"May people live for a long time, and thousands of miles are beautiful" is a wish;
It is a wish to "cut the candle at the west window, but talk about the rain at night";
"One day, I will ride the long wind, break through the huge waves, raise the muddy sails and build a bridge on the deep sea" is a wish;
It is the wish that "the spring breeze is proud of horseshoe disease and you can see Chang' an flowers all day";
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Different people have different wishes. What is your wish? Please write with the title "Wish". The style is not limited, and the topic is self-made, about 800 words.
Writing instruction:
"Wish" is a very big topic, which is not difficult to examine, but it is not easy to write a wonderful article. The intention of the article must be clear and concentrated, the form should be novel, and the language should be full of emotion.
As far as material selection is concerned, there are all kinds of wishes, and everyone will have different wishes at different times; The wishes that can be realized are beautiful, and the dreams and sincere wishes that cannot be realized are also beautiful. Therefore, to write this topic well, we must also carefully select materials.
If you want to stand out from many articles and make good works, you can grasp them from the following aspects:
One of the main methods is "big topic and small work". "Big topic" refers to a topic with a wide range of topics and strong openness. For example, the "wish" above is a very big topic. Your wish can be great and lofty, you can study for the prosperity of the country, and you can also seek happiness for mankind, but such a "wish" is often a mere formality, and it is difficult to write true feelings. For this kind of topic, we might as well find a smaller starting point when making up our minds, or express the main idea in depth one by one.
Another method is "virtual-real conversion". For example, "wish" is relatively empty, but we can turn it into "reality" to write. Don't preach the truth, but put your thoughts on a specific carrier such as people, scenes and events, so that the content becomes heavy and focused.
In specific writing, we should strive to do the following:
First, make eyes.
As the saying goes, "a well-written composition is half the battle", and an eye-catching topic is naturally the most eye-catching highlight of a composition. The topic is often large, so under normal circumstances, don't make the title of the topic directly. One way is that the topic has no title, but the content or center of the composition.
Topics about "wish", such as Chinese dream, reunion, my wish is flying, wish, my motivation, a bright tomorrow, a thousand and one hopes, your wish I know best, the distance between dream and reality, directly reflect the theme and are more attractive.
Second, let the materials be refined.
Our wishes are almost as many as the stars in the sky, but the length of a composition is limited, so it is impossible to use all these materials. At this time, you should choose the material that you are most familiar with and have something to say, so that you can write your true feelings. For example, a classmate felt that the forest resources in his hometown were seriously damaged, and finally chose to write a wish, hoping that people would protect the forest and protect the environment. Another example is that a classmate turned his attention to the historical process of mankind. For the liberation of the nation, many people with lofty ideals worked hard for the same wish. Because of the special selection of materials, such articles also have a dignified atmosphere.
Third, clear the theme.
The topic of "wish" can be spread out from these four aspects: what kind of wish, why there is such a wish, the influence on the characters after having such a wish, and what to do for this wish. You can write any or all of these four aspects. Where to write it depends on the theme.
Fourth, make the table stand out.
The topic of "wish" is very wide, and the content of the composition meets the requirements as long as it is related to "wish". You can edit horizontally, combine the fragments by montage, and show your deep thinking about "wish" from different angles; You can also connect vertically and extract pearls from the "running account" of life in the form of "a string of beads" to expand the rich connotation of "wish" layer by layer; You can also change your perspective, endow non-human things with human thoughts and feelings in the way of "personification", let them make a true confession and express their emotions about "wish"; You can also use the methods of sharp contrast, suspense misunderstanding, philosophical sublimation, desire to advance, detail description, etc., to break the linearity of the structure, cause ups and downs of the literary situation, reproduce the life scene, highlight the theme of the article, and thus arouse the emotional waves in the readers' hearts. Of course, change the style of the article, such as diary, drama, fable, fairy tale, self-report, title and so on. , but also fully display their talents and make the article dazzling.
Appreciation of examples (1);
Inner desire
I can finally go home for two days after the holiday, but where is my brother? He knew I was coming. Why didn't he come to see us? Seeing dad's white hair because of you, watching his fingers smoked yellow day and night, and watching mom cry because of you, how painful her tearful eyes are, do you know, brother?
Every week before the dinner table, you gobble up your energy, under the desk lamp, you and I have a heated argument, and beside the TV, you laugh. Your smile is so bright and bright ... now, where is your smile? Where's your voice? Where are your people? Brother, my brother, where are you?
You left in such a hurry! Yesterday, you read poems to me in cadence and sang for me carefree. However, today, you are at the end of the sky and in the depths of the earth. You are with the world, but you are separated from us forever. ...
Do you know how hard your departure has hit us? Losing you in our family is like losing the most beautiful and precious thing in the world, which is more painful than losing your life. As the saying goes, "sisters love each other deeply", so do brothers and sisters.
I saw your photo at noon today. How did my mother cry? Why don't you take a look? Why can't you stay with us? Look, what a confident boy you are in the photo! Now, what you have become, I dare not think, really dare not think. I know you don't want to leave. You didn't think of it yourself, and you didn't think of leaving us. I told you that I had to tell you the result of my mid-term exam, but you left before I took the exam. ...
Watching, crying, thinking and dreaming ... Brother, my brother, where are you? Do you know my sister's pain, helplessness and helplessness when I think I will never see you again? Do you know how boring and embarrassed I've become? I don't know why misfortune befalls us and why fate is so unfair! God, do you know how kind, filial, capable and naive my brother is ... The night before he left, he also said to me, "Sister, if I take medicine for two more days, my immune function will be improved and my illness will get better soon!" I asked who said that, and he told me, "It's written on the medicine bottle."
My brother left in such a hurry. You will never see 14 candles again next year. You walked so fast that your sister didn't even look at you for the last time ... why are you so cruel? When you close your eyes, you will never look at us again. Have you forgotten your ideal and future? Don't you want them all? You have gone, which has become a fact, an unchangeable fact and a cruel fact. I have too many regrets and helplessness in my heart, but no matter where you go, no matter where you are, I will always think of you. For you, for my parents and for our family, I will study hard, work hard, realize your wishes and give up my parents' wishes. ...
It is my greatest wish to see your tall figure and kind face again!
Teacher's comments:
Every sentence looks like blood. The little author's "wish" is very simple, that is, to give up his brother's "wish". Although the full text only points out the "wish" in the last paragraph, we can obviously feel the foreshadowing of the previous article, so the last point naturally comes. The little author is good at turning the topic of "big" and "empty" into concrete people and things, so he writes with ease. Simple in language and sincere in feelings, it is an excellent lyric prose.
Appreciation of examples (2);
Bird's wish
I am a bird.
My name is Xiaoxiao.
I have a little wish-
I remember my parents, my brothers and sisters and I lived happily in the big forest. My mother told us that we should serve the people wholeheartedly. Therefore, we peck insects for trees every day to make them grow healthily and vigorously. One day, when we were pecking insects at Grandpa Sophora japonica, we suddenly felt a shock all over, and then fell heavily on the ground, as if falling into an abyss. Grandpa Sophora japonica was sawed off by a lumberjack and fell heavily to the ground. Just when I was dizzy, I fell into a bloody hand again. Later, I was taken to an iron cage, where many of my companions cried to me: many of our companions were killed. The more you listen, the more scared you are. Try to fly out. Finally, we flew out of the cage that made us jump for joy.
My brother Mao Mao and my sister Xin Wei and I flew into the Woods and found Grandpa Sophora japonica still lying on the ground, dying. Just then, with a bang, Mao Mao's brother fell to the ground, and Mao Mao's brother said to us with difficulty, "Xiaoxiao, leave here with Sister Xin Wei, it's very dangerous here! Come on! ! "Fortunately, people don't understand our bird language. We left Mao Mao sadly and embarked on a new journey.
My sister Xin Wei and I are flying in the air. We dare not fly low, so we can only continue to fly high. Suddenly, a "black dragon" came at us, which was the exhaust gas from the factory. Xin Wei, who was young and weak, had no time to escape, and she was smoked by exhaust gas and kept falling.
After flying all day, I'm thirsty and hungry. Finally, I didn't dare to stop and find a place to rest until it was dark. I came to a pond, and I had ignored seven seven twenty-one. I squatted by the pond and drank as much as I could. Suddenly I felt a pungent smell in my throat, and it spread to my stomach, only to find that it was sewage discharged from the factory. I was about to open my mouth when I found that I couldn't make a sound.
Guys, leave us alone! Don't you want us to serve you wholeheartedly?
Teacher's comments:
In this article, the author expresses the common desire of animals and human beings with personification and the tone of a bird: to protect the environment and give fresh air to life.
"Environmental protection" is not a new topic, and the article can only strive for innovation in form. This kind of "true confession", interspersed with the tragic experience of "Grandpa Sophora japonica" and the bird family, is a wake-up call to mankind.
(1) Everyone has his own good wishes and lofty ideals. I love the performing arts, and my ideal is to be a versatile actor, to show my grace in front of millions of audiences on the world stage, and to bring laughter and joy to the audience. But that real practice made me deeply realize that it is really not easy to be an actor, and let me thoroughly understand what "ten minutes on stage and ten years off stage" means.
At that time, I was in the sixth grade and went to film and television performance classes in my spare time. The long-awaited opportunity has come. The teacher asked me to go to the TV station to record it. It is a topic about the knowledge of physical health in grade six, and it can also be said to be a publicity advertisement. I can't tell you how happy I am.
At four o'clock in the afternoon, we came to the recording studio, and the teacher gave us lines and assigned roles. This is a TV short film in which all the people speak Cantonese. The teacher asked us to translate into Mandarin. It seems simple to say, but it is not easy to do. We must focus on the mouth shape of the characters in the film, and you have to say what others say. Can't be faster than others, let alone slower. The director has a headache, too, but this is what we filmed. We discussed it all day and it took us an afternoon to finish the task. Then, we continued to record some other content until 9 o'clock in the evening ... I was tired and sleepy, but I was particularly proud because I finally became a "little announcer". I tasted the bitterness behind being an actor. Usually, in order to memorize well, we should practice tongue twisters, children's voices, Beijing accent and so on all day. In order to be more beautiful on the stage, we should practice, split a word, arch bridge ... and then practice all day to make our back ache. We all hope to have the opportunity to perform, but in order to prepare for the nervous primary school graduation exam, I missed the opportunity to record and shoot advertisements again and again. Alas! I can't help it!
But I believe that where there is a will, there is a way. I should study hard and work hard to realize my ideal. I believe that this is not an eternal dream, and it will definitely become a reality in the near future!
On my first birthday, I made a wish: I can touch the real snow myself.
Snow-white, cold, swaying from the sky, beautiful. Maybe it's the snow itself. I like it. People like snow very much, which is the so-called "Rui Xue" or the beauty of snow itself. I like more snow in winter. But what makes everyone sad is that there is no snow here all year round. To this end, my wish was born involuntarily. I hope I can touch the real snow. I hope there will be a good snow here one day.
Whenever I see information about snow on TV or hear it on the radio, I will happily get together with a few good friends and watch or listen to that "important" program. In our hearts, how happy we are to be able to snow, to play happily in the snow, and to get a sense of mystery from the snow in surprise. Although the snow makes people tremble and chill, it can't freeze our passionate heart for snow.
Sometimes, we also blame ourselves, why there is no snow in this place where we grew up and why we grew up here. Look, how happy and comfortable the children on TV are in the snow! They are having a snowball fight, having a snowball fight and making a snowman. They play and talk freely in the snow. What loud laughter and playful voices came from time to time. After the snow, the snow slowly melted, in exchange for a burst of laughter. The old farmer couldn't help laughing when he saw the smiling face of the seedlings in the rice field and put out the buds.
Is my wish your wish again? I must study hard now to lay a solid foundation for realizing my good wishes. I firmly believe that one day, I will realize my dream.
(3) My Wish When I was in primary school, the teacher left an essay topic, "My Wish". I watched the teacher sitting in the chair next to the lecture desk reading leisurely, so I tried to write down on the paper: My wish is to be a teacher.
When I was in middle school, my parents asked me: What is your wish? I looked at the cartoon in front of me and said: My wish is to be a cartoonist.
When I was in college, my friend asked me: What is your wish? I looked at the club information in the folder and said: My wish is that my club will become the strongest club.
Yesterday, someone asked me again: What is your wish? I looked at various posts on bbs and said: My wish is to make my club the most peaceful one. My members may not be many, and our works may not be strong, but we are United and happy, which is enough.
What is your wish?
(4) When I blew out the birthday candle, I wanted to make a wish, but I had blown out the candle, just like a meteor flashed before my eyes, leaving only regret.
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I want to make a wish that I will always remember my friend. Because when I make a new friend, when my memory is occupied by what I wrote, I may forget my friend, and maybe one day we will meet, but we just passed by as if we had never met, even if it was just a smile, it would be considered as having once. When I am lonely, memories can bring me great happiness.
I want to make a wish that my parents will always be young and beautiful. Because they will grow old with age, and I will gradually become independent with age, and finally leave them to create a world that belongs to me, but I don't want them to be lonely, I just hope they can be young forever.
I want to make a wish that all teachers can get rid of occupational diseases. Because teachers have trained us to be the pillars of the motherland and contributed their own strength to the motherland, but teachers' occupational diseases will have some influence. The teachers' hoarse voices and bent backs also hold the students' hearts. May the teachers be healthy forever.
I want to make a wish that I can become a writer. Because I have been passionate about writing since I was a child, I was deeply attracted by it from the first time I came into contact with it, and my love for it is as always. The award of my composition also gave me great confidence and gave me the motivation to work hard in this direction!
I want to make a wish. I hope everyone's wish can come true, so that everyone can have their own good memories and comfort their hearts.
Although I have blown out the candle, I made a wish in my heart. I want to make a wish, and all my wishes can come true!
dream
In the vast and bright night sky, surrounded by stars, crystal clear. I looked up at the stars in the sky, and it seemed to say to me, "Do you have a wish, son?"
Yes, do I have a wish? I looked at the sky and the twinkling stars. It's like talking to me, eager to be friends with me, listening to my wishes, helping me, and letting me fulfill my wishes with me. It is like a lamp, illuminating the calm night sky and embellishing the silence of that night.
A wish is a person's future dream. I have many wishes, such as: I want to have a pair of flying wings and fly freely in the air; I want to be a teacher and irrigate the flowers of the motherland. I want to be an astronaut and enjoy the magic of heaven and earth and the vastness of the universe in the mysterious space. Although these are far away, I will work hard for them. People often say: don't laugh at yourself in life, don't be self-defeating We should have an ideal lighthouse and work hard. Success will wait for you at that moment, cheer for you and cheer for you. ...
Recently, I may have made a wish. It is to lay a good foundation in study, study and discuss with freshmen, enjoy happiness in cooperation, enhance friendship and improve their academic level. People often measure a person's comprehensive quality level by his achievements, and I am certainly not to be outdone. Because I have a wish, I will strive to improve, and I may experience setbacks and hardships from it. This is not terrible. As the saying goes, "failure is not terrible, what is terrible is that it is difficult to extricate yourself from failure." Sometimes, I will use the song "Sunshine is always after the storm" to encourage myself to go forward bravely. Therefore, because I have high self-confidence, my wish will always accompany me, accompany me through many spring, summer, autumn and winter, share happiness with me, take responsibility and help me solve problems. ...
I have another wish, that is, to enjoy happiness. As the saying goes, "smile is ten years old." Of course, happiness is very important, it is like a mirror, reflecting your mood; It is like a book, telling you whether you are happy now; It is like a candy, so sweet ... Happiness will affect your friends and relatives around you, and your happiness is their happiness-happiness is an ocean of joy.
Let's ride the wings of singing, step on the melodious dance, and walk into the inner world of you, me and him with a steady rhythm, and feel different life dreams and happy experiences. Communication is an important bridge between our hearts. Let's follow the moving melody to understand each other's wishes and become friends with them.
Find my dream and realize my wish. Hope to grow up with me.
After quarreling all day, my heart is so tired that I can finally be alone. A wish suddenly sprouted in my heart: to be a hermit and live in seclusion in the mountains. This society is too noisy and complicated. I can't figure out why everyone is two-faced and society is hypocritical. I really want to live in seclusion in the mountains and forests alone, abandon all the glitz in the world, and not be tired of the world. Feel Tao Yuanming's carefree mood of "picking chrysanthemums under the east fence and seeing Nanshan leisurely" and "rejuvenating at dawn and weeding by the moon lotus". Although I used to think that Tao Yuanming was a restless person, his poems were full of complaints. The reason why hermits live in seclusion is to escape! Escape is weakness, escape is submission, but I also want to escape once, no, I must escape. I remember the first time I saw a dream of red mansions, and the first poem was: full of absurd words, a sad tear. Dou Yun's author is crazy, who can understand the taste? After reading it, I still feel that Cao Xueqin is too pessimistic and moans. Now, I finally understand his feelings. People in the world are tired of vulgar things and the world has lost its innocence. If you want to live in the world, you need to grow more hearts and faces, don't you? I have read such a sentence: a true warrior dares to face the shallow life and the dripping blood! I don't think so. Everyone has a different way of life, and you don't have to be a soldier to be respected! Suddenly, my heart was touched by something and said, "I want to be a detached hermit, even if it is a fish living in the desert."
One of my wishes: July 9, 2009 Author: Anonymous source: network resources
You see, a truck of garbage is transported to the open space, and there are "white decorations" everywhere on the road, on the street, in front of and behind the house. And it stinks from time to time.
The source of life-beside the water. Wow, the color of water has changed. Some are light black, some are yellow, some are dark green, and so on. , all in their own way. There are still plastic bags floating on the water, which really looks chic. There are pipes on both sides of the river, and colorful substances are constantly overflowing.
In the forest and grass, I only heard the sound of trees falling and the sound of sheep barking. The mountain has become a bare mountain, and even a small sapling is gone. Grassland has become a desert, constantly devouring every grass on the earth. But humans are still awake, cutting down, grazing and polluting. ...
One of my wishes is to protect the environment and make nature better.
For example, Wan Li's blue sky and Wan Li are cloudless, clear and transparent, and form a beautiful blue scene, which is really the connection between heaven and earth.
In the distance, the green hills are like Dai, and the branches are green. Dew on the leaves reflects people's brilliance under the reflection of sunlight.
A winding stream flows slowly forward and gathers with its partners to form a white practice hanging on the mountainside. Golden sunshine shines on it, just like a golden rain in nature ... nature begins to breed human beings.
My wish is to make "green" around us and make the world a better place. I hope my wish can come true.
Desire is like a seed, sown in the soil of the soul. Although small, it can produce the most beautiful flowers. Desire, like a stream, flows in the land of love. Small as it is, it can water the green hope. A wish should be a long-cherished wish that is extremely eager to be realized. It should be beautiful and good for others. It can be about yourself, relatives and friends, or strangers. The formation of this desire is mostly related to his unique life experience. The wish of children in poor mountainous areas is to realize their dream of reading. The patient's wish is to restore health; The wish of good people is to help the weak; The desire of the brave is to challenge the limit; Students' wishes are to be admitted to an ideal university, children's wishes, old people's wishes ... Of course, I also have my wishes.
Although my wish is not great, no, it should be said that it is very common, that is, to be a housewife.
If I become a housewife, I will use my skillful hands to cultivate every child into a smart, naive, lovely, clever and lively pillar talent; If I become a housewife today, I will cook every dish with my uncanny workmanship, so that others will drool and drool when they see it. If I become a housewife, I will use my careful calculation to keep my house in order and let the laughter in that room overflow from the doors and windows and flow to others' ears. I am here to attract everyone's attention, so that everyone can see my skillful hands, my uncanny workmanship and my careful calculation.
Once I asked my mother, when can I become a real housewife? Mom said, "To be a real housewife, you have to wait until you graduate from college and marry a good husband!" "
Now think about it, how happy it will be to be a real housewife in the future and have a bunch of lovely children, watching them laugh and feel sweet in their hearts!
Time flies. I'm eleven years old and in the sixth grade. Looking back suddenly, how many days and nights have passed, how many ups and downs, how many joys and sorrows, how many wishes have been realized, and how many wishes have been shattered. I didn't lose heart. I continue my life journey and my wish. ...
On my first birthday, I made a wish: I can touch the real snow myself.
Snow-white, cold, swaying from the sky, beautiful. Maybe it's the snow itself. I like it. People like snow very much, which is the so-called "Rui Xue" or the beauty of snow itself. I like more snow in winter. But what makes everyone sad is that there is no snow here all year round. To this end, my wish was born involuntarily. I hope I can touch the real snow. I hope there will be a good snow here one day.
Whenever I see information about snow on TV or hear it on the radio, I will happily get together with a few good friends and watch or listen to that "important" program. In our hearts, how happy we are to be able to snow, to play happily in the snow, and to get a sense of mystery from the snow in surprise. Although the snow makes people tremble and chill, it can't freeze our passionate heart for snow.
Sometimes, we also blame ourselves, why there is no snow in this place where we grew up and why we grew up here. Look, how happy and comfortable the children on TV are in the snow! They are having a snowball fight, having a snowball fight and making a snowman. They play and talk freely in the snow. What loud laughter and playful voices came from time to time. After the snow, the snow slowly melted, in exchange for a burst of laughter. The old farmer couldn't help laughing when he saw the smiling face of the seedlings in the rice field and put out the buds.
Is my wish your wish again? I must study hard now to lay a solid foundation for realizing my good wishes. I firmly believe that one day, I will realize my dream.