the river of memory, his hometown will always be kind and lovely. The sweet and lovely river in my hometown can only exist in my memory forever. Such worries flow slowly like a stream, infiltrating and accumulating into worries about a society and an era.
The college entrance examination is to select high-quality students for the society and the country. Modern society requires candidates to actively interact with the society, face the real society and real life, and trigger valuable thinking. In the face of complicated social life, candidates who are blindly immersed in themselves are not "excellent" in the modern sense. Some students pay attention to beautiful writing blindly, pile up some colorful words, pretend to be sad and recite ancient poems repeatedly. Such a composition has only formal beauty, but no depth of thought and emotion. Young students should shoulder the mission of thinking about the destiny of the country. If we pretend to moan sadly and think about our future, love, employment and so on all day, how can our country have hope?
In short, the biggest highlight of the topic "Trouble and Love" is that it can arouse our deep thinking, including thinking about life and world outlook, thinking about self-existence, self, short-term troubles and long-term troubles. If this college entrance examination composition question can make college entrance examination graduates-future pillars of society-think about life and society in "worry and love" and inspire a sense of responsibility and mission; It would be great if this college entrance examination composition question could make Chinese educators think about composition teaching and the educational value of Chinese in Trouble and Love!
Author: Taizhou Normal University, Jiangsu Province (225300)