The first thing to mention is why we should write modern poetry. The motivations for writing poetry are different. Some people do it to chase girls, some people do it for dreams, and some people do it for hobbies. Aha, this is just a casual comment, I have no intention of introducing them all separately. . . . . .
Generally speaking, you usually do it because of your hobbies and then for your dreams. It's not interesting to chase girls, it's called fiddling with words, or word games, it can't be called poetry, let alone literature. Otherwise, as long as I divide one sentence of the composition into one line, everyone will be a poet.
If you really like it, I won’t go into details.
First of all, let’s talk about what modern poetry wants. Is the sentence gorgeous? There is absolutely nothing wrong with being gorgeous. For the sake of being catchy? If you can, it's definitely not wrong. For the artistic conception? Yes, this is the most important.
But the answer doesn’t seem to be over yet. Why is it gorgeous, why is it catchy, and why is it artistic? Style for? ...
Actually, it’s just for the feeling.
So let’s discuss the word feeling in depth.
What is feeling. When it comes to modern poetry, we only refer to the inner feelings, but this concept is not narrow.
If we read poetry based on feeling, and if we write poetry about feeling, then there is no doubt that two conditions are necessary. First, feeling must be able to be put into words, and feeling must be able to be extracted from words. be extracted.
So let’s ask how we write and read feelings. I am not writing that I am sad, the numbers are sad for me, the lake is sad for me, the land is sad for me, so others can read that I am very sad, you write that I am so happy today, the birds are also happy for you, and the flowers I am also happy for you, and the sun is also happy for you. Others can read that you are very happy.
So how does it feel to be read and written.
Think again about what it feels like.
Crying means sadness, and laughing means happiness. This is caused by the nature of living things, not by convention. (Is it nonsense?)
So where does the word come from? Is the word a common name? Maybe it is, maybe it’s not, it’s fine if it’s not. If it is, where does the agreement come from? Is it a feeling? I think so. Let's discuss some more representative words.
Pit Bian Dian, nine out of ten people plus one will understand the meaning of this word at once. Everyone’s understanding of this word is rarely from a dictionary. It is cute, happy, and action-packed. words. It reflects a person's character, mood, and even physical condition.
(War flag) Liexun, with the word Liexun, you will think of it as a majestic and strong flag, a dynamic flag, not a tattered one, not a thin one, not a static one.
Wiaowu, you will imagine the smoke, first, rising, second, breeze, very light wind, third, a wisp of smoke, not a large group, fourth, color, most people will think of this It’s white smoke, right? Fifth, chimney, few people imagine it comes from the window. Sixth, small house, not a big house. Seventh, far away, it won’t be very close, right? Eighth, green Trees, although some people will think of some desolate scenes, but most people will think of the quiet countryside, green trees, ninth, evening, even the word dusk is not perfect, tenth, it cannot be said that too many people can I thought there should be hills, but it must be more than one-half. One-half is a word I like to use. Sometimes it is more appropriate than nine-tenths, because it embodies the inevitability of probability, which is also the feeling.
Yunyun, you usually think of a hot pot, a cloud of white air, a dark room, a group of people who may be relatively poor, and the people around are mainly old people and children, right? Do you feel this way? , is it possible to think of a small window or something like that? . . .
Universe: It should be more likely to think of a starry sky, which is no longer the same as our Chinese universe.
Let’s just talk about these. If you are willing to believe my analysis of words, then I will start to say that the feeling brought by words is very similar to the simplest exclamation and laughter.
What does it come from?
It is a principle that animals of the same species must respond similarly to signals of the same species.
There are a thousand Hamlets for a thousand readers, but it definitely does not mean that some people think he is a shoemaker, some think he is a robber, some think he is an elf, some think he is a human, some think he is a human being, and some think he is a robber. Some people think he is a warrior, some people think he is a mage. . . . . . .
So a very important conclusion comes out. When writing poetry, especially modern poetry, the sentences are freer and the status of feeling is more concentrated.
Xi Murong's two poems, I have forgotten the details, they are probably about the young you and me waving goodbye in front of the fence of green trees and white flowers. It seems that I wrote it wrong and I was too lazy to check it. So do you feel in it? The weather should be sunny, and the sun's rays are very hot, just right for you to feel sad. I won’t say more as I get off work soon. . . . . .
After talking about your feelings, say a few sentences again.
Freedom does not mean writing casually. There is no feeling in writing casually. So how to write, just follow your feelings. . . .
If the feelings are to be true, the sentences must make clear choices.
Sadness and happiness are not shouted literally, but felt with artistic conception. Accurately triggering the reader's memories and innate feelings is a more literal standard.
If you have to choose, make sure you don’t write too much, which is messy and wastes ink and paper.
If you understand your feelings well, I won’t go into details about this. Integrating your feelings into your sentences will allow seemingly unrelated words to be integrated into your implicit feelings, through biological The *** can be read out, so to put it simply, the obtained part can be read out and the discarded part is an intuitive standard for selection. . .
It’s time to get off work, but I’m exhausted. It doesn’t matter if I don’t have reward points~ Accept it or not~
Look carefully, it’s actually very good! !
Accept or not! !