In the blink of an eye, another year of Qingming Festival is approaching, and an important custom of Qingming Festival is to visit the tombs of ancestors. The following are the comments on the essay on the Civilized Sacrifice to the Green Qingming Festival that I have collected and organized. Welcome to read and refer to ~ Comments on the essay on the Civilized Sacrifice to the Green Qingming Festival 1
1. This article chooses a brand new angle, so that your thoughts can be here Running freely is your greatest success. What the teacher wants to remind you is that through the chaos of worldly affairs, there are always some principles that we can grasp when dealing with the world, so that your thoughts will be deeper, and you will always receive the effect of "seeing the world through dripping water".
2. Such beautiful handwriting and clear and neat structure can’t help but give people a refreshing feeling. Teachers should really learn from you. Let us promote each other in future Chinese learning, okay?
3. Articles are like people. Your articles are as simple and open-minded as you are. Your composition skills are very good, which is also the result of your long-term practice. I hope that in the future learning process, you will feel and appreciate life with your heart and write more touching and good articles.
4. Writing can speak louder than words. I think articles are a reflection of your soul. The road of life is indeed tortuous and long, but as long as you work hard and persevere to move forward, the crown of success will belong to you.
5. Wen Neng and Qing. You should not regard writing an essay as a burden to yourself, but should record your mental journey with a positive attitude and delicate writing style.
6. It can be said that your article is full of true feelings. As a human being, failure is inevitable, but having the courage to face failure is even more valuable. I believe that gold will always shine. I hope you adjust your mentality as soon as possible and you will find that the sky is bluer.
7. It’s true that “writing is like a god”. It seems that you must have read a lot of literature. Such rich content shows your literary skills. It's just that if the materials are adjusted in a certain logical order, this article will be more exciting.
8. After reading your article, it feels like a stream is flowing in front of me, pure and lovely. I hope you can maintain this style of writing and express rich connotations in pure language.
9. Composition is like being a human being. From your life experience, it can be seen that you are a positive and motivated young man. You have your own unique insights into things and have a profound understanding, which is really valuable.
10. This article uses specific examples, vivid and beautiful language, and novel and unique writing methods to express sincere praise for the beautiful soul.
11. With pious praises, profound lamentations, true words every word, true feelings every sentence, pouring out joys and sorrows, weighing gains and losses, the young author tailors the classroom to the needs of the poet's language and the vision of a philosopher. The whole article is like a sculpture full of artistic courage, broad and deep, strong and vigorous, simple and natural, reflecting the author's superb language control ability, solid mind and keen aura. The exquisite language, rigorous structure, profound thinking, and extensive knowledge are all pleasing to the eye.
12. Xu Pengfei, when the teacher was appreciating your masterpiece today, he was so nervous and excited. It's like being in that fierce competition field. You have a strong sense of patriotism. How could you have woken up from your sweet sleep at 4 a.m. to watch the live broadcast if you weren't so young? You observed carefully, and you clearly reflected the exciting scene in the text.
13. You read widely and accumulate a lot of words and sentences. Therefore, when describing the characters' movements and expressions, they can be expressed vividly with appropriate words. Teachers are happy to have students like you. Just keep trying. Your dream of becoming a writer will surely come true.
14. Your extracurricular life is really exciting. From your essay, the teacher knows that you are a good chess player. Not only is his chess skills good, his chess style is even better. I’ll learn a trick from you anytime. If you study for a few more years and participate in a chess competition, you will definitely win a prize.
15. The corner of the campus you wrote is so beautiful. The flowers, the grass, the trees, and the corridor all contain incomparable affection. You are a person who knows how to observe and live. Teachers and classmates all appreciate you!
16. This article uses... as a clue. The article on rights of use is coherent, fluent, and naturally connected. At the same time, it compares specific examples before and after. Criticized..., the language of the article is vivid and rich, and it is highly readable.
17. Able to have reasonable imagination and reflect meaningful philosophy...The writing is smooth and concise, giving full play to one's imagination. It is a good...The article is elegant, smooth and coherent, especially The characters' language is humorous, and the use of some exquisite words virtually adds a lot of interest to the article.
18. There are many noteworthy sentences in the whole text, which adds some literary interest to the article.
19. The storyline of this article may not be particularly attractive. , but it is still a successful article. Firstly, it portrays the image of the character well. Secondly, the language is vivid and rich, with a strong flavor of life, which has a good effect of expressing expressions
20. Article It ends with..., it is concise and concise, but its meaning is endless. Civilized Sacrifice Green Qingming Composition Comments 2
1. The article is complex but not chaotic, and can be detailed and focused.
2. The article renders the atmosphere of... fully and appropriately, and depicts the key points of the article in a delicate and vivid manner.
3. ...It is realistic and contains simple and profound philosophy. It is inspiring and exciting to read.
4. This article is full of passion, and you can feel the author's love for... from between the lines. The full text is clear in level and the sentences are fluent.
5. The case description is vivid, specific, interesting, and consistent with the previous metaphor... Finally, the author uses a few words to express his feelings about..., which is touching.
6. The article is coherent and forms a complete image.
7. The language of the article is fresh and lively, the description can capture the main characteristics of things, the length is short and concise, and it is worth reading.
8. The content of this article is vivid and rich, the language is novel and refreshing, and the structure is unique and reasonable.
9. The article is detailed, well-organized, and the content is vivid and concrete. It can be regarded as an excellent article.
10. The close-ups are unique and interesting. The full text is full of childlike innocence and fun, and makes you feel cordial when reading it.
11. The article can use fresh and interesting language to describe... The words between the lines are full of the true childishness of childhood, and the laughter is endless. It can be regarded as a masterpiece.
12. Appropriate detail and the coexistence of reality and fiction are the two major features of this article. The content is richer and more vivid.
13. The full text is fresh and elegant, friendly and tactful, simple but not vulgar, and it is worth reading.
14. The language of the full text is vivid and accurate, and the plot is exciting and twists and turns, as if it brings readers into a happy paradise, making people smile.
15. The full text is easy to understand and interesting.
16. The full text is clear, vivid, compact and interesting.
17. The detailed description is quite original. Very knowledgeable.
18. Carefully and delicately describe the characters’ language, demeanor, movements, etc. This is a major feature of this article.
19. The description is delicate, the flavor of life is strong, and the words and sentences are accurate and expressive.
20. The language is accurate, clear and vivid, and the content is extremely rich and specific. Civilized Sacrifice Green Qingming Composition Comments 3
1. With full passion, it describes...
2. The key points are highlighted, the details are appropriate, and the content is specific.
3. The metaphor is appropriate and the words are vivid.
4. The language of the article is easy to understand, close to the reality of life, and makes people feel warm when reading it.
5. ...tells it to us in a relaxed and pleasant tone, which is endlessly memorable.
6. The narrative is natural and vivid, the structure is compact, the connection is natural and coherent, and the center is prominent.
7. When describing the scenery, the language is concise and accurate, and the association is to touch the scenery and evoke emotions, and the scenes are naturally integrated.
8. By enriching the character’s language and actions, you can bring out the character’s ideological quality.
9. The article is both narrative and lyrical.
10. Make full use of a combination of dynamic and static writing, supplemented by metaphors, personification and other techniques.
11. The author observes carefully and narrates in an orderly manner.
12. The use of some exquisite words virtually adds a lot of interest to the article.
13. The article is elegant, smooth and coherent, especially the characters’ language is humorous.
14. The imagination of the article is reasonable.
15. Through vivid and vivid language description, readers feel as if they are in a dream.
16. The article has clear clues, prominent themes, and closely revolves around...
17. The detailed description is quite original. Very knowledgeable.
18. The author has a clever conception, is good at selecting points to expand on, and the writing is full of ups and downs and is thought-provoking.
19. The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, making it full of wit and fun. It makes you put it down after reading it.
20. The full text is narrated in a concentrated manner, with no branches or branches, simple and smooth language, and sincere and touching feelings. Civilized Sacrifice Green Qingming Composition Comments 4
1. It is realistic and contains simple and profound philosophy. It is inspiring and exciting to read.
2. The full text has a lively rhythm, fresh language, and is always full of humor and fun. It is endless fun to read.
3. The article describes the events of... in the order of their development. The language is relatively fluent, the levels are clear, and it seems enjoyable from beginning to end.
4. Reading your article is really a pleasure. First of all, the pleasure of thinking and feeling comes from the profound and fresh ideas of your article. As the saying goes, "When you climb a mountain, you will be full of love. When you look at the sea, your meaning will overflow in the sea." You are a thoughtful person in life. You have moved others with your true feelings. This is the greatest success of your composition.
5. Your elegant and refined handwriting reveals your intelligence and wisdom. Striving for stability while being down-to-earth is the direction of your future writing efforts
6. Careful conception and profound thinking show that You are growing in the world of writing. The road to writing in the future is still very long. I hope you can think hard and innovate continuously.
7. The language of the whole text is fluent, the writing is relaxed and natural, and it can be regarded as a relatively successful work.
8. Although the language is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, the emotions are rich and true, and it is enjoyable to read.
9. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author has a very deep and thorough understanding of the original text. The language of the full text is sonorous and powerful, and it makes people excited and excited when reading it.
10. This composition uses novel materials, wonderful ideas, and vivid language. The fresh breath of life and children's interest are revealed between the lines.