This is a poetic landscape prose. The article vividly and truly describes the mild climate, green mountains and green waters and picturesque scenery in Jinan in winter, and expresses the author's praise. ?
The layout of this article is very organized. In the first paragraph of the article, the author describes the winter weather in Jinan. By comparing it with the windy winter in Beiping, the foggy winter in London and the poisonous and loud tropical sunshine, the author wrote the "miracle" and "strange thing" of Jinan's windless, foggy and drug-free winter, highlighted its "warmth" and praised it as a "treasure land" with a unique style.
This is the main thread that runs through the whole paper, and the unique beauty of Jinan in winter is related to this. ?
At the beginning of the second paragraph, "it's not surprising that there is only sunshine" is an important turning point, which turns to describe mountains and water in winter. Before writing about mountains and water separately, the author used anthropomorphic brushwork to set off an "ideal realm" of "warmth and comfort", giving people the overall feeling of Jinan in winter.
The article firmly grasps this point, painting mountain scenery, watercolor painting and lyric in the scenery, which not only shows the beauty of Jinan's winter landscape, but also expresses its sincere love for the motherland's rivers and mountains. The article writes about the mountain scenery in winter in three paragraphs. First, write about the mountains under the sunny sun, then write about the mountains covered by Bo Xue, and then write about the distant mountains outside the city, so as to outline an elegant ink landscape painting. ?
The fifth paragraph describes the water color in winter. The author first wrote the green color of algae to set off the clarity and transparency of water. It also expands the imagination, blends the sky light and water color, and depicts the bright and beautiful colors of Quancheng. Finally, end with a concise, powerful and meaningful statement. The full text is arranged in an orderly way, with clear context and close connection, which promotes nature and better shows readers the unique features of Jinan in winter.
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Appreciation of spring;
The language of this paper is fresh and simple, which fully shows the main style of the author's prose. The author writes that Jinan is a treasure land, a small town basking in the sun, a mountain behind the snow, and unique water, which is true but not artificial.
For example, in the fifth paragraph, "What about water? It did not freeze, but steamed on the green duckweed. The seaweed is really green, and the green stored all year round is taken out. "
This passage vividly depicts the situation that the water temperature in Jinan is suitable in winter and aquatic plants such as green algae grow well. The language is so fresh and simple, as if it is homely, and it is catchy to read without pretending to be profound. At the same time, the author is very particular about the choice of words and sentences, which deserves our deep thought.
For example, writing snow is the same. It falls on the top of the tree, is embedded in the top of the mountain, wears on the hillside and is exposed on the mountainside, which not only conforms to its own characteristics, but also avoids the repetition of words.
In particular, the use of the word "lie" means that "there are some small villages lying on the hillside, and some snow is lying on the roof of the small villages". The word "lie" not only vividly describes the modality of the village and snow, but also cleverly takes care of the "warm and comfortable sleep" in front, which really has vivid effects. In addition, the article also uses a large number of children's vocabulary.
For example, Missing a Mouth, That's It, One White and One Yellow, Blown by the Wind, Sunny Days, Taking a Picture in the Water, etc. show the characteristics of spoken English in Beijing.