M is hot milk tea every morning; O is the mother's kiss on the child's cheek; T is a scented washboard; H is indoctrination; E is those gentle eyes; On the other hand, R is an exquisite children's book. String these lovely letters together, and a very warm word-mom appears.
To tell the truth, whenever I see the word "mom", my heart is always full of feelings that I can't express. I love my mother, not because she has a pair of hands that can cook a good meal and knit a beautiful scarf, but because she has a golden love that moves me.
It was the first day of junior high school. /kloc-when I was 0/2 years old, I rushed into the house with new books and counted them like a baby. One or two ... Why is there a Chinese book missing? Suddenly, I was as anxious as a cat on hot bricks-running around and taking out my schoolbag anxiously, but there was no sign of my Chinese book. Shit! I must have accidentally lost it on my way home just now. What should I do? I have to go to the bookstore to buy one. However, will my mother go out to buy books for me? I had to explain my intention to my mother with trepidation. "Oh, never mind. I'll go to the bookstore after dinner. " My mother said airily that she didn't blame me. I looked up in panic and found my mother looking at me affectionately. Her eyes, full of pity for me, like a clean stream, calmed my anxiety. I looked at her gratefully, and the stone hanging in my heart finally fell to the ground.
After dinner, my mother put on her coat in a hurry and pushed her bike away. At night, it's quiet, and the ringing bell is especially ringing in the alley. I waited anxiously in the house. An hour passed ... two hours passed ... suddenly, the bell rang outside. Sitting in the room, I jumped up and rushed over. When I opened the door, my mother's smile was still gentle in the cold wind, with a Chinese book in her hand. Outside, although autumn is getting stronger, maternal love is more precious and touching. I was so moved that I silently thanked myself for having such a good mother.
The story of my mother and I continued to be staged, and I grew up happily and healthily under the nourishment of maternal love. There are thousands of kinds of love in the world, and only maternal love is the greatest. Even if it is brought to the whole world, it cannot surpass the greatness, selflessness, preciousness and purity of maternal love. I really want to shout: "Mom, I love you!" " "
Family ties will never be forgotten.
Affection, a word I will never forget, has been deeply imprinted in my mind. ...
Affection, like a road sign in confusion, guides you the way forward; Family, like a lamp, illuminates the life you should go; Affection, like a cup of tea, can warm your heart. ...
The final exam is coming. I was reviewing that night when my mother knocked at the door and said, "son, don't work too hard, you will be exhausted." I specially stewed a bowl of chicken soup to replenish your brain. " Mom said with concern with a smile.
But I was ungrateful and said impatiently to her, "I don't even have time to review." Do I still have time to drink? " I don't want to drink, take it out! "I said to her lukewarm.
"Is it not good to raise your spirits and take the exam again?" Mother is still very gentle tone, "sleep after drinking soup!" " Cheer up. "There is a trace of anxiety in the mother's tone.
The nicer people are to me, the more annoying I seem to be. "Go out, you are disturbing my reading." I yelled at my mother. The atmosphere suddenly became very lifeless and awkward.
"You ... you child, do it at your own will! I don't care about you! " She dropped this harsh remark and ran out of my room at once. Mom is like a turtle without a shell. I stabbed her all over. I know my mother cares about me, and I know I hurt my mother. In fact, I really don't want to say those harsh words, but I don't know why, as soon as I opened my mouth, these words came out like a barrage. Listening to my mother's voice, I hate and regret; Why should I quarrel with my mother? She's obviously doing me good, but I ... ...
I'm going to apologize to my mother. I went to my mother's room, but I heard my father comforting my mother and saying, "Don't be sad. What she did was not study hard. You should be proud of her! " Right? You didn't expect her to be like this before! ""no, you didn't see her unruly appearance, which really pissed me off! I really regret raising his daughter! " "Look at you, you're still angry ..."
I think I should go in. Knock, knock, knock. I'm in. "Mom, I ..." My mother turned away from me, so I sat next to her. "Mom, I'm sorry, I'm not angry because of what you said. I was wrong this time. Will you forgive me? My mother still ignores me. At this time, my father pleaded for me: "Look, the children have come to apologize to you, and you are not satisfied! "Mom is a very strong person, it's hard to say how quickly she agreed. Take dad as an excuse, "for your dad's sake, I forgive you." "
"Ok, thank you, Mom." I am happy to say to my mother
"As long as you don't annoy me in the future,1"
"No problem, don't worry!"
Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha, the whole family laughed together.
Invisible chains
Some people say that we and our relatives are clouds in the sky and don't know each other. It was cold, and the clouds turned into snowflakes, fell to the ground, solidified into ice, turned into water, and never separated again. Although it sounds ridiculous, I believe that there is such an invisible chain that connects us closely with the people we love, as inseparable as water.
The first time I felt the existence of this chain strongly and deeply was on the first day of entering kindergarten. I pouted and was coaxed by my mother to take me to kindergarten, a beautiful place with many toys, but it was like a nightmare for me. After she found the class teacher and said a few words, she handed me over to a middle-aged woman who held her little hand tightly. Then she said "Be good" to me and left, regardless of my feelings. She left, as if taking away the beauty and light of my world. I feel like I'm stuck in a quagmire, sinking a little, and the vitality of my life is drifting away. My only thought is: escape! Get out of here. Even if you die, I will rush forward as hard as I can, just like holding my mother's hand, but the middle-aged woman grabbed me from behind. I grabbed the railing, put my whole body weight on it and tried to get down the stairs. But I did not succeed. After all, I'm just a child. No matter how I broke free, she pulled me back as easily as a chicken. I shouted at the top of my voice over and over again, "Mom! I want to go home! " Shout until you can't make any more noise, and cry until you feel dizzy. My mother left and watched her back disappear at the gate. The first time I felt something broken, I heard a crisp "click" sound. It is a chain that keeps all my beautiful feelings broken, and my world falls into endless darkness. Naively, I thought this was a farewell to my mother forever. It's ridiculous to think about it now, but I firmly believe it exists.
When I was in junior high school, I felt her strength again. The first time I left my parents, the first time I packed my bags and crowded the bus, and the first time I cleaned my house independently. That night, I stayed up all night. Looking at the bare wall, the hum of the air conditioner echoes in the ear, all this is so strange! I stubbornly believe that they are blocking me and my family, and they are tearing the chain between us. Otherwise, why is my heart so painful? Why does the feeling of missing haunt me like a poisonous snake and suffocate me?
One day in May, our school organized a visit to Tsinghua campus. My cousin, who lives in the suburbs of Beijing, insists on bringing my grandmother, aunt and my two-year-old nephew to see me. I said no again and again, because they have never been to Tsinghua, and I am even more confused and confused about my position. They drove around the campus in Tsinghua, and it took them a whole hour to find it. Standing on the side of the road, watching them get off the bus, I felt warm as spring and relieved, as if a thread was pulled hard and an overwhelming warm current poured down like a flood. I believe that it is the chains of family ties that bring us together from distant places under the bright starry sky of Tsinghua campus. Cousin and elder sister-in-law kept stuffing snacks and fruits into my hands, and kept asking me if I was cold and asked me to take off my clothes and let me wear them. I feel the warmth of my relatives around me. The strange Beijing is full of human feelings, as if I were at home, and the cold wind blows like the spring breeze in March.
Jane Eyre can hear Rochester's call far away, and what connects them is the chain of love; Pisgan died for his friend, and his friend came back in time. It is the chain of friendship that binds them together. The chain of affection is invisible, but I believe she is real, blending into your blood and pouring into your heart, no matter how far apart we are. When we get close, we may not feel her presence. When we get along in a different place, we can feel the pain of heartbreaking. We are happy with this pain. This pain is an invisible chain.
How to write a good composition? Please pay attention to the following points in your composition:
(1) The description is clear and clear. The composition should first be understood by others. Read an article that I can't understand for a long time. How can you infect readers? Understanding and narration are very important for readers, so be clear. For example, in The Back, Mr. Zhu Ziqing described that when my father saw me get on the bus, he said, "We crossed the river and entered the station. I bought a ticket and he was busy looking after the luggage. There was so much luggage that he had to tip the porter before he arrived. He is busy bargaining with them again. " In a few short sentences, what was done, how to divide the work, what happened and how to solve it were described clearly and clearly. And some of our classmates are either vague or lacking in East and West. How do readers understand them?
(2) Explanatory elements. Only by clarifying the elements can readers have a complete impression of what they are talking about, and only by clarifying the elements can they show the development and change process of things. The texts we have learned are clear and ingenious, which is a good example for us to learn. For example, "Back" directly points out the time element of "that winter"; "Walking" wrote that "in the fields of early spring in the south, large tracts of new green are casually paved, some are thick and some are light; The buds on the trees are also dense; The winter water in the field is also bubbling. " It is worth learning to use the description of environment and scenery skillfully and explain the elements of time.
(3) Describe the content of the narrative. Narrative only tells readers "what I wrote", and only by describing the content of the narrative in detail. Only in this way can we form a specific color image in front of readers and leave a clear impression on readers. For example, Mr. Lu Xun used "sky, full moon, sand, watermelon and melon-watching teenagers" to describe the night scene of the rural seaside in the article "Teenagers Moistening the Soil", which not only failed to impress readers, but also failed to form a clear picture with bright colors. Then, the author describes the content of Hanging in the Deep Blue Sky in detail. Meanwhile, a boy of eleven or twelve years old, wearing a silver ring and holding a steel fork, stabbed a horse with all his strength, but the man wriggled away from his crotch. Through this description, we not only know what is in the seaside countryside, but also have their colors and images: the sky is deep blue, the full moon is golden, the watermelon is endless green, the teenager is brave and fierce. In this way, the beautiful scenery of the seaside countryside at night and the image of the brave, alert and lovely little boy will be clearly presented to readers. Description is divided into scenery description, environment description, scene description, character description, language description, action description, expression description, psychological description, profile description and so on. We can use it flexibly in our composition according to our needs, and reproduce the scene at that time through description, thus presenting a clear picture in front of readers.
(4) Ask yourself a few more "what's going on". Many of our students often use words such as "beautiful", "beautiful" and "sad" in their compositions, which gives people a very vague impression. In order to make the impression clear, students can keep asking themselves "What's the matter?" Play "What's the matter?" Once written, the content will be specific. For example, a classmate wrote a flower bed like this: "There are cockscomb, canna, a bunch of red and morning glory in the flower bed, which are colorful and beautiful." The teacher asked him to write it out in detail. Every flower is "how beautiful?" This classmate thought about it and revised it, and it became "there are cockscomb flowers in the flower bed, which are tall, straight and deep red, overlapping, just like cockscomb flowers, canna, big green leaves and flaming flowers on the cock's head, just like a pair of green palms holding a burning torch high;" A string of red flowers consists of dozens of bright red flowers, just like a thin bamboo stick with countless bright red candles on it; Morning glory is covered with half, just like green satin dotted with purple gems. The whole flower bed is colorful and beautiful. " The students made a comparison and replied, "Is it more specific than the last one? "
(5) Appropriate use of association also helps to make things concrete.
In narration and description, proper use of association also helps to make things concrete. For example, Mr. Zhu Ziqing wrote in the article "Spring" that spring rain is like "hair like cattle, needle like silk." Dense diagonal weave, there is a thin layer of smoke on the roof. "The author used Lenovo appropriately and wrote down the beautiful, bright and light features of the spring rain. In the books we have studied, there are many concrete examples, which are written appropriately with association. Students might as well learn and use it while reading. In this way, on the one hand, you can improve your reading and appreciation ability. On the one hand, it also helps us to write a specific composition.
(6) Write down the details and make the content concrete.
In an article, there are often the most emotional moments and small chapters that can best express the center. This part is written in detail, which not only helps to express the center well and express feelings, but also helps to write the content concretely. In the texts we have studied, examples of writing details abound. We should carefully understand its function and writing method, and try to apply it to our exercises to help us write the content concretely. For example, the lesson "From the Botanical Garden to the Three Ponds Reflecting the Moon" reads: "Sweep a piece of snow out of the ground, use a short stick to support a big bamboo curtain, sprinkle some chaff under it, and tie a long rope on the stump. People will hold it from a distance and watch the birds come down to peck. When they get under the bamboo curtain, pull the rope to cover it. " In this detail, the author shows the process of catching birds by describing verbs such as "sweep", "dew", "support", "scatter", "tie", "lead", "look" and "cover", which makes readers seem to see and learn this process and leave a deep impression. This is the charm of detail description.
How to write a good composition in the examination room;
In recent years, the composition of senior high school entrance examination is a proposition form with topic composition as the mainstream. Topic composition only gives candidates a piece of material, some tips, a topic and some precautions, so that candidates can choose an appropriate expression and method at will, and choose a familiar and interesting content to express some thoughts, understandings and emotions related to the topic. It can really be said that "the sea is wide and the fish jumps, and the sky is high and the birds fly." Composition in the examination room is a comprehensive test of students' composition level, and the requirements are relatively strict. As a student who will take the exam, he should adopt appropriate coping strategies. How does he write a good composition in the examination room? I think we should at least make efforts in the following four aspects:
First, examine the questions carefully.
One person guards it, and ten thousand people can't force it. In the composition exam, the first level is the examination of composition. Although the topic composition reduces the difficulty of examining the topic, it does not mean that the topic should not be examined, and it does not mean that you can be unconstrained when writing. Topics are often led by materials, which means that there is a close relationship between materials and topics. A composition topic in the examination room embodies the painstaking efforts of many proposition experts, and every sentence and word in the material has many profound connotations. We should find out the reins that control the galloping of horses in the materials-the key words that embody the theme. Only in this way can we get the intention of the proposition right and examine the material at a certain height, so as not to lose sight of one thing while writing. If you turn a blind eye or glance at it just because time is tight, it will be difficult to grasp the center of the article and find a suitable starting point.
In addition, we should seriously study the composition requirements. Now the composition requirements are very broad, and you can choose your style freely. But it is not without requirements! If you choose a narrative genre, you should honestly write according to the rules of narrative. If you choose an argumentative essay, you must have arguments, arguments and arguments, and write honestly. Don't confuse explanation with narration, lyricism with discussion. Writing poetry should have image and artistic conception, and writing drama should have sharp contradictions and conflicts. "I'm not afraid of tigers, I'm afraid I'm not careful." We should carefully study the requirements of composition, read carefully, give full play to our strengths in writing articles, and pay attention to fostering strengths and avoiding weaknesses.
Second, take the familiar road.
Many people who write in words, or speak in words, are not filled with loose sand, but with pieces of "prefabricated components" with unified views and materials. Before the exam, we should also do some "prefabricated components", that is, practice in sections around a center, remember properly and master it skillfully. On the basis of the existing "prefabricated components", we can change the angle and form a new article to meet the requirements of the examination proposition. How these "prefabricated components" become an organic whole also needs to be familiar, that is, to establish a familiar structural framework. Try to choose a new angle, new form and new genre you know and build a unique and personalized framework. Then look at the framework, you can understand whether the full text is closely related to the topic. Does the material used meet the requirements of the topic? Is the full text specific and substantial? Are your views correct and your feelings healthy? Is the paragraph level clear? How to deal with the beginning and the end? In this way, there will be "the overall situation in the chest and the number of ways in the pen", which provides a reliable basis for the article. If we follow the "outline" and "road", there will be no "short circuit" in the writing process, which will not only save writing time, but also improve the quality of composition.
Third, highlight
The performance of the highlights is varied. It can be a clever idea, a vivid detail description, a good sentence with rich connotations, a word with great personality, a refined word, or even a unique punctuation mark ... In short, it must be "glorious": there must be a "moon" without the "sun"; Without the "moon", there must be "stars"; Without "stars", there must be "fireflies". If there are no fireflies, then the composition can only wander at the "grassroots level" and set one or two bright spots in the article to make the marking teacher shine at the moment, which can cover up all ugliness and can be considered from the following aspects:
1. Eye-catching title.
The eye-catching title is a highlight of the whole article. Only in this way can the reviewers pay attention to it and have a good impression on the articles they have never met. Take the lead in setting an example, which is an extremely effective means to improve the grade of composition. The topic should be "big topic and small work", and the entrance should be narrow, so as to turn the broad scope of the original topic into a specific small scope and turn the big topic into a small one. Or draw up a topic by famous sayings; Or skillfully use rhetorical devices to draw up questions. The title of the argumentative paper should be clearly seen; The narrative should be vivid. The title is bright and the words are shining.
2. A good start.
The beginning is the first ray of "sunshine" shown to the examiner, which needs to be carefully created by the candidates. It not only laid the foundation for writing, but also brought a good mood to the reviewers.
3. A meaningful ending.
The end of the article is as important as the title and the beginning of the article. However, some students hastily ended their casual work. This will greatly affect the overall quality of the whole article. The end of the article should either follow the beginning and echo from beginning to end, or reiterate the point of view and ask questions again, or leave readers room for imagination. The ending is the last "scenery" left to the commentator, and it must be a surprise for the commentator. "If she just turns her head and smiles, there will be hundreds of spells cast."
4. The sentence is full of literary talent.
If a good theme is the beating heart of a work, then beautiful language should be a beautiful face. Du Fu's "obsession with human nature, endless words" is even more obvious that this great poet is rigorous in his creation. It is difficult to make a composition in an examination room full of literary talent. A passage or even a wonderful comment can not only sublimate the main idea of the article, but also give people a kind of spiritual feeling and enlightenment. Individual sentences are expressed in a variety of flexible sentence patterns, individual paragraphs make good use of rhetorical devices such as parallelism and metaphor, and individual places are quoted properly, and words must be done and words must be expressed, which will win the favor of marking teachers.
5. moving details.
If the plot is the history of the development of the characters, then the details are the flesh and blood of the characters. Only by grasping "every word and deed, a grain of sand and a stone is fine" (Zhu Ziqing's words) can we enrich our image.
6. Beautifying words.
The face is neat and clean, the handwriting is correct and beautiful, the font is clear and standardized, the punctuation is accurate, the paragraphs conform to the format, and the number of words conforms to the regulations. Facial beautification is a trump card to get high marks in the examination room composition.
Fourth, make careful revisions.
Chekhov said: "The skill of writing is the skill of deleting bad words." Articles are written, and good articles are changed. Writing in the examination room should be "self-diagnosis". If the previous scaffolding was "focusing on prevention" before writing, then the revision after writing is "starting from governance".
The composition in the examination room should be actively prevented, because it is not good to "start a new stove" after writing, otherwise time is not allowed. Because of the limited revision time, it is best to revise it twice: the first time, you can use the method of "skimming the main idea" and refer to the original "framework" to review it from the aspects of theme, ideas and materials. If you find a "fault" in a certain aspect, don't make a big increase, make a big change or make a big change, but make some minor repairs and make every effort to make it "logical"; The second time is devoted to the problem of written expression. For local minor faults, we should carefully investigate, such as typos, sick sentences, improper punctuation and so on. , and modify them one by one to make the full text harmonious and beautiful.
Writing well in the examination room doesn't happen overnight. Usually you need to read more, write more and practice more, but you should also pay attention to certain skills, so that you can get twice the result with half the effort.
If you have any questions about the above answers, please supplement the discussion.