1. The narrative is simple and rough, with only a frame structure, and the characters lack distinctive personality characteristics.
2. The details are not properly arranged and the priorities are not clear enough.
3. The content is mostly outlined by lines, lacking point-by-point description.
4. It doesn't match the flavor of the times, and the content is too old and aging.
5. The theme is prominent, the center is clear and the thinking is clear.
6. Clear views, clear likes and dislikes, making people clear at a glance.
7. Directly highlight the theme in the content, clear and to the point, without redundancy.
8. The theme is serious, the thought is noble, and the enterprise is strong.
9. The center is not clear enough and the concept is not clear enough.
10. The theme is obscure, the meaning is vague, and the writing purpose is unknown.
1 1. Although there is a central theme, the expression is not strong enough and the words are not true.
12. The expression is not clear and persuasive.
13. The theme is not serious enough, and there are still dross in thought.
14. The plot is tortuous, and the narrative process has a certain sense of ups and downs, which reflects the curvy beauty of the plot and is fascinating.
15. The plot is strong in faltering, and there are accidents at ordinary times, which can attract readers' attention.
16. The plot changes irregularly, with occasional suspense, waves and surprises. The development process of the event embodies the author's innovative ideas.
17. The plot develops smoothly and lacks certain ups and downs.
18. The plot changes are unremarkable and lack new ideas.
19. The plot is straight and there is no suspense. It seems to be a running account.
20. The process is very detailed, but the ending is short and incomplete. Unreasonable structure, giving people a tiger