Comments on the defense of moral education papers
1. The research content is realistic and operable. The topic is a hot social issue with a rigorous logical structure. The views are clearly expressed and the discussion is comprehensive. This language is concise and easy to understand. In the process of argumentation, the principle of professional knowledge can also be well combined with practical problems. But arguments are not enough. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
2. This topic has strong practical significance. The full text is rigorous in structure, clear in organization, prominent in arguments and fluent in language, which shows the author's solid language foundation and basic knowledge of translation, and the paper meets the requirements of the specification. The topic of this thesis has certain practical significance, which meets the requirements of bachelor's degree thesis for English majors and allows students to participate in thesis defense.
3. The topic of this paper meets the requirements of the training goal of administrative management specialty, and can comprehensively use administrative knowledge to analyze the practical problems of enterprise administration. The writing attitude of the paper is serious and responsible, the content of the paper is sufficient, the relevant reference materials meet the needs of the topic, the hierarchical structure is reasonable, the main points are clearly expressed, the logical thinking basically meets the requirements, and the language expression is basically smooth. However, the depth of argument is not enough and innovation is insufficient.
4. The theme of the paper is clear, the sentences are basically fluent, the levels are basically clear, and the views are basically accurate. The author organically combines the basic knowledge of administrative management specialty with Deng Xiaoping's administrative reform thought. The format is basically standardized, and the topic selection meets the training requirements of administrative management specialty. However, there are too few documents available for reference, some argumentation contents are not closely combined with the theme, and there are also some minor problems in logical structure. Generally speaking, it basically meets the basic requirements of graduation thesis.
5. The full text is entitled _ _. This paper focuses on discussing and analyzing the problems existing in _ _ _ _ and their causes, and puts forward some operable countermeasures. The full-text topic is novel and research-oriented. The structure of the full text meets the requirements, the logical structure is rigorous, the thinking is clear, the viewpoint is clear, and the arguments are convincing. The demonstration method is reasonable, and a large number of data are used to demonstrate, which increases the reliability of the demonstration. Can comprehensively use the professional knowledge of administrative management to analyze _ _, but the main deficiency is that the language is not very refined.
The theme of this article is _ _, which fully embodies the social value of the times and reality. The full text is divided into _ _ most parts. This paper first discusses gold, and then focuses on _ _-. The full text is basically discussed around the theme. During the discussion, the student made good use of the professional knowledge of administration to analyze and solve the _ _ _ problem. The language is fluent, but the point of view is not refined enough. In the process of argumentation, we can properly use theoretical argumentation methods and practical argumentation methods. Accurate expression of views, clear thinking and strong integrity of the article. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of the training objectives of administrative management specialty.
7. The idea of the paper is clear, the sentences are basically fluent, the levels are clear, and the opinions are expressed accurately. The author organically combines the basic knowledge of administrative management with the practical problems of inner-party supervision, and puts forward some better solutions to the practical problems of inner-party supervision. The literature consulted is closely combined with the theme, but the arguments in some places are not very clear and convincing, which generally meets the requirements of graduation thesis, some contents are not well combined with the theme, and there are also some minor problems in logical structure. Generally speaking, it basically meets the basic requirements of graduation thesis.
8. The references in this paper are sufficient and meet the needs of the topic. Taking _ _ _ as an example, this paper focuses on _ _ _. The topic of the paper meets the requirements of administrative management, with complete structure, clear thinking, accurate expression of views and standardized format, which can better use administrative professional knowledge to analyze practical administrative problems in reality. But the argument of personal views is not sufficient. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
9. The title of this paper is _ _, which is novel and practical. The full text has scientific and reasonable structure, strong logic and clear thinking, and the references consulted meet the requirements of the paper. The demonstration method is reasonable. The content of the argument is more convincing. The analysis of the problem is more thorough. In the process of demonstration, students can also combine the principles of administrative professional knowledge with social reality. Whether it is from the topic selection or viewpoint demonstration, it meets the requirements of the training objectives of administrative management specialty. But innovation is not enough.
10, the paper has clear ideas and fluent sentences. Can well investigate the problems existing in _ _ _. The author has a certain understanding and familiarity with the content of the paper. Clear thinking, clear hierarchy and reasonable logical structure. The viewpoint is expressed accurately. The research principles are appropriate. In the process of demonstration, we can effectively combine professional principles with the topics to be studied. The opinions demonstrated in some places are not very clear, and generally meet the requirements of graduation thesis.
1 1. The topic of this paper is reasonable and meets the requirements of administrative management. What is the full text? It is of great significance to analyze and demonstrate this theme to improve the level of administrative management in China. It has reference and reference significance. The content demonstration is more scientific and reasonable, the format is more standardized, and the reference materials are closely related to the theme of the article, but the innovation and arguments are insufficient, especially the last part of the article is too weak and unconvincing. Generally speaking, it basically meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
12, this paper studies the official accountability system, which can provide reference for solving the problems existing in the official accountability system in China. In the structure of the full text, firstly, the practical significance of the official accountability system is analyzed, then the dilemma of the official accountability system in China is deeply analyzed, and finally effective suggestions are put forward to solve the dilemma. The full text reflects the requirements of professional characteristics, meets the training requirements of administrative management specialty, and the references meet the needs of the paper's viewpoints and themes, and the practical demonstration is not enough. But there is not much real innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
13. The topic of this paper meets the requirements of administrative management specialty and fully reflects the needs of social reality. The full text is reasonable in structure, clear in thinking and correct in viewpoint, which can organically combine the professional knowledge of administrative management with the problems to be analyzed and demonstrated. The materials consulted in the writing process of this paper are not only sufficient but also closely combined with the theme. However, the format is not standardized and the case demonstration is not enough.
14. This topic is realistic, targeted and practical. The structural arrangement is scientific and reasonable, with clear thinking and distinct levels. Each part is closely related, the viewpoint is expressed accurately, and the argumentation content is convincing, but the article lacks its own original content.
15. This topic is realistic, targeted and practical. The structural arrangement is scientific and reasonable, with clear thinking and distinct levels. The parts are closely related, the opinions are basically accurate, and the argumentation content is more convincing. In the process of argumentation, the basic knowledge principle of administrative specialty is basically used to analyze the main problems in the article, but the reference materials are insufficient, the article lacks its own original content, and a few viewpoints are not profound and comprehensive.
16, the topic has a novel angle, clear context, fluent writing and clear basic views. The main problems still exist in the article: students have not thoroughly digested the information they are looking for and the arguments are not strong enough.
17, this article has a novel idea. Taking _ _ _ as a clue and combining with local standards, this paper comprehensively analyzes the problems and reasons of _ _ _. And put forward the countermeasures to solve the existing problems. Content argumentation also teaches scientific rationality. The full text fully embodies the characteristics of administrative management specialty and the format is standardized. But innovation is not enough.
18. This paper meets the professional requirements and reflects social hot issues. Therefore, the research of this topic is conducive to promoting the further development of _ _ in China. The full text starts with the problem of _ _, and then analyzes the reasons of _ _. On this basis, the related _ _ is analyzed. The full text has proper structure, clear thinking and basically correct views.
19, this paper takes _ _ _ as the theme, and the selected topic has strong reality and application, which meets the requirements of the training goal of administrative management specialty. The structure of this paper is basically reasonable, and the full text is divided into _ _ _ parts. The first part _ _-,on this basis, focuses on _ _. In the process of demonstration, students' reference materials are closely combined with the viewpoints and contents to be demonstrated, and the research methods adopted are mainly theoretical research and case study. Words are basically accurate. However, the main problem is that the arguments are not sufficient and convincing, and individual quotations do not indicate the source.
20, to _ _, for research. It can provide reference for solving the _ _ _ problem. In the structure of the full text, we should first adjust the basic concepts and ask questions, then make an in-depth analysis of the problems, and finally put forward effective suggestions for _ _. The full text reflects the requirements of professional characteristics, some of which are closely related to responsibilities, and there are not many contents that really belong to their own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
2 1, this paper takes _ _ _ as the topic, first discusses _ _-,then emphatically analyzes the reasons of _ _-,and puts forward effective countermeasures to solve the problem. Therefore, this article is closely related to the professional requirements, with scientific and reasonable structure, accurate expression of views, correct words, fluent sentences and clear thinking. The relationship between the parts is very close, and the argumentation method adopts case argumentation and case argumentation. The information consulted is sufficient and reasonable. The countermeasures to solve the problem still lack maneuverability.
22. The full text is entitled _ _. Focus on the problem of _ _ _, and then make effective suggestions for the problem. The structure of the full text meets the requirements, the logical thinking is clear, the arguments are sufficient, the viewpoints are expressed accurately, the language is fluent, and the argumentation method is reasonable. The reference materials are closely combined with the theme.
23. The structure of the full text is basically reasonable and scientific, the logical thinking is clear, the viewpoints are expressed accurately, the language is fluent, the argumentation method is reasonable, the references meet the theme requirements, the theme and content meet the professional requirements, and some of them are closely related to this part, but individual quotations are not marked, and there are not many truly innovative contents, and individual concepts are vague, which generally meet the requirements of graduation thesis.
24. This article focuses on _ _. The topic selection is in line with the training objectives and professional characteristics of administrative management specialty, and has strong pertinence and practical significance. The structure of the article is reasonable, the level is clear, and the relevant documents and materials cited in the writing are closely related to the theme, and the reference materials are relatively new. In the process of writing, the author can better use the basic knowledge of administrative management to analyze administrative management, and in the process of argumentation, he mainly uses theoretical argumentation and factual argumentation. However, the shortcomings of the article are unclear expression of some sentences, insufficient argumentation and insufficient innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
25. Is this article based on? Focus on the theme? The topic is basically in line with the scope of administrative management and fully embodies the professional characteristics. The structure of the full text meets the requirements, the logical thinking is clear, the arguments are sufficient, the viewpoints are expressed accurately, the language is fluent, and the argumentation method is reasonable, but the innovation is not enough, some viewpoints are not fully demonstrated, the format is not very standardized, and there are not many viewpoints that really belong to them. Generally speaking, it is basically qualified.
26. The topic is in line with the training objectives of the administration major, and it can better comprehensively apply social theory and professional knowledge. The writing attitude of the thesis is serious and responsible. The content of the paper is sufficient, the relevant reference materials are sufficient, and the hierarchical structure is reasonable. The main points are prominent, the logical points are clear, and the language expression is fluent. But the depth of the argument is not enough.
27. The topic selection is contemporary and realistic. The structure of the full text is reasonable. The expression of views is basically accurate. The full text closely follows the requirements of the administrative management specialty and fully embodies the characteristics of the administrative management specialty. Check out more related information. But the main deficiency is that there are not many things that belong to their own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
28. This paper studies the official accountability system, which can provide reference for solving the problems existing in the official accountability system in China. In the structure of the full text, firstly, the basic principle of the official accountability system is analyzed, then the problems existing in the official accountability system in China are deeply analyzed, and finally, effective suggestions are put forward for the previous problems. The full text reflects the requirements of professional characteristics, some of which are closely related to responsibilities, and there are not many contents that really belong to their own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
29, study _ _ _ as the topic, fully reflect the characteristics of the times. It can provide reference value for solving administrative problems in China. The full text is reasonable in structure, clear in thinking and obvious in viewpoint. What can be taught well in the process of argumentation is to combine argumentation with case argumentation. The disadvantage is that some arguments are not convincing.
30. The topic is contemporary and realistic, the structure of the full text is reasonable, the viewpoint expression is basically accurate, and the thinking is basically clear. The content of the full text is basically written according to the training requirements of the administrative management major, and I have consulted a lot of relevant materials, but it does not fully reflect the characteristics of the administrative management major, and there are not many things that belong to my own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
Selected comments on the defense of moral education papers
1, Zhao Jiayi studies hard, reads widely, has a solid professional foundation and has the ability of theoretical analysis. This paper takes Lin, a little-known crescent poetess, as the research object, and analyzes the influence of English romantic poetry on Lin's poetry, which has certain theoretical and practical significance. This paper discusses the occurrence and performance of this influence from three aspects: life experience, aesthetic system and artistic system. Clear-cut views and strong arguments. The paper is carefully interpreted, the text is delicate and kind, gentle and readable. The deficiency is that the relationship between Lin's mood change and creation under the impact of the times can be further developed. Generally speaking, I think this is a master's thesis that meets the requirements, and I agree to recommend the student to apply for thesis defense.
2. The new revision includes: the first sentence of the abstract, the replacement of key words, which influenced Jack's life in London and was reflected in his work The Call of the Wild? Superman? There should be further explanation. Some confusion in tense usage needs to be corrected. There are too many quotations and too few comments, and some references are not mentioned at all in the article, which is a difficult problem to solve. It is pointed out that London is a so-called superman and Buck is a super dog to illustrate the relationship between them and the influence of the author's life on his works.
3. The author made some serious revisions on the basis of the first draft. This paper has been greatly improved in content and form. Two flowcharts downloaded from the Internet that have little to do with the content of the article have been deleted. Part of the preface has been moved to the text as required. The conclusion part has been added, although the content needs to be enriched. Some references have been rearranged, but there are still some irregularities.
There are many mistakes, especially in the second half of the paper. The reference section still lacks the location of the publishing house.
5. Great improvement has been made on the basis of the first draft. Most of the major problems have been solved. In particular, the first draft has some shortcomings, such as the level is too thin and there are no examples of China culture. Many language mistakes have been corrected, but there are still some mistakes pointed out last time, such as courses and reasons. There are still some minor problems in the arrangement of references. The introduction still doesn't indicate the source.
6. As can be seen from the contents of the paper, the author has mastered a wealth of information and discussed the existing land expropriation compensation system and the problems existing in its operation. Then, on the basis of drawing lessons from the relevant foreign legal systems, this paper puts forward a more feasible solution, which is innovative.
7. The paper shows that the student has read a lot of references, is familiar with this research field, and has certain literature review ability. The language of the paper is fluent, the structure is rigorous and reasonable, the viewpoint is correct, and the relevant analysis and demonstration have certain reference value. The paper shows that the student has mastered relevant professional knowledge and has certain ability to analyze and solve problems. _ _, the thesis has reached the level required by the bachelor's degree, and I agree to defend the thesis.
8. The contents involved in this paper have certain guiding significance for solving the cultural conflicts of multinational corporations. The discussion was full and clear. In the contrast between eastern and western cultures, the author gives many interesting examples, but there are few examples in China. Most examples of oriental culture are taken from Japanese culture, which is a big defect. Another disadvantage is that the level of the article is too thin, almost natural paragraphs, and it is even more confusing if you don't read it carefully.
9. The title of the paper is basically the same as the content of the paper, the structure is basically complete, the language is fluent, and there are no major grammatical errors. The problem is that there are too many references and too little analysis. Analysis? There are traces of plagiarism. It should be said that the materials needed to complete this paper are already available, and the author can analyze and summarize the materials on this basis and draw his own conclusions.
10, the title of the paper is basically consistent with the content of the paper, the structure is complete, and the language is fluent. Even the first draft, except that the paragraphs are too thin, there are not many serious grammar or spelling mistakes. The author tries to find a connection between the author and a character in Jack London's life. From the content point of view, the author has a better understanding of the original work and collected relevant materials, but only limited to the list of materials. How to draw your own conclusion by analyzing the materials is the purpose of this paper, and it is at this point that the author's efforts are not enough.
1 1. On the basis of the first draft, some unnecessary paragraphs were merged, the titles of some chapters in the paper were redrafted, some sick sentences were revised, and mistakes in references were corrected.
12, the author's works have good practical application value, and the paper is carefully written and fluent, which shows that the author has the ability to engage in scientific research and agrees to defend the master's thesis.
13. The structure of graduation thesis design summary is complete, and each part basically conforms to the English thesis writing standard. The author tries to analyze the cultural conflicts in multinational companies from the perspective of cultural comparison between East and West, and find ways to solve these conflicts. In order to write this paper well, the author obviously consulted a lot of information, which was fully discussed and clearly organized. Unfortunately, because the author herself has no working experience in multinational companies and has not made corresponding investigations in multinational companies, her discussion can only be based on second-hand materials obtained from reading, and the so-called oriental culture is mostly represented by Japanese materials. To solve the cultural conflicts of multinational companies in China, readers need more cultural contrast between China and the West. Although the author added some in the later draft, there are still some shortcomings.
14, the title of the paper is very good and creative. It is understood that the author came into contact with Maslow's psychological theory in the study of business English. I first read The Call of the Wild by Jack London in my sophomore English reading class. In order to write this paper well, the author has done some research, especially the original work of Jack London. It is not difficult to see from the author's quotation of the original work that she is quite familiar with the content of the original work. The author has a serious writing attitude, and can complete the research and writing plan of the paper in stages according to the requirements of the school and the writing progress drawn up by himself in the opening report. Once the mistakes in the first draft from form to content are pointed out, the author can take them seriously and revise them repeatedly. Although the language is still a little immature, the paper is clear-headed, well-founded, unique and has certain reference value, which is a good article.
15, the title of the paper is very good and creative. The author studied Maslow's psychological theory and Jack London's original works. The main problem is: 1: I don't know much about the format of English papers, and the introduction part is both a chart and a chapter. The conclusion of graduation thesis is not good enough, and the arrangement of references is not standardized enough; 2. The wrong view is that the theory of human psychology is also applicable to animals. In fact, the dogs in Jack London's works are anthropomorphic to some extent, and they are superhuman or super dogs that embody the so-called will to power. In addition, there are some grammatical mistakes.
Comments on the defense of excellent moral education papers
1, the structure of the full text is basically reasonable and scientific, the logical thinking is clear, the viewpoint is expressed accurately, the language is fluent, the argumentation method is reasonable, the references meet the theme requirements, the theme and content meet the professional requirements, and some parts are closely connected with sub-parts, but individual quotations are not marked, and there are not many truly innovative contents, and some concepts are vague, which generally meet the requirements of graduation thesis.
2. The student has a strong ability to consult documents and materials, can comprehensively collect information about the examination system, can comprehensively use the knowledge of the examination system in the writing process, comprehensively analyze the problems existing in the examination system, and has a strong ability to comprehensively use knowledge.
3. The structure of the paper is complete, and all parts basically meet the writing standards of _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ The title of the paper is very good and creative. In order to write this paper well, the author has done some research, especially Steinbeck's original work. It is not difficult to see from the author's reference to the original work that the author is quite familiar with the content of the original work. The language is also very sharp, and the paper is clear-headed, well-founded, with unique views, which has certain reference value and can be regarded as a good article.
4. Paper comments? Pass the exam: the topic of the thesis conforms to the professional training goal, and can basically achieve the comprehensive training goal, with less difficulty and less workload. The theme of the paper is general. Students' ability to consult documents is poor, and they can't collect information about the examination system comprehensively. In the process of writing, his ability to comprehensively apply the knowledge of examination system and comprehensively analyze the problems of examination system is poor. The length of the article meets the requirements of the college, the content is not complete enough, the hierarchical structure is problematic, the main points are not prominent enough, the logic is poor, and there is no personal opinion. The title of the article is biased, the argument is not prominent enough, and the discussion can't stick to the theme. The language expression is poor and the format meets the requirements of the specification; Less possession data and poor timeliness; Some contents are similar to others' achievements.
5. Paper comments? Excellent: the topic of the thesis conforms to the professional training goal and can achieve the comprehensive training goal. The topic is difficult and the workload is heavy. The topic selection has high academic research (reference) value (great practical guiding significance). The student has a strong ability to consult documents and materials, and can comprehensively collect information about the examination system. In the process of writing, I can comprehensively apply the knowledge of the examination system and comprehensively analyze the problems existing in the examination system, and I have a strong ability to comprehensively apply knowledge. The length of the article fully conforms to the requirements of the college, with complete content, scientific hierarchical structure, prominent points, clear logical relationship and certain personal opinions. The topics are completely consistent, the arguments are prominent, and the discussion is closely related to the theme. The language expression is fluent, and the format fully meets the requirements of the specification; Rich references and strong timeliness; There is no plagiarism.
6. The topic is consistent, the argument is prominent, and the discussion is closely related to the theme.
7. The topic of the thesis conforms to the professional training goal and can achieve the comprehensive training goal. The topic is difficult and the workload is heavy. The topic selection has academic research (reference) value (practical guiding significance).
8. The topic is biased, the argument is not prominent enough, and the discussion can't stick to the theme.
9. The length of the article is completely in line with the regulations of the college, the content is relatively complete, the hierarchical structure is scientific, the main points are prominent, and the logical relationship is clear, but it lacks personal opinions.
10, the language expression is smooth, and the format fully meets the specification requirements; Rich references and strong timeliness; There is no plagiarism.
1 1, the language expression is fluent, and the format fully meets the specification requirements; Rich references and strong timeliness; No plagiarism was found.
12, the topic of this paper conforms to the professional training goal and can achieve the comprehensive training goal. The topic is difficult and the workload is average. The topic selection has academic research (reference) value (practical guiding significance).
13, the student's ability to consult literature is average, and he can collect relevant information about the examination system. In the process of writing, he can basically use the knowledge of the examination system and comprehensively analyze the problems of the examination system, and his ability to comprehensively use knowledge is average.
14, the topic selection is more contemporary and realistic. The structure of the full text is reasonable. The expression of views is basically accurate. The full text closely follows the requirements of the administrative management specialty and fully embodies the characteristics of the administrative management specialty. Check out more related information. But the main deficiency is that there are not many things that belong to their own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.