2. I love autumn, her sky is clear, her clouds are bright and clear, her rich fruits and dancing leaves.
3. I see the responsibility engraved with the mark of youth on my shoulders, and I know who I am working for-just to make everyone have a beautiful lakeside hometown like me.
In summer, the wind by the lake is very strong, which blows away my messy hair, confuses the order of the grassland by the lake and blows away my tiredness for this land.
There are blue sky and white clouds, beautiful winding sky and beautiful river below, and the scenery there is so beautiful.
6. In spring, the sun is shining and the weather is fine; In spring, everything recovers and is as clean as washing; Spring is full of vigor and vitality.
The cold wind blew mercilessly, leaving a mark on my face. The trunks on both sides of the road are swaying in the wind, just like the devil's claws are stretching.
8. The garden is red and beautiful; Miss Liu has long hair and swings back and forth in the wind. Naughty willow branches are playing with the spring breeze.
9. Spring girl came to nature with vigorous steps. Under his call, everything woke up like a slightly blooming bud. What a wonderful picture it is!
10, that little red flower, against the fog, is not bright at all, with red in white. White flowers are looming in the fog, and golden stamens are looming like little stars, making the vast fog more beautiful.
1 1, a light suddenly appeared in the dark sky. It turned out that the moon came out and she was smiling at people who had been working in the dark since morning!
12, the grass is endless; Flowers also include blooming, twisting graceful posture and showing beauty.
13, in a short time, after the rain cleared, the sky hung its favorite ornament-rainbow with a smile. Rainbow makes the sky more beautiful after the rain.
14, on the right is a majestic and unyielding bonsai, as tall and powerful as a general. Their branches are thick and strong, and those leaves are as sharp as their weapons.
15, a gust of wind roared by, but they still stood upright, not afraid of power and enemies, standing on the sand.
16, there are many flowers and plants in the garden, such as red roses like fire, pink roses like sunset, gorgeous Jin Juhua and sweet-scented osmanthus. ...
17, watching the flowers and plants flourish, the poplar turned around and spit out small tongue; Willow will spit out yellow buds, just like a newborn duck.
18, weather-beaten bark, vicissitudes of life, yellowing branches and leaves in green, set off their perseverance and calmness, wisdom and courage.
19 After a while, a cow appeared in the sky, with its head facing south and its tail facing west. The cow knelt as if pleading with other wild animals. After two or three seconds, the cow became blurred.
20. Everything in front of us is shrouded in a misty veil-like morning mist. The sun rises slowly, only a blush is seen in the fog, and a faint red light is emitted in confusion.
2 1, the grass comes out of the ground, pops out its little head, lets it suck the dew of spring and enjoy the embrace of the mother of spring.
22. Those twinkling stars are so peaceful. They are like bright big eyes and bright silver lamps. They look at me and light me up, which makes me have many fantasies. ...
23. Miss Qiu came to the world. Surrounded by milky fog, Miss Qiu came out the same day waving colored pens. After the fog cleared. To the surprise of sunrise, the world is magnificent!
24. In autumn, in some people's eyes, there always seem to be fallen leaves and bare branches on the ground, which is a bleak and lonely scene.
2. A good sentence, 1, is helpful for writing. Elegance is fleeting sand, and old age is a period of time.
1 finally covered the world for the misty rain in the south of the Yangtze River. After the glory of China, it was just a scene, and the mountains and rivers were silent forever. -2,000 years of fame, I buried you all my life, a delicate country, a ridiculous life without a king.
-three phoenixes that once played here, so that this place was named after them. Those who failed to keep the appointment waited all night. From then on, Wan Li cried. -4 bemoan the tears of beauty, the death of heroes, and the sufferings of the world.
Mountains and rivers are always silent, how can we be happy? -5 Fenghua refers to quicksand, and old age is a period of time.
Six nights of rain turned the sky blue. Some people can create surprises without gestures.
Remember, the rosewood is still there, and I didn't go. -8 Who sighs in the years?
-9 Han Xiao is vast, full of prosperity and sadness, frowning, destined to be a thing of the past. -10 the world of mortals began to fill, and the mountains and rivers were boundless.
Facing the initial heart, smashing nightmares is impermanent, and life is unparalleled. -1 1 Jiangnan figure, Tian Shui Bi Cheng, Tianjiao's wish goes against his body.
-12 mountains and rivers meet and smile for you. -13 If it is bumpy, there is no regret.
-14 The past events covered by years are fleeting and covered with a touch of sadness. -15 Flowers covered by years are fleeting and blank.
-16 is gone, and I am still guarding you on the other side. -17 those prosperous sorrows will eventually become the past. Please don't be disappointed. Ordinary is for the most beautiful.
-18 Your journey will never see my old age again. -19 When Long song cries, for those promises that can't be fulfilled and for the deepest love in life, it will eventually turn into a cloud.
-20 Walking in the sky with you, there are flowers everywhere. -2 1 I am young and energetic.
-22 You should remember that year, weeping willows in the east of Mozi Los Angeles, Na Yue. -23 the vast land is broken with a sword, where there is prosperity, where there is singing.
-24 Send a song to Jun, regardless of the end of the song. -25 Who scattered the cigarettes and the vertical and horizontal ties? Listen to the string and break three thousand infatuations.
-26 The breeze is wet, and the tea smoke blows. Relive the old dream, the old friend has gone.
-27 Fire-dyed Maple Forest, song month, Qionghu, the first floor of Long song. Every year, before and after the flowers, a statue of mellow wine.
Water falls red-violet, only jade Qing heard it, but the situation is still the same. -28 Yuzhu once wrote about the Phoenix Tour, where people go to the empty building and water goes to the empty building.
-29 He smiled and ruined himself in the years. -30 can also quietly drink tea and crush this scene, bustling fireworks.
-3 1 The glitz of the world of mortals is fleeting. -32 I'm not me. You turn around and walk away. It's not me in Suzhou.
-33 a few sighs, generations of joys and sorrows, ridiculous, life is up to me. After a fleeting dream of -34, I turned to the water to watch the fireworks bloom into a full moon.
Life is like a flash in the pan, just suddenly. However, I have lived a long time, but I can remember what you said.
English study. The fog dispersed over a long period of time, and I woke up. I finally saw the truth. This is Qian Fan's silence. This paper is a little old and fuzzy.
But every sketch, every trace, seems to record the yearning that spans thousands of years. At both ends of life, we stood on each other's shore.
-39 the fate of gathering and parting is like water, just for one sentence, waiting for the next encounter. -40 cling to the old, imprison time and space, and suddenly it comes to the end of time -4 1 People will never see through the mirror, but I mean a thousand years in the world, like an instant.
-42 seeing each other late and getting drunk is the leading edge, and it is stormy. -43 Illusion is boundless, once met, it will never be forgotten.
What's wrong with leaving a smile when you don't know your host? ——44 The world is out of my generation, first entering the rivers and lakes, and being urged by years; Talking and laughing, you can't live a drunken life.
-45 wins and loses, and worries and resentments. If you have wine today, you will be drunk, and tomorrow you will be worried. -46 I know that this love will not have any result, but it can comfort my soul! .
-47 Looking at the sun and the moon that day, there was silence. Green mountains and green waters, stretching from generation to generation; Just like in my heart, you never left, never changed. That's it, mountains and rivers will never see each other again.
-49 people are empty, why forget each other, why laugh and be surprised. -50 don't look back, why don't you forget.
Since there is no chance, there is no need to call names. Today, everything is like water.
Tomorrow night, you will be a stranger. -5 1 doomed to meet, but unable to come together. I hope we can remember each other.
Knowing each other is lucky, but being together is not lucky. The sky is vast and the moon is bright, and it lasts forever. -52 A brief encounter is too slow to fall in love. I'm in a dilemma. Can I go ashore later after the reunion? -53 days of cold and old age, the vicissitudes of the world are crying, so I can't let go of the morning. I lit the tears, dried them, and my pillow lingered. My heart is far away. Nothing, nothing.
-56 If I speak first, will the days still flow like water? -57 Maybe it's the marriage in the last life, maybe it's the fate in the next life. The encounter in this life only adds to the fruitless feud. -58 human nature is deep, and it is not worth missing half. The sea is still limited, and acacia is boundless.
-59 drunk watching others in pairs, -60 no one is playing with acacia tears. -6 1 How do you know that all roads lead to the same goal? Xun Mei will stop looking back at the end of the day. A chivalrous man should not marry lightly, and a beautiful woman should not ally herself lightly, lest she die for me.
-63 people have become different, but today is not yesterday, autumn is still old and people are thin. It's still cold in the sound of light and shadow, and it's still cold in the water. In the dream, the bamboo and silk sang softly outside the building, and the outsiders did not return to the wild goose. Looking back, it's too early to forget Chuanqin, Lacrimosa. Where is the river in the flute cold window? You gave me a tear, and I saw all the tears in your heart. Day after day, autumn after autumn, one generation urges another to get together and leave, one person is happy and one person is sad, one person is lying on the couch, and one person is looking for a group of acquaintances in life and dreaming alone. He will know each other for a while and sing for a while. I'd rather we never cared about each other, and I hope we never forgot each other in Jianghu. -69 The rivers and lakes in the dream are full of flowers, people come and go, and they are prosperous.
-70 began to miss the bleak years and splendid rivers and lakes that I once held in my hand. -And those who have loved and hated.
-7 1 I am on the other side of the river, watching myself come back, and there is no hope of coming back. -72 Spend Spring and Autumn safely.
I know. -73 The solemnity of moonlight, the spirit of music, everything is just an illusion, fleeting -74 Those figures, no matter how lonely and boundless, will never be forgotten -75 is always born inadvertently.
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3. Recommend some helpful skills for writing literary works, and read more articles by contemporary writers or modern writers. Metaphor Rao Xueman, An Ruyi, Xiao Si, Han Han, etc.
We should read more articles by modern writers, such as Xu Zhimo, Guo Moruo, Zhang Ailing and Lao She.
In addition, to improve the richness of content, we should dabble in literary works of different styles and fields, foreign, domestic, classical poetry, human geography, religious scholarship and so on. Of course, there are so many of them that you can't read them all at once. You can only read one or two of them, and you just need to know the rest.
Besides, you said you wanted to broaden your knowledge. I suggest you read some of the following works:
View of Ancient Chinese: This book is the largest collection of ancient classical Chinese. There's a saying about this book: You can read 300 ancient essays well, and you can speak without classical Chinese. Directly evolved from 300 Tang poems.
The Book of Songs: full of catchy poems, including elegance, national customs, whistling words and so on.
Contemporary literature depends on the Tibetan Canon, if there is only one life.
It's better to join an online literature society, so that communication can progress. I recommend Huayun Literature Society. )
4. Reflection helps to do things well. As the saying goes, no one is perfect, and gold is not enough. No one in the world is perfect. Making mistakes is not terrible. The terrible thing is that you can't realize your mistakes in time, so that your mistakes can't be corrected. Therefore, we should learn to reflect on our mistakes.
I often make excuses for my mistakes, but I don't reflect on myself.
One day in the exam, I quickly finished writing the whole paper and looked around. At this time, Zhang Ruoyu, who is sitting behind me, has finished checking. Seeing that the teacher was away, we talked about computer games and talked with relish. ...
Unfortunately, at this moment, Teacher Yang came over and was looking in from the window! We don't know anything, but we are still talking there. Teacher Yang flew into a rage and the volcano erupted. He pushed open the door and shouted, "What are Zhang Ruoyu and Wu Shizan doing? This is an exam! " This cry made my hair stand on end. I bowed my head in shame and pretended to check the papers, thinking: This is over, I will definitely be scolded, and maybe I will invite my parents! I'm worried. Why doesn't the teacher speak? Will she be next to me? My heart is jumping like a rabbit. Finally, "the atomic bomb exploded", Teacher Yang shouted angrily: "You two write separately, hand in your papers, and stand up!" Suddenly, an idea flashed through my mind. It seems that I haven't checked it yet! It's over. I will fail the exam.
The teacher came up to me, "Wu Shijun, look at your paper! Are you sure about your score? " The teacher glanced at my test paper with his eyes and said. The teacher asked me, "Is he talking to you or are you talking to him?" Without thinking, I replied, "He spoke to me first."
Later, the test paper was issued, and I got 68 points, only 68 points. What a poor grade! I think it's all Zhang Ruoyu's fault that he did so badly in the exam. But after reflection, I clearly realized that it was still my fault. If I had controlled myself, we wouldn't have talked. If I had realized the importance of the exam at that time, I would have stopped talking and carefully checked the paper; if I ... ...
Therefore, when we make mistakes, don't make excuses for ourselves, but reflect on ourselves in time to find problems from ourselves and avoid making the same mistakes again. The same is true between friends.
I remember once, we played football with Class 6 (7). We rushed up as soon as the game started. After several cooperations, when we were about to shoot, our feet suddenly went numb and we couldn't move. Seeing that the other side was going to attack from front to back, I gritted my teeth and kicked hard, but the kick was crooked. Later, my classmates all blamed me, "Why, I can't play football!" I was embarrassed by my classmates' scolding. I was angry and thought, see how I can get back at you. So in the next game, I made a deliberate mistake and let the other team score a goal, and we lost. Students are unhappy, but I gloat; "Bad luck!" Since then, the friendship between me and my golfers has cracked.
In hindsight, I am ashamed. This is my fault. Don't tell anyone. If I can reflect, correct and cooperate in time, maybe we can win the game. The friendship between me and my golfers will get deeper and deeper.
Through these things, I realized a truth: whenever there is a mistake, we should first find the problem from ourselves, reflect on it in time, and don't blame others. Only in this way can we correct our mistakes and help solve problems. Teachers often teach us: "We will blame ourselves, not others"!
5. Recommend some books that are helpful for senior high school students to write their compositions. I forgot the name of the magazine. I remember that the book is 16, not thick, about 30 mm It seems that reading and writing is less than 3 yuan, and it comes out once every two months, which is closely combined with reality. The composition inside can be called a model essay for the college entrance examination, and there are all kinds. In every article,
My composition in high school is very unstable, and I didn't find the book until two months before the college entrance examination. After reading the book, I marked the highlights inside, memorized them roughly, analyzed the format of the model essay, and then applied it. At first, one composition per week was stable above 46 points, and with the improvement of proficiency, the score was higher and higher. Later exams were all above 52 points. I got at least 54 points in the college entrance examination. Although I can't get full marks, I am still very satisfied with my short-term results in two months.
I have read many kinds of books before. In my opinion, prose poetry can make some sentences in the article shine, but not all teachers will like it after writing the composition. The same article may be 55 points or 35 points, which is risky and difficult to grasp. You can read in moderation, improve the elegance of sentences and increase the brilliance of articles, but remember that the key point is sentences, and don't learn to write. Readers and Youth Digest are totally entertainment magazines. The stories in them are just for reading, not profound, and the stories are too complicated to sort out. It is suggested to buy a book with composition materials, classify various examples, and there are beautiful poems in it, which can be applied to the text. Actually, I think it's better to be steady. If the intention is too deep, it is easy to digress. The teacher will talk about innovation, but what he didn't expect after writing it is partial, and innovation is too uneconomical.
These are the suggestions that I personally think will help improve your composition score, and I hope they can help you. I wish you good grades in the college entrance examination.
6. The books that are helpful for writing have graduated from the fifth grade. The stories that impressed me the most in Aesop's Fables were The Milkman and The Miser. The milkmaid in the story carries a can of milk on her head, and then she is full of beautiful imagination for the future. Completely immersed in my own imagination, the milk can fell off my head and everything disappeared. This fable tells me that unrealistic dreams will not bring you any benefits. So after reading this story, I understand that we can't just dream about our future, we must take practical actions to make our beautiful imagination come true.
The hero in the story of "Miser" got a big piece of gold, but he was useless. Instead, I buried it in a hidden place and went to see it every day, but once that person found it and stole it. When his neighbor knew it, he said to him, "Don't be sad. Bury it there with a stone, not gold.
7. Are there any good paragraphs that are helpful for writing? Reading landscape notes and writing novels describing scenery are indispensable to writing space scenes.
The description of a scene can better create the atmosphere that the author wants to express than simply describing the psychology of the role. However, it is relatively difficult to manipulate the scene to match the psychological story of the characters. Everyone knows that "birds of a feather flock together, and people flock together by birds of a feather", and each reader's perspective will vary greatly because of his age and experience. It's easy to delay by describing the story in detail.
Many writers will pursue "gorgeous" techniques in their descriptions, but they repeatedly find that gorgeous has almost become synonymous with piling up words and showing the author's personal accomplishment excessively. The closer you get to gorgeousness, the more divorced you are from the story. Ambiguous and inappropriate descriptions will become a stumbling block to another chapter's procrastination and unclear meaning.
So that writers with deep qualifications are not willing to hear readers praise "gorgeous writing" when they are sought after, but would rather be praised for their excellent plots. On the contrary, there is no description of the scene at all, or the control of the sense of space is not enough, which will give people the impression that the scene is abrupt and the narrative is dull.
Even if there is a good story, it will be as tasteless as eating chicken ribs. A friend asked me how to embody the narrative technique flowing like a lens in my article.
As a landscape writer who specializes in scene scenery, I will suggest some "shortcuts" when writing, which can simply fit people and scenes and complete the perspective description of scenes. Words that make readers feel picturesque are called "reading the scenery". )
Four elements of landscape reading 1, light/shadow: For example, "the sunlight scattered from the gray pillars has recently projected some golden fragments from the cracked attic to the deepest part of the virgin palace, shaking into a thin warmth. The quiet breath covers the earth just awakened by the morning light like a soft cloth.
When I woke up, I still felt the cold at night through the cracks of the light spots shining on my face. In Genesis, the first sentence that God said was "There was light first".
As shown in the above example, "light" is the focus of vision and the beginning of guiding sight. There is no physical sense of light at all, which is more eye-catching than the actual object.
Generally speaking, the appearance of light shows an important point that needs the reader's attention. And different light sources have different meanings and temperatures.
Just a few words commonly used to describe light perception, such as "flashing" and "dazzling", have given readers a sense of interaction with the role * * * "staring". For example, the simple release of the vast light will visually cause the feeling that time is temporarily frozen, and such "bullet time" can just create a sense of shock when an emergency occurs.
Making good use of light is to master the first step of landscaping-"striking". Example: "Blood dripped slowly from the fingers, and then fell into the black lake more than ten feet below, and the moon shadow on the water was faintly mottled.
I curled up in the shadow at the top of the stone arch built on the water, bit open the seal of the small bottle held in the back of my hand, poured out the wolf cream inside, and stopped the bleeding from the wound on my hand. The word "light and shadow" fully illustrates the relationship between shadow and light.
Where there is light, there must be shadows. Shadow is different from the first light, it embodies a hidden implication.
Many times, dark shadows will be the contrast of light, creating a more meaningful atmosphere. Just like the * * * in the music that prompts the next chapter, the hidden shadow is a shell that can cover up all the disturbing factors.
By describing shadows, savvy readers will be aware of the undercurrent under pressure, but they can't clearly point out the source of pressure. So as to be attracted and continue to pay attention to the development of the story.
Mastering the shadow is to control the "hype". Between light and shade, it is the code word mastered by the author. Through these words and expressions beyond language expression and expression description, readers can participate in the whole scene and guide them to understand the hidden meaning of the narrator.
2. Motion/stillness. Example: "When the soft voice doesn't stop, your fingertips will emit a ray of silver light, and the rushing wind will suddenly break out between your hands. The wind will roar like an out-of-control horse, and after the breath swings open, it will turn around and turn back. For example, when vines are turned upside down close to the ground, a layer of traces of thousands of poisonous snakes will be broken on the wax skin on the ground. Lightly barefoot, when you turn around, a colorful ribbon is wrapped around, and the epiphyllum suddenly unfolds between your hands, and your slender fingers and wings spread out like a bird. The golden light suddenly appeared, accompanied by a slight faint sound. In an instant, your body was flowing, and the north wind flew in all directions in the whistle. It broke three feet and collapsed in an instant. Stand sideways, put your hands together and stick your cheeks like a new lotus, and the abrupt wind disappears as soon as it appears. Without the support of breath, ribbons and wide sleeves slowly fell and hung on both sides of my arms.
Flowers dance together. There was silence below the hall, and some magpies were chirping among the willow branches outside. "
The so-called "attitude of the wind is expressed by falling flowers". The writer will describe the action to some extent if he wants to express the situation crisis or ease his mood.
But we must pay attention to the combination of static and dynamic. Moving, such as dancing wildly, needs to master the rhythm between opening and closing.
When making a dynamic description, we should consider the relationship between the trend and quality of moving objects in advance, otherwise it will be as fleeting as a blink of an eye, or as slow as a train entering the station, and it will be impossible to resist its continuation. Also, be sure to know at what point all sports descriptions will stop if they are collected at this moment.
Silence is relative. If necessary, dynamic assistance is needed to show the beauty of silence, just like birds singing in an empty mountain. The comfort of waiting after boiling water to make tea, or the combat readiness before crouching tiger pouncing on rabbits, or even the dead silence of the mainland after the nuclear explosion, are all different, indicating what the next dynamic scene will be.
4. Color: For example: "The Greek city of Ferra, a carefree white city. From the new port area to the old port area, there are houses with strong classical flavor everywhere. The alley here is very narrow, and the narrowest place can only accommodate two people side by side.
Although there are no street lamps, there is a shop selling small commodities or coffee every ten households, and the original white wall is rendered orange by the lights. The place where the aperture fades is not dark, but a smoky blue.
If you say.
8. The beginning and end that are helpful for writing a composition are 1. When I am in trouble, you cheer me up; It is you who fight with me when I need help; You gave me courage when I was disheartened. It was you who gave me care and warmth when I was sick and uncomfortable. You are my mother, my favorite person.
2. A monk was walking on a dark road and met a blind man. He was holding a lamp to illuminate others. The monk admired him very much, but the blind man said, this will make passers-by treat me like a blind man without knocking me down.
Yes, lighting a lamp on a dark road can not only illuminate others, but also avoid being knocked down by pedestrians. This is the effect of being helpful. Helpfulness is a good quality. If we help others, we will get help from others when we are in trouble. The more people help themselves, the more people help themselves.
There is a story in America: A farmer planted pumpkins well, and he gave his seeds to the villagers. Someone asked him, "Aren't you afraid that our pumpkins will grow better than yours?" The farmer said, "This is to help myself." Primitive as