1. Grasp the author's travel destination and understand the general characteristics of travel notes.
2. Learn the different description methods adopted by the author according to the characteristics of each scene.
3. Experience the fantastic life journey of this drop of water by reading the text aloud.
4. Understand the author's feelings in scenery description.
Lesson plan 2: Complete the steps of the first class 1 and 2, and the steps 3, 4 and 5 of the second class.
Scene import generation problem
Water is the source of life. A drop of water, with a long-cherished wish, experienced a long darkness and waiting, a look on the waterwheel, a wandering in the river, and finally came to the Lijiang River, a square street decorated with flowers all the year round, a weeping river, from leisurely day to hazy night. Why does this drop of water have such a fantastic life journey? Today, let's walk into Alai's A Drop of Water Passing Lijiang.
Self-study and mutual research produce new knowledge.
The first step: comb the knowledge and lay a solid foundation.
1. Read the pronunciation correctly and recognize the font.
Xuàn the door.
Wandering (huái) Emerald (fáI) Yanchi (Yan)
Dip (zhàn) and wipe (sh √).
2. Remember the meaning of keywords
Stand straight.
Stroll: To walk back and forth in one place.
Vitality: refers to maturity and strength.
Colorful: refers to the beautiful colors, rich colors, and many colors are dazzling.
At a loss: dazzled and shaken. It's amazing to describe what you see.
Close to the author
Alai, Tibetan, 1959, from Marcand County, Sichuan Province. He is a contemporary writer. 1982 began to write poetry, and turned to novel writing in the middle and late 1980s. His main works include Leng Mo River, Blood of the Old Year, Silversmith in the Moonlight, The Dust Settles, Empty Mountain, Long Geography, etc.
Step 2: Perceive the text as a whole.
1. Listen and read the text (multimedia play). Think: What is the long-cherished wish of a drop of water?
The exchange of ideas jumped into the river and ran to the sea.
2. Write a short story about a drop of water.
As a "drop of water", the full text of the communication points out his experience of turning snow into a glacier, then into a drop of water, then passing through a post road, a Naxi village, a meadow, a sinkhole, a black dragon pool, Sifang street, a street storefront, a Naxi courtyard and finally heading for the Jinsha River.
Cooperative inquiry generating ability
The third step is to read the text intensively and grasp the emotion.
1. Look at the full text. If you draw a drop of water into several different scrolls, what kind of paintings should it be?
The exchange of "A Drop of Water" tells what you see, romantic and childlike. The natural landscape, cultural landscape and local customs displayed in the full text are as beautiful as landscape painting, architectural painting and folk painting.
2. Appreciate the "landscape painting", where is its beauty?
The scenery described in this paper-"Old Town of Lijiang" is taken as the center of the picture, and then with Yulong Snow Mountain as the background, Yu He Street as the clue and Little Square in Sifang Street as the trapezoid, Old Town of Lijiang's landscape painting is formed, and the movement of water is added to the picture. The whole picture has a sense of hierarchy, from high to low, from far to near, and the scenery is distinct.
3. Continue to appreciate Architectural Painting, where is its beauty?
Old Town of Lijiang is a famous city with beautiful scenery, long history and splendid culture, and also an ancient town of ethnic minorities. The streets, palaces, waterwheels and small bridges in the city have distinctive regional characteristics. Sifang Street is the center of Old Town of Lijiang, with convenient transportation and quiet alleys. Street: Built on the mountain, with the flow of water, the gate is opened to wash the street, with obvious regional characteristics. Waterwheel: The big waterwheel is a landmark building in Old Town of Lijiang. Small bridge: It has a long history, a large number and various forms.
Let's enjoy the "folk painting" again. Its beauty and beauty are rich and integrated. Where is it reflected?
People's activities are written less in front of the articles on communication and instructions, and more in the back. Traveling, building houses, grazing, doing business, playing the piano, watering flowers, chatting, swimming, gathering and singing constitute Lijiang folk painting.
The fourth step is to taste the language and explore the writing methods.
1. The article uses the first person to describe Lijiang from a drop of water and different angles. What effect does this writing have?
The communication is cordial and natural. Not artificial, fresh and natural, like the wind floating down from Yulong Snow Mountain, with cold but touching tenderness inside. There is a sense of empathy.
2. What kind of emotion can you experience from the scenery?
Exchanges and coaches love Lijiang, love beauty and love to give beautiful nature.
3. What's unique about writing this article?
The communication coach has novel ideas, unique perspectives and poetic writing.
Exercise in class to achieve your goals
Step 5: Summarize the extension of the full text.
1. Summary full text
Throughout the full text of "A Drop of Water Crossing Lijiang", the author describes the picturesque Lijiang and Lijiang architecture with regional characteristics in poetic language, and introduces the folk customs of Lijiang in vivid and delicate language, which gives people infinite beauty.
Expansion and extension
Tips for writing travel notes.
The most important thing in communication is that the clues are clear and clear; ② Most suitable: only focus on the key points; 3: highlight feelings; 4 the most beautiful: the language is smart.
blackboard-writing design
A drop of water passes through Lijiang) Landscape painting: Lijiang, Yulong Snow Mountain, Yu He architectural painting: Sifang Street, Palace, Waterwheel, Small Bridge Custom painting: tourism, grazing, business, watering flowers, natural beauty, infinite beauty)
Teaching objectives of Article 2
1. Mobilize and train students to think in association and imagination, and read the text in an immersive way.
2. Guide students to grasp key words, words and sentences, taste the language of the text and feel the implicit and euphemistic emotional beauty of the text.
3. Dig deeply into the individual life consciousness and national cultural connotation of the interpreted text, cultivate the self-confidence and pride of its national culture, and inspire students to assume the historical responsibility of the world.
Teaching focus
Guide students to analyze the text language and feel the emotional beauty of the text.
Teaching difficulties
Dig and interpret the implied meaning of the text deeply, and understand its individual life consciousness and national cultural connotation.
teaching process
First, import
Last night, I sat at my desk in deep thought. Lijiang described by Alai awakened my poetry and the distance. Just like a dream, how beautiful! Drunk, a sentence popped up in my mind: "Why not be a poetic ancient city person?" Even if you do it for a day, it is worthwhile to be poetic! "A shangri-la scholar, so understand my heart. Although I can't reach it, I yearn for it. Today, let's approach "a drop of water wears Lijiang" and enjoy the picturesque scenery of Lijiang.
Second, the infiltration of classical painting appreciation
Lijiang described by the author, the sun and moon in my heart, is a paradise with delicious herbs and flowers in Tao Yuanming's works, and it is "under the hedge of picking chrysanthemums, leisurely seeing Nanshan". What kind of scenery did you capture when you walked in Lijiang described by the author?
Please choose vivid or impressive scenes and characters, make reasonable associative imagination, and describe the picture concisely and vividly.
Tip: Pay attention to the emotional tone of the full text.
Default value:
1. Yulong Snow Mountain stands tall and straight in the infinite mist of clouds, with clear glaciers, crystal white snow and foggy air. "How magnificent Mount Tai is! ? Out of Qilu, green peaks can still be seen. The creator has endowed all the mysterious nature here with elegance, and? A day immediately into the dawn, dusk .. "
2. Sifang Street I stepped barefoot on the old street covered with colorful stones, as if I had touched the coolness of Lijiang a thousand years ago, smelled the flowers of every household and heard the melodious ancient music and sounds in the courtyard. "The moss on the stage is green, and the curtain grass is green. There is no Ding Bai who laughs and has a university. You can tune the pipa and read the Golden Classics. "
The caravan hurried over the mountains, sang with larks, danced with azaleas and camellias, and disappeared in the afterglow of sunset. "Wild incense is fragrant, beautiful wood and numerous yin. The wind and frost are high and the water comes out. "
Third, choose words carefully and taste poetry.
Lijiang has infinite scenery and pleasant customs. Let's chew the long poems of this ancient city with the joy of meeting Lijiang for the first time. Please read the text carefully, grasp the key words and analyze the linguistic beauty of this article.
Default value:
1. You, Xiang, Bei
2. Look, come, pass by, look, make noise
A Drop of Water, Lijiang Dam, Lijiang Dam, Lijiang, Lijiang
For example, "a drop of water" is hard to come by. With a long-cherished wish, it has gone through a long period of darkness and waiting to save energy for the upcoming long-distance trip.
3. "These people come from far away, and in those places, even in silence, their hearts are noisy; Here, enjoy changing songs, the night is as cold as water, and their hearts are as clear as a drop of water. "
By contrast, you can feel the tranquility and purity of Old Town of Lijiang's spiritual purification and settlement, and you can also feel the author's praise and respect for Old Town of Lijiang.
4. "When some thin clouds pass by the moon, it's like a silversmith wiping a huge silver plate in Old Town of Lijiang."
Example: Poetic metaphor, subtle association, comparing the sight of a thin cloud passing over the moon to a silversmith wiping a silver plate in Old Town of Lijiang, highlighting the brilliant beauty, elegant beauty and exquisite beauty of a thin cloud passing over the starry sky of the moon, which makes people sigh and indulge in the ingenuity of nature, as if they could see the author intoxicated with the beautiful scenery of Lijiang.
Fourth, wake up and see the true meaning.
I am above the brilliant starry sky, and the motherland and the world are in my heart. "The endless distance and countless people are all related to me."
We travel and study, not to seek anything from it, but because the world is so beautiful and human. We should appreciate it with our heart, touch it and live a happier life. I reflected on this article with my heart and benefited a lot. I want to share it with you. Please listen quietly. I hope you can re-examine the beauty of words.
Confucius said, "Gentlemen are harmonious but different, while villains are not harmonious." . "Harmony without difference" has become one of the core propositions of China traditional culture. It is not only a way of interpersonal communication, but also a philosophical attitude towards the world, the key to Xiu De's self-cultivation, the criterion of social communication and the principle of * * * between countries. Reading the text repeatedly, I read the "harmony" of traditional culture between the lines.
First of all, from a personal point of view.
1. Harmony between individual and self. For example, this drop of water in Lijiang, after insisting on the dream of visiting Sifang Street, experienced high mountains and flowing water, rapids and rapids, finally realized its dream, returned to the sea, completed its life course and realized its value.
2. Harmony between individuals and others. For example, tourists from afar have a cordial conversation and exchange news with the owners of residential houses. Another example is the family in the courtyard of the ancient city, where neighbors chat and laugh harmoniously. ...
3. Harmony between individual and nature. For example, heavy houses that rise from the mountains, winding old streets that go with the water, pavilions between mountains and rivers ... Lijiang nourishes people and people make Lijiang beautiful. People are like a pure and safe baby, returning to nature in the eternal and beautiful embrace of nature, finding a place of spiritual comfort and building a spiritual home like a child.
Second, from the perspective of national culture.
1. Old Town of Lijiang has realized the gradual integration of tradition and modernity. For example, the old man with white beard and drooping chest in Sifang Street in Lijiang plays elegant ancient music, and there are colorful nights when the lights are on. One flower, one world, one leaf and one bodhi, from which we can see the context of national culture protection and inheritance in the process of modernization.
2. With its eternal historical accumulation and cultural charm, Old Town of Lijiang has been selected as a world cultural heritage, attracting people from all over the world to visit and worship. Old Town of Lijiang is the epitome of the historical and cultural changes in China, and the pace of reform and opening up in China is also firm and powerful, showing the broad mind of our nation's self-confidence and tolerance and the wisdom of "harmony" in traditional culture.
Fifth, sing your hometown sincerely.
"Life is like a trip, and I am also a pedestrian." Walking in the world, we should not only look up at the stars, but also kiss the earth. The land where we live is as long as Lijiang and has a splendid culture. As generous and hospitable, we welcome Chinese and foreign tourists and friends from all over the world with a smile.
Please be an enthusiastic propaganda volunteer in Luoyang, the ancient capital, and learn the personification techniques in this article to add luster to the beautiful ancient city Luoyang and the beautiful Luoyang Flower Expo!
Example:
1. I would like to be a weeping willow by the river in the ancient city. The spring breeze caresses my face and soothes wandering wanderers.
2. I would like to be the Xia Chan in the garden of the ancient city, waiting beside the withered red flowers and not changing my mind.
I would like to be a cloud in the sky of the ancient city, and send a shade to the colorful fairy peony.
Assignment: 1. Review and reread A Drop of Water Passing Lijiang, and refer to the extracurricular reading list to complete the extracurricular reading.
2. Choose an article to read after class and write a comment. (Not less than 300 words)
Recommended bibliography for extracurricular reading:
I roam alone, like a cloud, william wordsworth.
Xi Murong, A Flowering Tree
I love this land, Ai Qing.
Zhang Kangkang's Peony Rejected
Su Shi's Red Cliff Fu