Comment on a poem written by a sixth-grade pupil!

Three paragraphs of comparison, one paragraph of praise, correct conception and positive progress! Rich in content and strong in rhythm, it is a poem worthy of careful consideration and can be modified into a good poem! The first three paragraphs (mainly from the perspective of primary school students).

Looking forward to, yearning for,

Stand on the highest peak

Is a strong overlap, inspiring, full of "juvenile hope." If there is in-depth guidance from teachers, it will be catchy!

At the end of the period, teenagers are linked with the hope of the motherland, which is contemporary!

Disadvantages are: the innocence of teenagers and some feelings are not coordinated enough!